ASYATS: MOMENTS OF CELEBRATIONS (PART 3 - PG58 - Page 35

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Posted: 11 years ago
Navi, I'm speechless.. What an update. The most anticipated suhaag raat was blazingly hot..

Thank you for the dedication, I'm honoured to be your little sister..

Btw, are you ok after the break in? Hope you were not home when the burglary took place..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome


Typically, I don't read lemons... I would only read it if its within a story but I never read just lemons like a one-shot. Your writing was so good that I just wanted you to keep writing😉. So if you don't mind spamming and harassment can I keep spamming you to write more?😃 You really are a talented writer and I want to read more of your stories.

Please give me either your index or just a list of your stories (ff, ss, os, ts etc). The only Indian serials I have ever watched are Qubool Hai and Dil Mil Gayye, so if you have other fanfictions from other shows... I hope they are AUs or can be read without any knowledge of the show.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Navi, my dearest.
The much, much desired part is here, and goodness gracious me, what an amazing treat it is! You paid heed to my little requests, I mean I'm not going to deny that it was hot and left me all bothered, the best part about it is, it is all love that I see. And Affection. And everything that comes in between. It is really really romantic.

Some mature writings sometimes get me a lil uncomfortable and I'd cringe at certain aspects of it. But this is not that. I mean you kept us all happy. You gave me my romance. And you gave the rest their hot and steaming suhagraat.

Darling, to have written this under immense pressure (of other wordly problems) just so you keep your Valentine's Day promise to all of us, is definitely worthy of all the attention and love coming your way.

You dedicated this part to me, I am so thrilled!! I think you write so languidly. And your command of written English is absolutely a treat to read as it is so good!

Love you!!


Mwahhh


Fav part- Eye-lids kissing. Hayyyeee

The flower part was just...smokin'. (don't tell anyone I said this)
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Posted: 11 years ago

UNRES ON PAGE 44!

LOVE AND HUGS!
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Posted: 11 years ago
ohh I have read it now!! but will comment later!!
but one ques u said ur not good in hindi??😛
how come u've written that whole song?? 😲
it was so good nd unexpected!!! awesoms buddy!!!👏👏
😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😉
Edited by akh20 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome wooow! thnx for the pm !
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome + hot update...👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
okk now I am here!!
As u know I am not A Res person here!!
so I get straight to point !!
It was really beautiful!!❤️
I was happy to see this romance and intimacy!!☺️
we all know Our Asad doesn't need any tips for his SR.🤣
I thought zoya wud say to wait for sometime or something but that happened was amazing!!👏
😆 I would like to say ur words I guess everyone would ahve told u by the time now U must be on cloud nine!!😆 So I am not saying it that U R AWESOME!!!🤣
U know I loved the whole especially Bonus part!!🤣
And No more words as I already pointed out about the song part which was my favourite!!⭐️❤️
As u say Humor is not ur thing but u pulled it off so well!!👏😉
So all n All I am happy and satisfied!!
and I love u!!🥳
Muaaahhh!!!😳❤️
Edited by akh20 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: akh20

<font color="#009999">okk now I am here!!
</font>

<font color="#009999">As u know I am not A Res person here!!</font>
<font color="#009999">so I get straight to point !!</font>
<font color="#009999">It was really beautiful!!❤️</font>
<font color="#009999">I was happy to see this romance and intimacy!!☺️</font>
<font color="#009999">we all know Our Asad doesn't need any tips for his SR.🤣</font>
<font color="#009999">I thought zoya wud say to wait for sometime or something but that happened was amazing!!👏</font>
<font color="#009999">😆I would like to say ur words I guess everyone would ahve told u by the time now U must be on cloud nine!!😆 So I am not saying it that U R AWESOME!!!🤣
</font>
<font color="#009999">U know I loved the whole especially Bonus part!!🤣</font>
<font color="#009999">And No more words as I already pointed out about the song part which was my favourite!!⭐️❤️</font>
<font color="#009999">As u say Humor is not ur thing but u pulled it off so well!!👏😉</font>
<font color="#009999">So all n All I am happy and satisfied!!</font>
<font color="#009999">and I love u!!🥳</font>
<font color="#009999">Muaaahhh!!!😳❤️</font>


Hey Apu...

I love ur comments and u...u just so sweet...
I'm so glad u liked it...
I had the song on repeat and was writing line by line...
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Posted: 11 years ago
that came as a surprise to me seriously!!😲😆
but great job!!!👏

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