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Posted: 11 years ago

#361

so romantic

can't wait for him to ask her to renew their vows

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#362

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#363

Originally posted by: InspiredSoul
Beautiful story! You are an awesome writer - I have been enjoying your other FF's too!

Thank you so much! Good to hear from you.

Originally posted by: tina_1234
Amazing part

Thanks!

Originally posted by: ankitamishra201
awesome update ...!!!
loved it !!

Thank you!

Originally posted by: swatim318
woowww finally I am here to unres my comment...--And I'm finally here to respond to it...hehe

and i am not going to apologize for not commenting on the last update.. kya fayada.. main sudharne wali to hu nahi..--once again...no worries...

neways... let me come to this update... this amazingly superbly blush worthy update.. --Right??

frankly speaking.. the first scene of this update.. (kind of) the morning after... is something I ALWAYS wanted to see from the very beginning in B&B... it made me blush.. but yeah i was expecting little cute moments between Arshi.. but I guess i asked for too much too soon... One Step at a time.."as in...cute moments after they wake up together?? Honestly...I thought about it but like you said...one step at a time...for now they're progressing in the kitchen.. :P

But whatever... I LOVED THE MORNING...

AND I am loving this awesome comfortable aura between them.. loved how very comfortably they are sharing their fears, secrets and feelings to each other.. and I knew it... Arnav's nightmares are scared of their togetherness... One Night of togetherness and they are gone.. ab to aage aage dekho hota hai kya...--Yeap...Khushi's presence...and even the twins' presence chases away the nightmare for him...they're the road to his sanity...

awww my cutest kids are back in action... they are truly sweethearts.. I love everything about them...---I love them too...I want twins like them!!

And Arnav... What should I say about him... he is one Perfect Man and Father a girl and Kind would ask for... Just one mistake and his world upside down... but I am sure, he will make everything alright... fingers crossed..."so far, so good, right? Arnav and Khushi's progress in their relationship and the comfortable aura (like you said) they share has got to count for something..

I dont have words to describe those two weeks... It was a Perfect Happy time for this family...

hmmm.. again a morning scene... and i again loved the naturality (is that even a word) of it... Oh god Khushi is gonna miss this terribly once he moves out... i am not mentioning Anrav.. coz its understandable..."Exactly...we all know that Arnav will miss every single aspect of it but Khushi will also miss it...and as confused as her mind may be, her heart knows that she doesnt like the idea of him leaving..it bothers her...

awww the kitchen romance... i got goosebumps sachchi... i always love Kitchen romance even in real life... and the way you wrote it... OMG... you are a die hard romantice person it seems katie.. .. you wont believe but, I read that kitchen scene for almost 5-6 times..---Oh I'm a hopeless romantic...I am not ashamed to accept the fact...LOL...too many movies/shows/books eventually take their toll on you... ;)...and I dont know what my obsession with the kitchen is...I find it intimate in a different manner when a couple shares these cute moments in the kitchen...i dont know...am I crazy? I think so!

but what I dint know was that you are going to give a shocker in this scene... OMG.. Arnav is moving out... Nooo... What will happen now??? but is THIS the sign Khushi is asking for?? I think YES... but you can be more evil than this.. cant you??"I most definitely can be...but I don't plan on being too too cruel to these two...I'll save the rest of my evil ideas of AY...lol...next update will cover Arnav moving out...so lets see what happens..

one more thing I dint expect was, arnav asking the opinion of other adults... well... you are master in doing things we least expect... like you made khushi listen to the whole conversation beforehand...He has confided in Kripa and Angad about what he's done in the past and he knows that Anjali knows...usually he seeks opinion or approval from Khushi but seeing that he couldn't with this topic, he turned to the next best group... :)

last but not the least... wooowww... you included devi maiya in this... .. you are... what shud I say... but it was hilarious to read that... loved it..I've always wanted to write a scene with Devi Maiyya in it and lo behold, I found the perfect opportunity in the last update...hehe...

now should I say that I loved the update?? na na.. I HATED it.. --yeah???...well I hated your comment too .. ;) <3

PS... oh no.. you reminded me that B&B is nearing its end... I dint want to remember that thing.. but now you made me sad.. now your punishment is... dedicate the next update to me.. .. just kidding.. well.. punishment would be UPDATE TONITE.. which I know you are going to.. .."tonight it shall be...your stalking skills are being tested yet again! And I apologize for reminding you about the thing that shall not be mentioned...

waiting..

thanks for pm...

