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adhu11

@adhu11

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#111

truly awesome update

so next update will be arshi face to face

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Shameela

@Sam_Faizal

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#112

I love the way your story is going. I wonder if Arnav will apologize and whether Khushi would accept his apology...Looking forward to reading more.

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opsyellow

@opsyellow

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#113

Loved it Viji

What Arnav did was wrong but it was mistake and I hope khushi forgive him.

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#114

Fantastic..Dear!

This the Arnav that you just absolutely adore, Khushi's words left such an impact, he reflected and then the actions speak, and the best part was that Nita was spared...lovely!

And my , Arnav and Anjali at their door., feeling so happy and jittery at the same time! Can't wait to know what happens

This story is so intense already, I'm waiting and wishing for them to fall in love with one another!

Thx for your note, will keep to the rules!

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#115

loved how Anjali and Arnav dealt this.. Shyam is such a doting brother.. good one..

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zafi

@zafi

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#116

Fantastic update.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I loved it.

I am glad Arnav has realised his mistake.

What a wonderful brother Shyam is.❤️🤗

He is like a mother to his sister.❤️🤗

Uh oh the Rizada's are at the Gupta's door.

I am looking forward to reading more.

Thanks.😃

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

@Friedriceji

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#117

Very beautiful chapter. I'm loving the strong bond between Shyam n Khushi.

And looks Arnav's there to apologize. Impatiently waiting for the next chapter!

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#118

U, the second chapter was so good that it left me craving for more! Yes, I didn't want it to be over, I wanted to read on and on. Your ability to divert from one scene to the other making as feel as if we are watching a show where we can witness two sets of scenes playing infront of our eyes, is just remarkable.

Arnav's regret at treating Khushi the way he did was everything I wished for and more, what I didn't quite expect was his behaviour throughout the day. I expected him to just lash out at everyone and anyone, that is take his self directed anger out on everyone particularly Nita and Khushi the journalist. But what I got to witness was a very different ASR, the ASR who got affected by Khushi's parting words so much so that his whole outlook and behaviour changed, treating everyone as well as he could under the circumstances. He even went easy on the journalist remebering both Khushi and his mother's words about controlling his anger. The way he picked up pieces of Khushi's phone was orchestrated beautifully showing us his resolve to make it all better and make it up to the woman he has hurt beyond repair. At least this is what one can assume by the way Shyam was concerned for his sister, the way she had build walls around herself and alienated herself in the past, one can only imagine how would an unnecessary outburst affect such people who are in constant need of, love, support and reassurance. And this is what the Gupta family is all about, it was wonderful to see the kind of bond they all share. The way Shyam is there for his sister, heck the way he is as a person is just wonderful. Although he didn't even say 1/4 of what Arnav said to Khushi to Anjali, he still felt guilty at the way he behaved with Anjali, which was quite normal for anyone under the circumstance.

Now I can hardly wait to see just how will ASR rectify his mistake, as we can see for now he is only guilt ridden and there is no mention or hint of any attraction towards the innocent woman he berated, I look forward to see how will this relationship develope and evolve!

PS. Happy Birthday Chitra! :-)

PPS. Awesome banner JforChimpanzee ( It most certainly focuses on both Barun and Khushi's eyes beautifully!)

Edited by Arshix144 - 11 years ago

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Skiran

@Skiran

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#119

Res for part2😊

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Lovely Update Uthra 👏

Arnav realised his mistake, felt bad for making Khushi suffer because of his anger. Glad to see him forgive Nita for the mix up. I loved the flashback of his mother comforting and confronting Arnav about his short temper ⭐️

Shyam taking care of his Chutki is cute. Khushi knowing every detail of Shyam thinking and doing is simply amazing, loved their bond ❤️ Shashi is a caring father too.

Arnav and Anjali finaly reach their destination. Will Khushi be willing to talk to the angry monster? Can't wait to read the next part 😃

Edited by Skiran - 11 years ago