Tum ho To.. taarey ff #Thread 2 *COMPLETED*

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LET ME CHOOSE

"Taani I can explain." He said with a pleading voice. Though he wanted to explain so much, his tounge ditched him as words refused to come out.

"So am I." She finally spoke. After the long silence of 15 minutes she finally spoke. Here they both were at the same place, terrace. Before saying her final words she looked at the night sky. The star she particularly adored as her mother was shining brightly indicating that she was making the right decision. She had to do it. For Him.

He was looking at her with confusion.

"Taani I am sorry. I really am. I don't know ye sab kaise... Mein ye sab kabhi nahi chahta tha. Tum to jaanti ho na, I...I wanted you to win. Please try and understand. Mein..Mein abhi jaake unse baat karta ho. I'll make my name out of this. Mein unse keh dunga ki vo tumhe ye scholarship de de."He was blabbering continously not noticing that she was least hearing. She was lost in her own world. She was lost in him. Her eyes were glittering with tears contrary to the proud smile on her face.

"Sshh!!" She put her finger on his lips making him stop suddenly. It was then he noticed her eyes which conveyed mixed feelings. "Kitna bolte ho tum?" She giggled at her own comment while he couldn't register her behavior.

"Taani vo.." He tried speaking again.

"Sshh!! Just feel it." She said as she closed his eyes with her hand and simultaneously closed hers. The cold wind striked their faces making them shiver. The sound of the waves hitting the coast reach their ears. For a moment they lost the track of what was reality. All they knew was they were with each other.

She opened her eyes and looked at him. Her hand still lying on his eyes, he was completely lost. A smile formed on her lips. Though he was the one who could see the real taani in her, it became an exception as now she was able to see the real rey. She slowly removed her hand making him open his eyes. They looked at each other trying to find why their lives were so complex.

"Yaad hai uss din jab hum dono ke beech iss baat ka argument hua tha that who is better." Taani dipped into the pool of memories.

"Vo taani, mujhe laga tumhe achha nahi lagega. I mean tumhare saamne to kuch bhi nahi tha."

"Are you serious?? You are fab. I don't know mujhe ye kehna chahiye ya nahi but you sing better than me."

"No you are better." He said sweetly

"No you are better."She answered back more sweetly.

"No you.." soon the sweet turns into chilli red.

"You.."

"You.."

"Ok fine 50-50 kar lete hain."Taani said. They laughed together.

As soon as she said that, the scene got flashed in front of their eyes.

"Dekha meine kaha tha na, you are better and I am proud of you for being that." She paused for a moment.

"But vo scholarship tumhara sapna tha.." He said with guilt written on his face.

"Tum aur mein kya alag-alag hai rey?" She asked making him gasp in surprise. " Ha. Vo mera sapna tha. 'Tha' isliye nahi kyunki vo scholarship mujhe nahi mili balki isliye kyunki ab mera sapna hakikat ban chuka hai. Now my dream is no more a dream. Its my most beautiful reality." Rey looked at her in confusion.

" Mein Chahti hu ki tum mera dream pura karo."

~~

She wakes up with a jolt. Her breath was heavy and soon she realised that she was sweating badly. It was a dream. Again. Its been 3 years since that night but its still stored in the back of her mind. Her eyes glared at the the alarm clock which followed her command by ringing at the exact time. Soon a knock on the door, made her self conscious. She quickly grabbed her robe and wrapped it around herself permitting the person outside to enter in. It was her maid.

"Mam, driver is ready. Sir is waiting downstairs for you." She said while still standing at the doorstep.

"Tell him, I'll be there in 15 minutes." She ordered in a affirmative tone. The maid meekly nodded and walked off closing the door behind her.

She put her feet down the bed and as usual her feather slippers were waiting to slip under her feet. She grabbed her shawl from the stand nearby the bed and wrapped it carefully on her body not allowing cold wind to pierce it. She moved towards the balcony. It was 4:30 and Sun had still not shown up. She was used to waking up early. The Delhi never seems too quite. A small smile formed on her lips. She inhaled the morning air before drifting back to room and start her daily routine. The dream went again to the back of her mind. It might come back other night but now she knew this is her life.

"Radha, mere bags gadi mein rakhwa do!" She came shouting out of her room in her churidaars. Her eyes were glued inside her handbag, checking for the last time if she had taken everything while her legs moved down the stairs effortlessly. As soon as she was done checking the essentials her eyes moved up only to find her best friend, Rithvik giving her a warm smile. She smiled back.

"Mam, Breakfast??" The maid came running to her.