Originally posted by: Arnav1Khushi
Hello. Hope u r doing well."Much better, thank you! :) The update was too awesome. Everything about the update is nice."Thank you so much! The morning when they woke up together felt so natural and ethereal. The snuggling and cuddling was too cute."About time awkwardness took a back seat and cuteness took over, yeah? Thank god, they talked about his nightmares. I thought he would be waking up in the morning yelling for Khushi. It made sense that in her presence all those nightmares go out the window and he slept in peace."yeah...I sort of hinted at the same through the last few updates...Khushi and the Twins help him chase away the dreams, so accordingly...when he's sleeping with her in his arms, nightmares about her having left him are bound to stay at bay... The fact that the kids and their father have this morning tickling ritual felt so real. The apology of the kids was really heart warming. The fact that Amber plucked flowers from her garden when she never does it, shows how much she values her mother. Aditya is such a miniature version of Arnav. I can totally visualize the family bonding."From the father-twins bond and routines to Arnav-Khushi's bond and routines...from a distance its a happy family and no one would guess that they've got a rough history...just like every family..or most families...they have their rituals and routines...now that Arnav's considering leaving...the impact of his departure will cause an abrupt halt in those routines...
That kiss was awesome. N the light flirting was just mind blowing. I originally thought Arnav would be withdrawing if they decided to get intimate on Khushi's persistence, but I am glad he is initiating. It really shows the changing dynamics of their relationship."Agreed...my main reason for not having him withdraw was that he's finally understanding where they stand...he is confident with the way they're moving and knows when she's comfortable...if Khushi had shown even the slightest hint of discomfort, he would have withdrawn immediately... That part where she moves back every time they try to kiss was damn cute. N when he pulled her in for the kiss, I couldn't stop grinning."I was grinning like a fool when I wrote that scene..LOL Definitely an update which has to be read again."Aw, thank you!

So Arnav is gonna take her home. Is he going to marry her again, it will be cute if he marries her again in front of kids. So I guess she is having cold feet now. The feeling is quite natural given their past."Yeah...she has kept her mind neatly ordered and knows what she wants at the moment...kind of moving with the flow...but now that she has to bring in the future and a possibility of life time, her mind has been tossed into disarray...its easy for her to relate to the happily married 4 months and then things falling apart...her natural fear would be history repeating itself...

So u r planning to finish this story. Nahiii. I depend on ur update every week now. Thank god there is still AY and ur new story."And I promise there will be more on the way...But this one would be heavily missed. U r right in not dragging it but would we get to see a lot of their family moments once she goes back. Please do so. Maybe an epilogue. I don't want to think about the day u decide to end this beautiful story. Well all good things do come to an end..Don't worry...unlike before, now I actually have a clear picture of the ending to this story, and I will tie all the lose ends before the epilogue of this story...I'm even considering two epilogues...

I was jus wondering when nani was talking to Arnav she mentioned him doing something would we find out that soon? Have loads more to say about the update, but ur update has left me stumped. Totally unexpected twists and turns.yes, Khushi has to find out about all of that still...so you see...even if they remarry, there is still quite a bit of things left to give closure to... ;)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#364

Originally posted by: dumas
loved the update awesome morning after the storm loved arnav telling her that he did not have any nightmares he actually did not dream and slept peacefully loved that they have pass the uncomfortable feeling of getting close and he wants to ask khushi to renew they vows but she is very confused right now waiting for her answer loved the update loved the kids apologizing amazing update thanks for the pm.

Thank you Dumas! yeap, he finds peace and bliss in Khushi's embrace...the things love does to you.😉 They have moved passed the uncomfortable phase, yes...but they've still got to deal with the demons...her confusion is natural isnt it? her only fear at this point is history repeating itself...

