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Posted: 11 years ago
part 12
nice part...
interesting...
Geet is fine...
and her cribbings are cute...
cont soon dear...
Edited by spvd - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi my qus is specially for writer , can we continued other story if that writer give consult or without that writer consult he that writer was not active , i read one story before 2 year and that story is still in my mind and i cant stop myself for asking that so , waiting for reply

Mahimaan


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Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Part 13

Adi took out a chocolate from his pocket and offer to geet, geet get confused took or not took that chocolate but chocolate watering her mouth ... she just grab from his hand and start to eat with such hurry , all are smile on her and cursing that monster who make this innocent and nave girl life hell , adi got some tear in his eyes , he just went from there ...

Adi went to his room he can't hold his tear he just crying like small kid, he can't see geet like this , in age of 16 year she suffer so much , now also she have forced pregnancy , which could be danger to her health , just than some one put hand on his shoulder , and adi know who is that person , he just turn and hug , maan I can't see her like this how could her so called brother done this to her , she is so nave and this pregnancy ... i am scare maan , maan just hug him , and give time to him for cry sometime cry help us to pour out our pain so maan can't stop him after some time adi weep his tear

maan just give him water of glass and say are you ok

adi nodded in yes

maan you know first i also went with this feeling I feel so much helpless in front of her , but we have to become support for her , we cant show her our weakness our helplessness , we can't , we have to make her strong , I need your help in this

adi look him with question mark face

maan say , adi I just want to took her away from this place , you think me as cowered but no adi it is for geet she need change , for how long she stay in this house it is not good for her health as well as mind also , she live hear like prisoner and i don't want that adi , i want to see her like free bird and that cant be possible hear few day back you tell me that you have job for me in simala as painter in academy .. still that job is available for me you know when geet heard that monster voice in hospital she become so panic , if i am not with her she should be hurt herself in that fear , panic attack and i don't want to put MY pari life in danger again and again

Adi just lesion all maan talk silently , adi start to have doubt that it is not only care but maan have other feeling for geet , he really happy for maan , but he know maan himself don't know about his own heart ,and he have to show him mirror ,adi just nodded his head and smirk and mummer , Msk now face your feeling for my would be Bhabhi ...

Adi, very true maan you are absolutely right but I have one qus for you, and for job yes it is still available so don't worry about that but my qus is

Adi ... maan what you think about geet future

Maan ans ...means

Adi, you don't want to saw her settle with her family like she need study, as well as husband, she need partner also maan , you don't thinks so for how long we support her she need life partner, who support her who share her happiness her scare , and most imp pari need father in her life , think about it maan , and when we shift to simala , what should we say to that people about geet pregnancy , and now don't ans me like so called Bollywood hero I don't care about society and people and bla bla , it is qus for geet she have to face all this and it is not easy for her maan , she is so nave she need humsafer maan , not now but after 2/3 year defiantly maan but we have to think about it from now it needed

Maan look to adi with shock, still geet study it is ok but, life partner, family ...Husband for geet , father for pari , his pari , he feel ache in his heart like someone stab him , it only mare thought is so painful than how should he face reality maan just closed his finger in anger , geet marriage thought just boiled his blood , but he don't want to shout on adi so just went from there

adi just holding himself till maan exist from room and when he went away he make bahngra on his victory and say i hit right place MR MSK after some second dadi enter in adi room , adi stop his place with shock , dadi first make serious face to him but after some second just wink to him and start doing bhangda with adi this two soul are happy for maaneet and they want to united them in world best ,and holy relations

hear maan walking in his room like angry lion , adi all talking coming in his mind again and again , new man in geet and pari life he cant digest this thought , he don't know why he reacting like this somewear maan know adi talking reality ,and he is right in his place , but this BUT bothering him so much , when he again feel pain in his leg he just lay on bed and closed his eyes in frustration , just than pari face come to his mind and she is calling papa papa to someone , and that person when turn his face , maan open his eyes with shock ... he have fast heart bit and he mummer how should this possible , that man for whom pari calling papa that is me ,can it is possible , then past image of last month came in front of him , his care , fear , for geet and pari it is non other than love it is not just pity for girl who suffer in her life , he just shock with his own thought LOVE for geet his breath stop for some second , his face glow with happiness but next moment turn in pale , can geet accept him , she is so nave , pari , and his reaction for marriage