"No. Mein aur Sir bahar kuch kha lenge." She gave a smile to her and she happily returned back. " Radha, make sure ki ghar puri tarah se clean rahe and everything is manged in my absence. Mujhe mere waapis aane pe kuch gadbad nahi chahiye." Radha, her maid, nodded making notes in her mind. "Mere liye koi bhi parcel aaye ya koi bhi mujhse milne aaye to mujhe call karke inform karna aur agar mein available na hoon to sir ko inform karna." Taani looked at her with eyebrows raised.

"Yes Mam." She said instantly.

"Taani ab chale. Late ho raha hai." He gave a pleading look to her. She smiled at his antics.

"Take care Radha." Taani gave a grin to her and get out of the house getting inside the car along with Rithvik. The car drove outside the main door of mansion that reads with golden letters ' SHIKHA NIWAS'

~~

"Rey, Its time. You're live in 3 minutes." His P.A. got him out of his trance. He nodded and she moved out giving him his privacy again. He picked up the pic he had in his hand moments ago.

" I wish tum aaj yaha hoti." He carresed the pic trying to feel her.

~~

"Ha baba!! We are on our way. Don't worry aaj shaam tak hum waha honge." Taani said.

"Taani, how can you tell me not to worry, I am freaking getting married." Sharon shouted on top of her lungs.

"Ya!! I got that babes. But agar tumne zyada tension liya to tumhe fine lines aur dark circles ho jayenge. Ab choice tumhara hai, tum apni shaadi mein khoobsurat dikhna chahti ho ya tired." Taani said as she high fived Rithvik. She knew she hit the right spot. Sharon started checking her face in mirror in tension. Swayam who knew where the track is going quickly snatched the phone from sharon.

"Taani, c'mon yaar she is already tensed." Swayam got on line. Taani could hear his giggles too.

"Ab hone wale dulhe aur dulhan ko thoda pareshaan na kiya jaaye, to shaadi mein kya maza." She said over the phone.

"Achha bas, ab baki pareshaan yahan aake kar lena. And yeah! Tell your driver to drive safely. Raat ko Manali ki roads are not even that safe." Swayam said before chucking the call.

"Manali.." She murmured under her breath.

~~

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T_TbIuCumuY

"Reyaansh...Reyaansh..." He could hear the crowd cheering him. For any artist this is heaven but this was not the thing which gives him inner solace. He closed his eyes and kept his hand on the mike. Instantly her image formed in front of his eyes singing while holding her mike. She was his inspiration and the only reason why he was still living.

Wo o o o...

He started singing and instantly the whole crowd went silent. They started loosing themselves in the voice.

Aasaan nahi yahaan aashiq ho jaana

Palkon pe kaanton ko sajaana

Aashiq ko milti hai gham ki saugaatein

Sabko naa milta yeh khajaana

For the world he was a superstar but for him, he was a lover. Her lover. Who is living everyday to fullfill every dream of hers. She is not with him but he know that even this loneliness is the sign of their love which is eternal.

Wo o o o...

Taani's car took the highway finally picking pace. Rithvik was busy in handling buisness stuff on his mobile while she was glancing the views bypassing them. She was going to Manali after 3 years. She is going to meet all of them after 3 years. But most importantly she had a little hope of meeting him again.

She let the wind refresh her. After a long time she wanted to enjoy the wind as if it has brought something with it. May be his smell.

Baaton se aage, waadon se aage

Dekho zara tum kabhi ho o..

Yeh to hai shola, yeh hai chingari

Yeh hai jawaag bhi

He opened his eyes and looked at the crowd which was completely lost. His gaze moved to a couple in the crowd leaning on each other holding hands in hands. He could see they are in love. A very strange feeling started empowering him. A feeling he didn't felt for years.

Wo o o o...

Taani knew the day she told him to move on, that they have to face seperation. To make him succeed in his career, she had to take the step. They have to go in different directions. Though their ways separated , she was always very sure about the strength of their love. She still love him with all of herself and believe that their story is not over. They will meet again cause her destiny never fails to surprise her.

The car stopped suddenly with a jerk and it didn't took them much time to realise that it needed repair. Taani came out facing the highway. Within the torturing sun rays, high speed vehicles her eyes captured a group of kids playing in the mud and a flashback of her rain dance with him came in front of her eyes.


Jismon ke peechhe bhaage ho phirte

Utro kabhi rooh mein ho..

Hota kya aashiq, kya aashiqhi hai

Hogi khabar tab tumhein

Though their ways departed, he always believed in they are meant to be one. He always found her close to him within his heart. He feels his presence in the music, in each and every part of his life, in himself.

Before he was in love but these 3 years taught him the real meaning of 'Aashiqui'.