Originally posted by: KaSh-Maneet-Fan
Hiii...Awesome update...Loved it...loved ArHi...cute...both r getting closer...Can't wait 4 more...will Khushi marry Arnav again...Con soon...Thanks 4 da pm

Thank you so much! Whether or not they'll remarry...stay tuned and find out!😉

Originally posted by: flowers4u
awesome a brilliant update ...keep it up

Thank you!

Originally posted by: Atyay

Awesome update! 👏 Loved it!

Thanks!

Originally posted by: msmarple
enjoyed the chapter.

Thanks!

Originally posted by: Shafoo
tht is awesome

Thanks!

Originally posted by: Asrkkgsr
nice part.hope khushi will say yes to arnav.waiting for family reunion in true sense.liked kids apologising way.updte soon

Thank you! Like Devi Maiyya said in the last part, Khushi has the answer, she just needs to stop denying it.😛

Originally posted by: LadyR
One should be so happy that Arnav has gained so much confidence , he has been able to sleep peacefully but I am sad as this FF is reaching its final stretch. A job so well excited, you touched upon so many issues, sensitive ones and showed the many sides to one situation, the many views of all concerned and the many resolutions.. Forgiveness and second chance being the foremost...

The kids apology was adorable and gave Arnav a change at parenting, the many hugs and kisses have been noted by all hence the teasing at Kirpas party.

Yaay for DM, nothing wrong with divine intervention,,!!

yeap! Khushi's trust in him has only added to his confidence...imagine if Khushi was hesitant as well...this would get absolutely no where...she's stronger at heart than he is. Thank you so much sweets! I wouldn't have been able to get so far ahead with this story if I didn't have open minded, accepting, and truly motivating readers!😳

We've all seen Khushi's parenting..it shows in the kids' upbringing...I decided to give Arnav a chance at this parenting thing...the poor guy has missed out on it for five years...besides...this will help him understand how difficult it must have been for Khushi to do this singlehanded.😉

Originally posted by: sfghfj
awesome update

Thanks!

Originally posted by: jolybudy
Awesome update...
To start with the morning scene was so beautifully described.. they were the pic perfect couple 😊

The kids apoligising to their mom.. so so beautiful.. luved it... The four form the perfect family 😊

Kitchen scene - wonderful... made the best use of the private time huh 😳

Last part makes me nervous.. Arnav to kind of propose and Khushi waiting for her DM to answer her.. How and what is going to be DM's hint???

Wonderful on the whole 👏

Thank you so much! yeah...I've been itching to write a morning scene with them...and the previous part was the perfect opportunity...the four of them do form a perfect family, but like every family..they have little things to work out, still. Oh yeah, how could we possibly let them pass up on the solitude and private time...not to mention the perfect serene environment. How and what will be DM's hint will be covered in the next part...😳

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Katie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#365

Originally posted by: IsleOfCapri
simply brilliant
loved it

Thank you!

Originally posted by: SPraba
Hey katie wonderful update. Loved it. So arnav and khushi are being more comfortable now to the extent Khushi likes waking up with Arnav and he seems to get rid of his nightmares when he is with her or the twins. Aww the twins apology was so cute. Flowers, sorry cards, breakfast. How sweet. So arnav is planning to pop the big question again to Khushi soon. Hoping she says yes and this is the clue I get from DM. Thanks for the pm and cant wait for 28th to read the next update

Thank you! Yeap, they've reached that comfort level that they'd reached after the first few months of their married life...in a sense they're back to square one.😊 Yeah, the apology was nothing too extravagant but just little things that matter to them as cute gestures of their apology...😳 DM's little reassurance for Khushi was a hint towards the answer khushi already knows in her heart...the issue is her mind that's hell bent on denying it and making her doubt her judgement..

Originally posted by: PixieFlame
This is one of my favourite stories!
I am glad you won't be dragging it! :)

Thank you so much!😳

Originally posted by: Smrikta992
Lovd it..
Amazing as usual..
Thnks for pm..

