CID Written Update: Khooni Makdi (15th February 2014)

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Written Update: Khooni Makdi - Epi 1045 - 15th Feb 2014

Director - Salli Singh

It's my first written update as a backup since Shagnika couldn't do it. Sorry in advance if any mistakes please bear with me.

Scene 1 - Hospital

A young guy in a room. It seems like he is a mental patient who is talking gibberish with himself, who hallucinates hair on his arms even though it is covered with gloves. Suddenly the young guy sees a shadow of a spider on the wall and screams for help running to the door but nobody opens it for him. We soon see that the mental patients parents are standing near the window seeing the state of their son they get upset. We soon understand from them that the patients name is Siddharth and he has been in that hospital for 8 years. They ask the doctor that will their son ever get better...Doctor asks them to keep patient as their son is getting better day by day and will soon get totally better.


Scene 2 - Shopping mall

4 friends come out of the cinema hall and start complaining about how bad the movie was (Nirath, Meenakshi, Deepali and Ravi) Meenakshi asks her friends to wait for her while she goes to the washroom. While proceeding towards the washroom Meenakshi hears some strange noises at first she ignores them and thinks that it's her imagination but when she hears them again she thinks that her friends are teasing her and calls them but hears no response. Suddenly she sees a huge spider (The same one that Siddharth saw) she gets really scared and soon dies holding her hand on her heart.


Scene 3 - Hospital

A doctor is seen scolding the nurses since Siddharth has gone missing from his room. The doctor orders them to go and look for Siddharth all around the hospital. Siddharth's parents are also confused on how Siddharth went missing since they were standing beside his room all day. One of the nurses comes running back stating they found Siddharth as he was in the compound. The wardboy brings Siddharth back and he starts talking gibberish again mentioning that he found a spider and made friends with him.


Scene 4 - Shopping mall

The manager of the mall brings CID to the crime spot (Abhijeet, Dr Salunke, Nikhil and Shreya) Dr Salunke checks the face of Meenakshi while Shreya checks her purse and Nikhil takes pictures of the dead body. After carefully checking her through Dr Salunkhe concludes that there is no injury, poison or mark on her body. He then states the possibility of her dying via severe heart attack since she was holding her hand near her heart when they come to check her. Abhijeet is confused since the area was empty and there was nothing there which would make a person die of heart attack. He goes to speak to her friends and they explain to him what happened and also mentions that they heard Meenakshi's scream and came running towards the washroom when they spotted the dead body. Deepali mentions that maybe she get scared of something that's why she got a heart attack. Dr Salunkhe and Shreya support her argument and Abhijeet wonders what made her so scared when he spots a camera nearby. Abhijeet asks the manager that he wants to see the footage of the camera.


Scene 5 - Monitor room

Abhijeet asks a guy to show the footage before Meenakshi's death near the corridor. They see that Meenakshi is coming through the corridor looking scared and he wonders what she can hear. Abhijeet and Nikhil also see that Meenakshi points at something and then dies. They ask the guy to show them the other footage and get shocked seeing the 6 feet spider's showdown. Manager is also shocked and asks how this is possible since 6 feet spider cannot escape from anyone's eyes so how did it reach there. Abhijeet too wonders the same.


Scene 6 - Crime Spot

Manager brings Abhijeet and Nikhil back to the crime spot and states that all the cameras are working except a small passage. Abhijeet gets annoyed at that fact and concludes that the spider escaped the passage since the camera wasn't working there. Shreya comes to them and informs that Dr Salunke took the dead body to forensic lab. Abhijeet asks Nikhil and Shreya to look around to see if they find something. Nikhil finds a leaf even though there is no plant or tree nearby. Nikhil tells the others and assumes that maybe the spider bought the leaf with it. Abhijeet tells Nikhil to put the leaf in the evidence bag and send it Dr Salunkhe and also asks to bring Meenakshi's friends. Meanwhile he gets a call from Daya and asks his well-being when Daya asks about the recent case Abhijeet tells him not to worry about it since he has gone on holiday after a long time so he should enjoy his time there. In the meantime Nikhil brings Meenakshi's friends to Abhijeet for questioning. Abhijeet asks them about a spider and they all get scared and Nikhil says to them that the reason for Meenakshi's death was heart attack on seeing a spider's shadow on the wall. Meenakshi's friends get even more terrified and when questioned about it they just say that they were shocked hearing that a spider come in the mall. Abhijeet again wonders how it is possible that a 6 feet spider couldn't be seen by anyone.