Wo o o o...

Both of them might not be physically together but their hearts still beat for each other. Their love is too eternal to be called love now. They departed knowing the fact that love is becoming stronger and one day it will beat all the odds making them one, this time forever.

He ended his song but it took the audience sometime to get out of its trance. Soon the whole place was empowered by applause and cheers of his name.

As usual of his habit, he moved out of the stage without paying much heed to it except giving them a smile.

"Rey, tumhare liye call hai." His P.A. informed him.

"Mujhe iss waqt akele rehna hai. Jo bhi hai baad mein call karne ke liye keh do." He said as he started moving towards his green room.

"But call Manali se hai." He stopped instantly shifting his gaze to her. "He said he's your college friend- Swayam." She said hesitantly. He grabbed the phone from her.

"Hello!" His voice was trembling.

"Hello ke bachhe!! Tu abhi tak Mumbai mein hi hai. Manali kya sab khatam hone ke baad aayega?" Swayam said from the other line.

"Huh?? Kya khatam hone ke baad? Kya bol raha hai tu swayam?"

"Don't tell me Rey. Did you get the card?"

"What card? What are you talking about?"

"Oh God!! Stupid!! I am getting married. Meine tumhe card bheja tha. Call karke batane ki bhi koshish ki but these days I guess you are quite busy. Two weeks mein shaadi hai meri." Swayam finally blurted in frustration.

"What??!! Kisse?" Rey asked and swayam smacked his head on the wall.

"Juliana Roberts se??!! Gadhe!! Jab propose sharon ko kiya tha to shaadi bhi usi se karunga na!" Swayam was ready to bomb Rey's head.

"I am so sorry swayam. Mujhe pata nahi kaise vo card nahi mila. Aur mein tere phone calls bhi attend nahi kar paya. I am really sorry." Rey was feeling guilty.

"Tere sorry tabhi applied hai jab tu mujhe apne arrival ki date bata dega." Swayam said finally calming.

"Are you mad?? Itni badi news ke baad mein yaha five minutes bhi nahi rukunga. I am leaving for Manali right now. I'll be there by tomorrow morning." He smiled. It was like he was getting his old days back.

"Great!! Mein abhi ye news sharon ko deta ho. " Swayam chucked the call and looked at sharon sitting beside him with a wide smile.

"Step 1 completed." Swayam said with proud in his eyes. Sharon high fived him indicating their victory.

~~

"Tracy, Meri Manali ki flight ki earliest tickets book karo. Aur agle two weeks ke liye mere saare events cancel kar do." He ordered his P.A.

"But sir, itni jaldi Flight ki tickets arrange kaise hongi. Earliest flight kal subah ki hi hai." She said. No matter what, he just wanted to leave for Manali as early as possible. His mind popped with another idea.

"Its ok! Ghar phone karo and tell them to pack my bags. I'll go by car." He said and she immediately followed.

"Here I come Manali." He moved towards his car starting yet another journey in the hope of finding her again in the way. And this time he is not gonna let her go anywhere.

Edited by deepkriti - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update.congo for 2nd thread
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congratulation for second thread

superb update
u were right u made me cry

it was beautifully written
every emotion every single moment

i could feel luv in each n every line

superb 👏

update next part asap
Edited by princess_tara - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I hate u hate dear really really love u
Emotional Update de diya... Mujhe rula diya...
3 years ka gap omg... Rey sing song full heart touching love it...
Taani New best friend rhitvik... Nice
Taarey are separate why dear... 3 years before kya hua tha... Jaldi batana
The most lovely words they love each other still
Taarey going to manali... Yupee means Taarey after how will they react
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing update!!!
Yes taani isn't mad!!
But they are far apart!!
Loved the song!!
Full on aashiqui mode!!|
Please jaldi se update karo!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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so u sepaeated taarey
how could u 😡

unexpected update
taani delhi mein n rey mumbai
u drifted them apart
rithvik kaha se aa gaya beech mein 😡


rey swayam convo was nice
swaron getting married guddd

tum taarey ko milva do yaar plzzz
😭


update soon
still on hunger strike
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Posted: 11 years ago
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so u separated taarey
how could u 😡

unexpected update
taani delhi mein n rey mumbai
u drifted them apart
rithvik kaha se aa gaya beech mein 😡


rey swayam convo was nice
swaron getting married guddd

tum taarey ko milva do yaar plzzz
😭


update soon
still on hunger strike
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update
but u seperated TR😡
taani understand him but seperated their ways😭
don't bring rithwik in between TR
reyam and taaron talk is nice
wow TR loves eachother now also😃
pls soon TR together again
update soon

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