Thank you sweets!

Originally posted by: Happytwinkle
mindblowing update
loved it
thanks for the pm

Thank you!

Originally posted by: badfaith4u
Amazing update
The apology was really cute and adorable

The renewing vows idea is a really nice gesture
I wonder what Khushi will decide?

Thank you hun! Everyone knew Khushi would forgive them in the blink of an eye but I just wanted some cute gestures on their part...Khushi's decision will be revealed shortly...

Originally posted by: rkapoor1382
tht WAS fab loved it

Thank you!

Originally posted by: suruchirazdan
this is such an awesome update... lets see what khushi decides...

Thank you! Khushi's decision will be out in the open soon.😊

Originally posted by: Arshi67
Can't wait for Khushi to finally get what her name stands for...hopefully?

Perhaps, maybe...stay tuned to find out!😉

Originally posted by: AnjuRish
i am happy for them
they both deserve this shot at their marraige again

Yeap, they both deserve it and more than that, the kids deserve to spend the rest of their childhood with both parents rather than just their mom.😳

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Katie

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#366

Originally posted by: sweetnoni
Amazing update!!

The kids scene in the morning just to cute. The romantic scene between them so sweet but to ask khushi to renew their wedding vows on the day of their anniversary thats superb:D

I just hope she says yes to it
Thx for the pm

Thank you! Yeap..kind of filmy and stuff but hey...I can't be Indian without being a bit filmy, right? lol...instead of having two different anniversaries, why not just renew vows on the approaching one?😉

Originally posted by: sutapasarbabhom
Asom part nw they deserv hapines cont soon thanx for pm

Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: rubikjules
Wow! Tht ws a superb update katie!!! I loved it!
D apology done by d kids ws so cute! Loved d mamma's day idea! :)

Thank you! My sister and I usually do the "Mamma's day" routine on Mother's day...give her a much needed day off with an at-home spa experience and all...lol.

I'm so loving d chemistry between d couple..really happy bout d kitchen..

Decided to give them their romantic flare back...😆

I'm very curious to knw bout d incident leading to khushi's decision n wht it wil b..

Loved arnav's idea of re-doing their vows on their anniversary..

Lets see what exactly happens to make her make up her mind and what will her mind decide...yes? no? in need of more time?

I so wnt khushi to say yes n go bck wid him...n anjali too wid aman..
Wud love to read bout d canadian reunion too if u r plannin to end it tht way..
Wonder if khushi finds out wht arnav has been upto d last 5 years wich he ws afraid d fly ws gonna blurt in d telephn convo..I'm sure it ws smethin reckless n stupid..

I promise that I will touch back on everything that's been mentioned in the story...eventually, the family will know that Arnav has found Khushi and about the twins as well...how, when, and why it happens, I'll let the story unfold that...same with what Arnav has been up to in the last 5 years...Khushi will know everything in due time.😳

Katie I'm gonna b so sad whn this story ends..eagerly awaitin updates of b and b has been a part of our lives for more than a year and a half..Icant help feeling nostalgic.. :(
But I guess all good things do cum to an end..atleast have AY n KAS too luck fwd too..

I'm going to miss writing this story too! its been very close to me and I feel my brain coming up with random scenarios to keep it going but like I said in the note, I don't want to rob it of its main plot by dragging it unnecessarily...AY and KAS are there, yes...but I'm already working on a new plot to replace B&B once its over, fikar not!😃

Thk u so much for giviin us readers so much joy..! thank you guys for giving me so much motivation and love and support! <3

Warmly,
Jules

Originally posted by: aquagal
I loved the way Arnav arranged everything and handled kids too.
Obviously the nightmares won't come when the person who left a void in his heart is with him. 😳
They are progressing gradually in their relationship and it's amazing that they are in sync with each other.
I guess the timing is right for Arnav to ask Khushi to move in with him after renewing thir vows. They have come a long way from where they got apart. If Khushi's heart trusts him enough, she would say yes.
I want to know Devi Maiyya's plan and how she intends to help Khushi in deciding an answer in less than a week. 😛

Thank you! I guess since he's already their buddy, getting them to listen isnt exactly all that hard.😉 And you're so right...the nightmares started with her leaving...and the nightmares wouldn't dare try to invade his mind while she was in his arms...for once, they are in synch with each other...no one's leading, no one's following, they're finally walking together! Devi Maiyya's plan isnt very tricky, actually...its fairly simple..you'll know it when you see it! 😉

Originally posted by: HUMII10592
Awesome

Thank you!