Scene 7 - Forensic Lab

Everyone is surrounded by the dead body and Dr Salunkhe informs the team that there is no such thing as 6 feet spider in any were around the world. Shreya says that they have actually seen a 6 feet spider on cctv footage. Dr Salunkhe goes to prove his point through his research. He shows his papers and says that there around 40,000-50,000 type of spiders which are found everywhere except Antarctica. Abhijeet sees the research papers and says that the biggest spider ever found was only 11 inch long and also mentions from the report that there are many types of spiders which haven't been found yet. ACP sir says whether this spider exists or not he doesn't know but there is a connection between spider and Meenakshi's friends.


Scene 8 - Meenakshi's house

Meenakshi's parents are crying over the grief of losing their only child when ACP sir and Shreya come in and start inquiring more about Meenakshi and asks them if Meenakshi had any heart or other problems. Meenakshi's mother starts crying and says no not at all. ACP sir informs them on how Meenakshi dead. Her parents are shocked and say is not possible since Meenakshi loved spiders and had a big interst in them and also use to make projects on them. They also mention that since the last few years Meenakshi started hating spiders and destroyed any pictures she saw of them. ACP sir asks them the reason for her doing so but her parents were unsure and always asked her but never got a proper reply for the reason. Her father comments that maybe Deepali knows the reason for her intense hatred.


Scene 9 - Jungle

Sachin, Freddie, Pankaj along with some forest officers come searching in the jungle for hollywell (?) plant which Nikhil found in the crime spot. Freddie and Pankaj go to one side and start talking rubbish with each other when suddenly Pankaj falls down on a gaddha where there is lots a different type of spiders lying there. Sachin helps him up and finds a hollywell leaf from Pankaj's back and a torn shoes from the ground and they all assume that body was buried here.


Scene 10 - Deepali's house

Sachin, Nikhil and Shreya come to Deepali's house and start enquiring her about Meenakshi hating spiders. Deepali hesitates to answer when Sachin says not to lie since they found a gaddha and shoes in the jungle with no body. Deepali gets shocked and runs to her bedroom crying (Filmy style) Shreya assures her to talk to them as friends and tell them the truth. Deepali then tells them what happened 4 years ago when all of the friends went for picnic together and there was a friend over there who was scared of spiders (Siddharth - the guy in the hospital)


Scene 11 - Flashback in Panchghani

All 5 friends enjoying in the picnic (Ravi, Nirath, Siddharth, Puneet, Deepali and Meenakshi) when one of the young boys puts a spider in Siddharth's sandwich in order to get rid of his fear and tease him. When Siddharth eats it he vomits.

Back to the present where Deepali's father expresses disgust on Deepali while she asks for forgiveness. Sachin asks Deepali if she thinks that behind the death of Meenakshi there is a possibility of Siddharth being involved. Deepali is unsure and says that 4 years ago after eating spider his mental health went bad and he had to be admitted to hospital since he always thought spiders were inside him. Nikhil says that maybe Siddharth is taking revenge by killing his friends one by one. Deepali also says she doesn't know about any dead body in the jungle. Sachin and others leave from there and Shreya thinks that maybe Deepali didn't say the whole truth Sachin to wonders the same and proceeds to find more about the laash.

Deepali calls her friends and updates her friends about CID coming to her house and friends get shocked but get a sense of relief when Deepali says that she hasn't spoken the full truth but says the team when to the jungle and found spiders instead of laash.