For geet marriage should be dance, food and new cloth etc etc ...maan nodded his head and soft smile come in his face, maan you have to win her heart, you have to you can't be cowered this time you never fight for yourself but you have to stand for your love , your life ,yes your geet and your pari yes , yes he accept his own feeling for geet he is so happy and he want to share with someone specialty to geet , he just went to geet room with limping leg , he just went to geet there his princess playing with her teddy , maan smile on his lady no no child lady love , a blush come to his face with thought , he just went to geet and hug her , like with hug he sharing his happiness

geet scare with sudden hug but , she used maan touch , she also hug him back when geet soft hand touching maan back he feel so much relif , so much happiness as well as goosebumps in his body , yes this new feeling make him crazy , and hear in geet tummy again so much butterfly start to dance , bhagda , she again make face and look to babaji and make face now what is this when maaneet in there own world , two james bound hi fi each other for their victory , maan happy face telling story of maan mind they are non other than , Dadima James bound and adi James bound

hear when butterfly don't stop dance in geet tummy , she come out from maan hug and make such baby face , first maan grown with separation he want more in geet hug , but when he look such cute baby face , he just want to kiss on her cheek , but he control himself , he don't want to scare geet with his action , but next geet qus turn his face red like tomato red

geet , maanji you just stay away from me

maan make qus face like why

maanji from yes don't know what happen when you touch me , touch me or hug me i feel so much butterfly dancing in my tummy or another rat jumping in my tummy , ye your one rat is sufficient me for trouble , I don't want another rat in my tummy , i will ask to dadi also about it so dadi tell this to doc and they give me some medicine till that you stay away from me , no touch no hug ,geet make such serious face , her nose turn red in baby anger

poor maan on 9 th cloud when he lesion that his touch effecting geet but he fall with such force with geet other talk and thought to tell dadi and dco he just slap himself , and look to babaji and mummer , Ys master piece hi mila tha mere liye babaji , not fair , chola maan beta you have to hold your feeling , she is to nave for this , you have to win her heart with trust than you can wakeup feeling for you in her till than took long breath and pasions , because you have to face this nave and innocent question bank with her emotions ki dukan , babji help me

he just say her its ok geet ,but you don't say it to dadi or anybody else or they will make fun on you , you trust me na , than icant touch you , but you can touch me na , because I don't have butterfly in my tummy , maan said this with innocent face , geet just nodded in yes ,hear on door , adi and dadima holding their laugh on geet reaction , adi mummer in dadi ear , dadia your grandson is so claver , he can't touch her , but geet can touch him , Love ne to dumb Msk ke ko clever bana diya ...

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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adi too having tears seeing geet sufferring at this tender age..
maan asking help to adi
he wants to go from here with geet
n adi sense his love n his words knock some sense in maan
he cant see geet or pari with another man..n comes to know his feelings
he hugs geet n butterflies started to fly..
so cute,,geet cribbing n asking maan not to touch her n going 2 say 2dadi n dr too..
poor maan ..already adi n dadi has caught them..
superb part..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahimaan

hi my qus is specially for writer , can we continued other story if that writer give consult or without that writer consult he that writer was not active , i read one story before 2 year and that story is still in my mind and i cant stop myself for asking that so , waiting for reply

Mahimaan

u must get permission from that writer..if that person is not available u must ask moderators permission to continue..
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Originally posted by: vrinda22

u must get permission from that writer..if that person is not available u must ask moderators permission to continue..




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Posted: 11 years ago
very lovely dovely update...😳😆😆😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
hahahahahaha
lovely awesome update yar:)
loved it a lot & lot:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update...
adi and maan part is emotional...
great work adi bhai...knocking some sense in maan..
wow maan realised his love for geet...
so cute,,geet cribbing n asking maan not to touch her n going 2 say 2dadi n dr too.. poor maan ..already adi n dadi has caught them.. superb part..
continue soon...
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lovely update

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