KriYaansh OS : (Based on promo )

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Heyo!!

I hope I won't spoil the mood with this OS. My hands are itching to write something on this but I lost the touch . -_- Kindly keep that rotten eggs away. I love eggs and but hate that rotten ones. Rest are allowed with all izzat.


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She looked around. The big stage , a bed of sand, diya's and looked down at her. She unknowingly gulped the saliva in fear. Things doesn't seem right. She doesn't know how she got here, who bought her here, that too tied up along with him.

But where the hell is he. Why are they locked up in this room. And the main thing is she is still confused why she changed into these clothes. She was just recollecting what had happened right from the time they were kidnapped when she saw him coming . Struggling with his dhoti, and she froze. Her eyes caressed his naked torso while her heart screamed to run hands over them, touch him, feel him, kiss him and crush herself against him. He looked like a greek God , those muscles perfectly sculpted , those calculated abs and his delicious color making her loose all the sanity and innocence The Kriya Ghai is known for. She wanted to be a bad girl in front of him, with him, she want him , she craved for his touch which gives a new life to her cells. And she sighed seeing his hips move slowly yet so sensually wanting her to just feel his hips against her. She is in need. She wanted him badly and Now!!

She walked slowly towards him. He cursed whatever came into his mind adjusting the dhoti. Why can't he find the shirt anywhere?? But Thank God let him first handle this dhoti then he will leisurely think about the shirt. He sensed something and he very well knew what and whose it is. She is again staring at him , with those sinful, erotic yet so pure and innocent eyes. Every time he looks into her eyes he want to crush her under him kiss her hard, make love to her until her body gives up and shout at her that how much her one looks turns him on. Her eyes depicted the raw need and he somewhere knew his reflected the same. He still wants to keep himself away from her , he shouldn't let go off his guard but his every argument, request , fight reaches the drains seeing her big round eyes which are right now shamelessly gawking at him. He slapped himself in mind and ordered his eyes to leave the contact with her eyes but he never knew he would regret that the most.

As his eyes left hers all they could end up was on her long slender waist . Damn how badly he wanna see it clearly but the bloody darkness ate half of his view at the most appealing view he ever saw. His eyes traveled all along the long white shirt which with such an ease hugged her waist and the thread holding it tight and right at her waist. How he wished he could just let it free from its tangled self and just devour the beauty in front of him. As his eyes moved up all his sane thoughts burned in the flames of those diya's as he saw her chest move in rhythm .

High time. She can't hold it more and walked towards him as he bent on his knees adjusting his dhoti at his ankles and kneeled behind him. Her eyes drank his image and she caressed his back. She sensed him stiffen but he stayed quite. Taking that as a green signal she passed her soft palms over his hard flesh igniting flames. He let her take the lead. She held his shoulder still refusing to hold him at a single place and caressing his arms and turned him towards her, her desires reflecting in her eyes. She let her hands touch his every inch, increasing his desires. A spark rolled down her spine as his hand slowly passed over her waist and what she knows next is her skin burning and her want of her against him coming true. His eyes full of desires and lust , which exactly she wanted right now excited her heart. Her hands shamelessly moved over his torso and he couldn't help but cluth her hair in his fist and jerk her towards him to take into a rough yet deep kiss. Her nails drilled into his torso as he nibbled her lower lip creating this sudden unbearable pleasure , as he rubbed his frame against hers fulfilling the desires of his skin. How he wished he had no obstacle between them, and her blouse was the thing he hated the most at this moment. Her cleavage with the dripping sweat and her moulds playing hide and seek with his eyes made him dig his fingers in her waist when she pushed him hard breathing hard. His eyes hard, dark , full of hunger. She took steps back with a shy yet bold smile on her face when his face was hard as steel. She moved to a corner to light the place , to make it perfect and she saw him move closer as she lit the light. She wanted him, but she wanted to excite him, give her best for him, and she very well knows what would be her best , her dance and that's what she choose. But the thing she didn't expect is him dancing with her. She wanted to dance for him but the moment his hand fell on her waist she went blank. She closed her eyes and held the diya high and turned and he took the lead. She held her, twirled , his eyes noting every moment of her. He loved it when she is this close to him and that's what he did he pulled her close, as her beautiful body stretched with one leg on the ground and the other almost at his shoulder level. She looked beautiful and tonight he is gonna have her, all for himself. He felt his manhood harden when she played with sand over his body enjoying to her devilish best. He couldn't wait more, it's time her makes his way into her and he took a step front suddenly making her stumble and fall on her knees on the sand bed. And in a blink of eye he went on knees and pulled her over him and rolled over her and finally capturing those lips. He could feel sand everywhere right from her lips to their shoulders and hands. But her flavour , her smooth texture was all it mattered , and his fingers found that thread which they were longing to and set it loose making her hips free from the long piece of cloth. For sure God had a hard time making her , sculpting her. His hands toyed with her dori when she quickly pulled the belt around his waist in need kicking the dhoti away from his slender legs. He took a halt to have a hearty look at her naked glory before stepping in to savour it.