Scene 12 - Terrace

Niranth comes running to the terrace looking scared and speaking gibberish about spider eating him. Niranth's mom comes to look for him but he sends her out. Niranth sees the shadow of the spider and in fright falls down the terrace.


Scene 13 - Hospital

Niranth is in the hospital bed and talking nonsense again about seeing the spider and requests his mom to save him. Shreya tries to calm down Niranth's mom who is crying seeing the state of her son. ACP sir talks to Sachin and concludes that there is a connection between Meenakshi's death and Nirath's fall with the prank that the friends did 4 years ago. Nikhil enters and notifies them about Siddharth in a hospital in Pratap Nagar.


Scene 14 - Pratap Nagar hospital

ACP sir and Sachin want to meet Siddharth but his mother tries not to allow them but ACP sir forcefully enters to see that Siddharth is not in his room and questions his parents stating that maybe Siddharth is acting like a spider to take his revenge but his parents disagree since he is captivated in the hospital room since last 8 years. Siddharth comes out of the washroom with mud his hands and feet. ACP sir notices and orders Nikhil to check if there is any mud in the washroom but Nikhil comes back notifying about no sign of mud. ACP sir thinks that Siddharth is just acting mad and is doing all murders in disguise. ACP sir again orders Nikhil to take sample of mud on Siddharth's feet and sends it to forensic lab.


Scene 15 - Terrace

ACP sir, Shreya and Nikhil enter the terrace to investigate and search to see if there is any evidence or clue left by the spider. Shreya finds mud on the railings which looks like feet shape and they assume that someone was standing there and watching what was happening. Nikhil takes out a paper type thing from a keel and when ACP sir checks it through magnifying glass he figures out that it's a piece of human skin. He also concludes that someone was standing on the railing and slipped while getting scratched from the keel. Shreya sees a broken flowerpot from the ground and assumes that whoever fallen from the terrace boke the flowerpot accidentally.


Scene 16 - Forensic lab

ACP sir enquires about the DNA from the piece of skin and Dr Salunke says the skin is of a 25 year old who stays outside is home 12-14 hours and his skin is quite rough and dry and the mud found from Siddharth was actually from outside the hospital. Abhijeet concludes that probably the guy is a tree climber who easily climbed the terrace. ACP orders everyone to find out people who climb trees


Scene 17 - Bureau

ACP sir interrogates Deepali and Ravi and asks them to say the truth which they hidden from them. Deepali agrees to tell them the full truth even though Ravi tries to stop her. Deepali says that 4 years back after Siddharth vomited eating a spider he started a fight with all the boys and accidently one of their friends Puneet got killed and they buried his body in the jungle and nobody went to look for him since he was an orphan.


Scene 18 - Road

Sachin finds a tree climber Hariyal who breaks coconuts and after ACP sir repeatedly questions him about bandages on his hand and feet. He replies saying that it broke when he fall from a tree. He finally says that someone paid him to climb the terrace and put a box in front of the wall to scare the guy. After a description of the box Sachin concludes that he might be talking about a projector. They all scold the guys and warn not to do this type of joke again. Hariyal says sorry and says that he got paid 5000 for this job and the guy who paid him was from city hospital (Where Siddharth is admitted) ACP sir asks him to show who the guy was.


Scene 19 - Hospital

Hariyal takes them through Siddharth's room to find him missing and also the parents. ACP sir orders to check the room but everything is normal. Sachin wonders that maybe Siddharth was acting for 8 years and was never ill at all. ACP says the fire for revenge makes anyone mad and they don't know what is right or wrong. They all proceed to look for him.


Scene 20 - Jungle

Ravi and Deepali and wondering though the jungle when they meet each other and say that someone called them here. They sense some danger and try to run away from there when they get scared seeing a skeleton and suddenly CID teams comes there and Sachin spots someone hiding and when they finally catch him it turns out to be Siddharth's dad who was burning for revenge with Siddharth's friends as because of them Siddharth was admitted as being mentally ill patient. ACP sir scolds for talking revenge as now he will get phaansi and now there will be no one to take care of his family. He finally orders the phaansi dialogue.


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