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please6

@please6

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#91

Love the concept of the story and the characters anyways loved it and plzzz update soon

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arnshi

@arnshi

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#92

Wonderful start <3 please pm me when you update.

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Mariam Khan

@Mxk3444

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#93

This sounds wonderful I absolutely love it cant wait for the next update :))

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alex1906

@alex1906

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#94

Wow, this is a different one. Khushhi is blind n arnv as usual is short tempered, jumping to conclusions without knowing the facts.

looking fotward to read more.

cheers

Edited by alex1906 - 11 years ago

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#95

res 😃

unres

awesome update di

loved how you made arnav feel guilty... and was shocked himself, how he behaved !! he also realized the reason of all this his anger... which he tried controlling, because of his mother's words, but then failed miserable... he wasn't wrong, but he wasn't right either, to shout at khushi!!

that, khushi grewal has crush on arnav.. and just to meet him, got herself in this.. and become bait, of a certain "Rishab Mehta" which I think, is arnav's business rival.. and do this in jealousy.. or there is something else to it??

this time arnav behaved nicely with "woman" and I loved the fact that he remembered khushi's words, which was right!! and I am glad to know, he is not that cold hearted person!!

I just loved the bonding between shyam and khushi... love shyam here!! his caring and protective nature for khushi, just won me!! also he is a very nice man!! and so in love with Anjali 😉

hmm... what happened to khushi? how she become visually challenged?? had she gone through some bitter times in past? so therefore, she is like this??

loved how khushi, understood him without him saying anything.. lol..her sixth sense is really sharp.. but really.. really admires how she knows her brother in and out!!

aww, shyam make dinner for khushi.. that's so sweet of him (I wish, my brother is like him, but alas *sigh*)

aah.. so buaji is there too.. cant wait for her entry!!

continue soon please😳

PS: I wrote for second time, as my first comment deleted😭 so sorry, if I missed anything😕

PPS: sorry for delaying😃

Edited by jas0308 - 11 years ago

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katj

@katj

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#96

Something different and interesting...
Pls add me in your PM list...
Thanks

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Aaliya Sobti

@Aalu_Malu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#97

Res!!
Damn!!! 😭

Unres

Beautifully written!! 👏 I loved it !! 😳
Khushi-Shyaam and Anjali-Arnav!!! AREY WAO KYA BAAT HAI!!!
Khushi 😭
I am really enjoying it, though!! 😃
Waise that Ms.Grey Wall is Funny 🤣 She had a crush on ASR, obviously who wouldn't have, and she wanted to meet him and her first meeting was a cracker 🤣 SHE IS SUCH A FOOL!! 😆 But I like her, If not for her, how would ASR shout at Khushi nd feel bad😉 Who is this Mr.Rishab, already hating him for doing dirty with My Anjali 😡

Lol...ASR is here to apologize yaaayyy!!! Rabba Ve on the train 😆

Waiting waiting waiting!!!

Edited by LOLWAsAalu - 11 years ago

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Shikhayugal

@Shikhayugal

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#98

awesome update

loved the concept..

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Mints23

@mints23

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#99

I am glad that Arnav realizes his mistake and also feels guilty at yelling on an innocent Khushi. As his mom had rightly said, he is a good man with a kind heart... however, his anger rules his heart... And rightfully, the words that are once spoken, cannot be taken back... causing the damage that sometimes leave an unrepairable scar. The first impression of Arnav has been really bad on Khushi... and I so want to see what the mighty ASR does to redeem himself. 😃

The conversation between Shyam and his father regarding this whole mess, about Khushi and being judgmental was very interesting. So their dad, thinks of Arnav in a good light... interesting. And truly Khushi Grewal had been stupid to take Arnav Singh Raizada lightly. Nobody gets away with hurting and demeaning the people he loves. Loved the way you have described the entire professional conversation between the entire group that had gathered in the room... 👍🏼

I love this Arnav, who truly is affected by Khushi's words and is also acting accordingly. He lets go Ms Grewal, even though if not completely off the hook. He also analyzes the situation and realizes that the whole fiasco was a mess due to lack of efficiency on a lot of peoples parts and mainly because of his anger... The bond between Arnav and Anjali has come out beautifully through the small conversations between them... a peek into their past. 😊

I am so loving this protective and loving Shyam. He is insightful and realizes that as he is a protective brother towards Khushi, so had Arnav been towards Anjali that morning... I wonder why Khushi had sit herself all those years ago?? Was it some incidence that had happened which had made Shyam so protective? I just love the bonding between Shyam and Khushi, so caring and warm. And then the doorbell rings to voice the arrival of Arnav and Anjali... Can't wait to see what their arrival brings into the life of Khushi... 😳

C!! Happy Birthday!!! Have fun sweetie!! 🤗

Edited by mints23 - 11 years ago