Originally posted by: Akorshi
awesome part...
ArShi relation changing every day...
arnav said he will go back to his home...
khushi was unhappy,...
so arnav will ask her...
khushi heard and started thinking...
update soon...

Thank you! ArShi's relation has definitely changed and bloomed into a mature one. Lets see what Khushi decides...

Originally posted by: amfashionista
Splendid update

Thank you!

Originally posted by: arnshi
Such a heart warming chapter...thoroughly enjoyed.
Amazing pace!

Thanks a lot!

Originally posted by: 1chilly
Khushi and Arnav have come a long way in their relationship.
Loved the way you took forward this story.
Very well written.
The narration of the ups and downs in their relationship was very realistic.
Loved how Arnav handled the Fathers Day situation.
Khushi too has come to rely on his support.
Now he is planning to go back to his place.
Hope Khushi stops him from doing so.
Would love to know how Devi Maiyya will handle the situation!

Thank you! They have definitely come a long way...it has taken them time, but...better late than never, yeah? The father's day situation automatically made him take up the father's reins as the kids threw hurtful words at his wife and their mother...Devi Maiyya will definitely come to the rescue this time around and Khushi will have to make a decision...what decision it will be and how exactly she'll come to it shall be revealed very soon.😳

Originally posted by: roops82
Awesome!!

Thank you!

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Katie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#367

Originally posted by: Love_SA
WOWWW!!!!
just loved it..

im sort of glad that khushi heard everything!!

Thank you so much! yeah..you'll see why I made her overhear the conversation.😳

Originally posted by: ammi22
wow great update. love the romance part. they are amazing.

Thank you! More romantic scenes coming up.😉

Originally posted by: spvd
part 42
awesome dear...
the kids are so much curious to know about their dad...
poor Khushi...
her daughter's words hurt her much...
and Arnav the way he made them understand was so brilliant...
nice one dear...

Thank you! yeah, the kids naturally want to know who their dad is especially since they've never met him. Arnav is slowly stepping out of 'Buddy' shoes and stepping into 'Dad' shoes.😉

Originally posted by: --peehu--
awesome update..loved it...
i just loved the way their relationship has progressed...so Arnav wants to renew his vows! and khushi is confused about it..i really hope she doesnt reject him or something..becoz that would be really heart breaking...

looking forward to the next update :)

Thank you! Yeap, he wants to renew the vows and Khushi is uber confused as to what to do...lets see what her decision is...you'll know in the next update.😳

Originally posted by: arhi-raizada
awesome

Thanks!

Originally posted by: Arilip
U r totally right saying mind goes fuzzy when it's time to decide...
Wonderful update...

Finally khushi should get her share of happiness 😊

Yeap! my mind goes fuzzy at the worst possible times...but thank God that it only lasts a few seconds..lol. and yes..finally time for Khushi to go get her happiness..

Originally posted by: ravalisharma06
awesome update.,,,

Thanks!

Originally posted by: monikaseth
Amazing part

Thank you!

Originally posted by: shalini_s
I hope she says Yes... let her not make him wait too much..

Lets see what she decides...you'll see in the next update...

Originally posted by: devishree
beautiful and loved it
awesome and fantastic update

Thank you so much!

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Katie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#368

Originally posted by: JRia
Loved it Katie.. I loved the DM part and the kitchen scene..

Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: shiv456
beautiful update

Thanks!

Originally posted by: suji5
beautifully written
khushi is in dilemma to accept Arnav's invitation but she already know the answer 😕

Thank you! Yeap, Khushi is confused but she just needs a little nudge to reach the answer...