After a heated and extremely tired make out session she opened her eyes slowly breathing hard and that's when the reality hit her hard. He was still standing in front of her, she was still glued to her place. And the world came down crashing. It was a fantasy. A f**king Fantasy . She composed herself. She would break down at any moment, she need to leave and thus she stammered.

"Rey.. wo.. hum.. yaha "and her voice stuck in her throat as he pulled her hard against his frame .

She looked everywhere except his eyes and started again in vain "Rey"

"Shhh " she felt his finger on her lips and a few seconds later her body started to heat up as his thumb caressed her lower lip. And that's when she looked up , in his eyes.

One look into them .. she knows... She is gonna live her recent fantasy .



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So here ends the OS !!

Kindly review!!

Enjoy the Show in 10 mins??😆

Bye bye...

lets meet up in hell or heaven

-Deetha😳

Edited by -Blind.Dance- - 12 years ago

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Effacious thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
HAHAHAHAA... OMG... MERI PARTYYY...

3RD OS on Ang laga re de Promo... yahooo 🥳

Dee... this was f**king hot... m telling you... it was seriusly emitting fires... goshhh...

i almost died reading this...

and and... hell... we just gave 4 mins now... 😲

and here i am.. hell aroused...

DAMNNN...

OKAY 3 MINS NOW...

U know i loved the OS... i loved it hell lot...


it came out amazingly... you were khali fokat nervous...

okay now me RUNSSS...

BHAGGOOO...


Edited by akanksha_arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Dee..

I am really very restless at the moment.

And this Super SEXY OS!!!

BLOODY HOT☺️☺️

God Bless.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#4
speech less... no words...😳😳... this os were awesome... loved it
dazzlingmanavi thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
this was so damn hot
the starting was oh my god
i so wish actually aesa kuch hua hota...not everything toh atleast some good kisses... :p
when you said that fantasy word...i was like oh shit no
but the end was like again awsm
i loved the last line
fab work
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Deethu let's meet in hell
CrazyGirl.21 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was a super sexy OS. <3 How angry was I, when I read it was all her fantasy. But the ending, when the moment came, when she was going to LIVE her fntasy, Aaahh! It was my favourite. you really dun deserve roten eggs baby. U deserve showers of rose on you. This was totally awesome. <3
-Ashy. :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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good god!!!

thats freaking fantasy? I hate u... mereko ek toh itni sardi mein shivers dilavaye uparse end mein sapna...

i never knew i would enjoy a dialogue less OS so much so mind capturing that i even forgot to think what is happening...

just i can do is read those words and picture two bodies performing the ARTS you have described with such a passion..

my my deetha... i am ur fan and i dont ever joke for it because this OS showed why i am ur fan...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#9
Didu...
Aise HOTTT HOTTT OS Likh k slow poison kyu deying...?
ArSha toh buss maarne pe hi tulley hain.. Ab aap bhi..
Haiyeee.. Ekdum jhakss os.. Uff.. Tooo hooott to handle *fans myself*
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Deetha dii I hate you for writing this OS... I'm already hell crazy and this OS didn't gimme a chance to let go off my Besharam thoughts.

Yeah it was for the promo but I read it after the whole dance and now...

Comments on the OS?? Obviously it took my breath away cuz it was written more than superbly..


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