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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey my friends. I know some of you have been waiting for my poem on Udays' feelings about Manyata. (especially Radhika) So this for all you. 😊 😃


The first time
I saw your beautiful visage
I knew you would be mine.
Your innocent eyes-
Playing games.
Your rosebud lips-
Waiting for my kiss.
Your soft dewy skin,
An aroma of vanilla and honey
Waiting for my touch.

You played me
Your halkat veda
But my jungli billi..
I knew you so well...

When I look deep into eyes
My image seers your every being
Just feel what you've done to me
My Princess. ..

I marked you-
Princess
With my hand.
When I have you to myself,
I will brand my name
On your mind, body and soul.
That bond will never break
You will be mine
Till my last breath.

Nobody will love you
Like I do-
Nobody will touch you
The way I do-
Nobody will look at you
The way I will-
You will have my name
On your lips
Like a burning flame-
My beautiful desire
My reason for living
My Princess
For eternity. ...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Write One for our Prince
Edited by ParusDivs - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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sorry for the late cmnt...wow it was soo dreamy
u wrote soo good abt uday's feelings...how u write so well???😕 hmmm
give me some tips for writing such a cool cool cool poems😆 jokes apart...😉

Your innocent eyes-
Playing games.
Your rosebud lips-
Waiting for my kiss.
Your soft dewy skin,
An aroma of vanilla and honey
Waiting for my touch.
best lines ever😃

I will brand my name
On your mind, body and soul.
That bond will never break
You will be mine
Till my last breath.
dis lines r to die for😳

Nobody will love you
Like I do-
Nobody will touch you
The way I do-
Nobody will look at you
The way I will-
nobody will touch like i do☺️ so sweet line...and nobody will look at u..🥱naughty uday

You will have my name
On your lips
Like a burning flame-
My beautiful desire
My reason for living
My Princess
For eternity. ...
uday really used to love manyata alot ..and these lines proves tht...and the poem truely matches wid his feelings...thnx frnd for writing such a good poem👏 u deserves clap👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks Radhika. You must be my biggest fan on here. Wstch this spacepfor Manyatas' feelings 4 Uday.
Edited by jagz11 - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: jagz11

Thanks Radhika. You must be my biggest fan on here. Wstch this dpsce for Manyatas' feelungs 4 Uday.


manyatas feelings
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aw!!! This is so cute dear!❤️
Seriously all the words u've used. Suits the love Uday has for Manyata☺️
Do write more soon!!🤗

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