Originally posted by: akshiankita
lovely update

Thanks!

Originally posted by: diyadivya
fantastic updt

Thanks!

Originally posted by: vaishiksg
great update..:D

Thank you!

Originally posted by: luvbug
oh tht was a lovely update...i like how arnav n khushi are slowly coming closer... n the apology from the twins was so cute :)
so arnav is finally ready to ask he to move bk with him...wohhooo :D

Thank you sweets! They've already come a long way, now Arnav needs to propose again and she needs to give him an answer...😉

Originally posted by: sivatharshini
Awesome update love it !!

Thanks!

Originally posted by: AngelsHeaven
lovely update
continue soon

Thank you!

Originally posted by: P4rveen12
First of all just by reading the title of the update I was doing a happy dance, lol. I did a happy dance because you did a happy dance!😆

The update was absolutely amazing and simply superb,Thank you so much!

Love the fact Khushi realised that Arnav did not have a nightmare when he slept next to her, May have seemed cheesy but...her leaving is what triggered the start of the nightmare so it only makes sense that her presence keeps them at bay..

Awww love the apology surprise from the kids it was so sweet and thoughtful, love how they did not let her do anything.Yeap...truly a Mummy Manao mission!😉Which mom doesn't appreciate a day off from house chores? lol

I'm loving how all four are enjoying a blissful and beautiful moments together,For once I'm going to keep my evilness tucked away and say that...it shall all be well despite the few potholes they might hit...

Wow the kitchen part was just amazing, wow wow and wow.

They finally shared there first passionate and beautiful kiss, love the way Arnav was teasing her and Khushi also joined him, I love you for this. Thank you!😳 I know how awaited that kiss was but of course...I didn't go into the full description...ever since that MOD warning on AY's thread I've been really...conscious of what I'm writing...I hate it...

Love the plans Arnav has got for Khushi for there wedding anniversary, renewing the vows is simply a fantastic and brilliant idea, I once again love you for this as I'm sure I had suggested this, thank you very much for including it. Yeap...you did suggest it and at the time I wanted to be like "no..its not happening!" simply because you'd made a prediction that was spot on and I wanted to be evil and throw you off...lol...but decided against that.

It's a shame Khushi overheard the conversation, I wanted it to be a surprise for her. I just hope she does not overthink Arnav's surprise to much. Ahh...I know...but just trust me on this one...you'll see why I had her overhear the conversation...for one...you wouldn't have wanted her to react the way she did in front of Arnav,, right?

I absolutely loved the update, it was a fantastic read.

Thanks for updating even though you had family commitments, Writing brings me peace to be honest...apart from those times when I hit small hurdles and mental blocks, I turn to writing as "meditation"...and connecting with people outside of the family during that time also helps get mind off of things..😳

I want you too drag the story as much as you can, stretch it, bend it, twist it and prolong it lol. LOL! Are you sure???? you're asking that of me despite knowing my evilness???😲

Thanks for the PM xx

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Katie

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Originally posted by: drunkiiebabe
Awesome updateLoved itThanks for the pm

Thank you!

Originally posted by: hira2050
I just loved the Update:)

Thanks!

Originally posted by: neha2013g
amazing part.. loved it.. 😊

Thanks!

Originally posted by: -Farwa_Ibrahim-
Just read before the latest update and simply loved it specially the way Arnav handled the kids and Khushi at the same time. loved it katie

Thank you so much Farwa! I figured he's been the one leaning on others too long...he's capable of providing support too.😉

Originally posted by: spvd
part 43
awesome dear...
lovely...
nice one...
Arnav and Khushi are enjoying their lives now...
and the kids have apologized to Khushi...
nice one...
so Arnav is planning to propose her...
and Khushi has heard it...
what will she do?
Devi Maiyya has decided to give happiness in Arnav and Khushi's lives...
cont soon dear...

Thanks Lav! Yeap, arnav and Khushi are having some happy time...wait until you read the next update.😉 you shall get answers to most of your questions.