ASYATS: MOMENTS OF CELEBRATIONS (PART 3 - PG58

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Azraa

@Azraa01

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#341

Navi, I'm speechless.. What an update. The most anticipated suhaag raat was blazingly hot..

Thank you for the dedication, I'm honoured to be your little sister..

Btw, are you ok after the break in? Hope you were not home when the burglary took place..

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sarbrathan

@sarbrathan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#342

Awesome

Typically, I don't read lemons... I would only read it if its within a story but I never read just lemons like a one-shot. Your writing was so good that I just wanted you to keep writing😉. So if you don't mind spamming and harassment can I keep spamming you to write more?😃 You really are a talented writer and I want to read more of your stories.

Please give me either your index or just a list of your stories (ff, ss, os, ts etc). The only Indian serials I have ever watched are Qubool Hai and Dil Mil Gayye, so if you have other fanfictions from other shows... I hope they are AUs or can be read without any knowledge of the show.

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#343

Navi, my dearest.

The much, much desired part is here, and goodness gracious me, what an amazing treat it is! You paid heed to my little requests, I mean I'm not going to deny that it was hot and left me all bothered, the best part about it is, it is all love that I see. And Affection. And everything that comes in between. It is really really romantic.

Some mature writings sometimes get me a lil uncomfortable and I'd cringe at certain aspects of it. But this is not that. I mean you kept us all happy. You gave me my romance. And you gave the rest their hot and steaming suhagraat.

Darling, to have written this under immense pressure (of other wordly problems) just so you keep your Valentine's Day promise to all of us, is definitely worthy of all the attention and love coming your way.

You dedicated this part to me, I am so thrilled!! I think you write so languidly. And your command of written English is absolutely a treat to read as it is so good!

Love you!!

Mwahhh

Fav part- Eye-lids kissing. Hayyyeee

The flower part was just...smokin'. (don't tell anyone I said this)

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Young And Horny!

@Perfectionist2

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#344

UNRES ON PAGE 44!

LOVE AND HUGS!

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Appu

@A.Kh_20

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#345

ohh I have read it now!! but will comment later!!

but one ques u said ur not good in hindi??😛

how come u've written that whole song?? 😲

it was so good nd unexpected!!! awesoms buddy!!!👏👏

😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😉

Edited by akh20 - 11 years ago

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noesha

@noesha

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#346

awesome wooow! thnx for the pm !

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Gourav

@Shubh007

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#347

Awesome + hot update...👍🏼

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Appu

@A.Kh_20

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#348

okk now I am here!!

As u know I am not A Res person here!!

so I get straight to point !!

It was really beautiful!!❤️

I was happy to see this romance and intimacy!!☺️

we all know Our Asad doesn't need any tips for his SR.🤣

I thought zoya wud say to wait for sometime or something but that happened was amazing!!👏

😆 I would like to say ur words I guess everyone would ahve told u by the time now U must be on cloud nine!!😆 So I am not saying it that U R AWESOME!!!🤣

U know I loved the whole especially Bonus part!!🤣

And No more words as I already pointed out about the song part which was my favourite!!⭐️❤️

As u say Humor is not ur thing but u pulled it off so well!!👏😉

So all n All I am happy and satisfied!!

and I love u!!🥳

Muaaahhh!!!😳❤️

Edited by akh20 - 11 years ago

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NAVI55

@NAVI55

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#349

Originally posted by: akh20
okk now I am here!!

As u know I am not A Res person here!!
so I get straight to point !!
It was really beautiful!!❤️
I was happy to see this romance and intimacy!!☺️
we all know Our Asad doesn't need any tips for his SR.🤣
I thought zoya wud say to wait for sometime or something but that happened was amazing!!👏
😆I would like to say ur words I guess everyone would ahve told u by the time now U must be on cloud nine!!😆 So I am not saying it that U R AWESOME!!!🤣

U know I loved the whole especially Bonus part!!🤣
And No more words as I already pointed out about the song part which was my favourite!!⭐️❤️
As u say Humor is not ur thing but u pulled it off so well!!👏😉
So all n All I am happy and satisfied!!
and I love u!!🥳
Muaaahhh!!!😳❤️