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Posted: 11 years ago
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So Finally I am here with My yet another valentine OS..This time it's on Love of my life *RaHi*🤗...This is the valentine gift to all my crazy RaHians and of course to all TBPians...hope u guys like it..😳

Valentine for a Lifetime

I was so angry!

No, even angry would be an understatement!

It was Valentine's Day for heavens' sake! A day of love, togetherness, passion...And where was I? Stuck in this collage library, composing a song for that good for nothing Mr. Ranveer jerk shergil...

"Screw this intercollegiate competition" I cursed the coming competition in which Nonu is going to participate for the nth time that day... "And screw you Nonu!" I cursed my best friend who had given me the task and kept me stuck here till late while everyone else except the two of us had left for the day, enjoying their Valentine's.

I sighed...

Did I mention that my good-for-nothing best friend is my boyfriend as well? Although we both know each other since childhood but We had been dating for a year now...I tried not thinking about it...Because every time I did, it made me realize that we were still where we were in childhood...But I still didn't have the heart to tell him how disappointed I was with this no-progress relationship we were in...I was scared of losing him...I know ,I know, I myself told him to take it slow..but come on now..I already proposed him that too publically..Ab aur kitne hint dun is idiot ko ..I cursed him again

It wasn't that I didn't trust him...I did, and I knew he loved me to death...But was that all I was going to get all my life?

I looked at our photograph on my Cell and smiled...What am I thinking? He was perfect...The perfect boyfriend ' good-looking, annoying, considerate, annoying, caring, annoying, loving, annoying, protective, annoying, possessive, annoying...Wondering why I'm repeating annoying so much? Well that was because every time he did something over the top for me, you could expect his stupid jokes surfacing just the next minute...He couldn't be serious even for a second.

That fact widened my smile ' I was the only thing he had ever been serious about... He had given me things I had asked for and even things which I had never pictured myself having all my life...He had made every dream of mine come true in such a way, that I felt blissful...He has the most charming and infectious smile[So True], with a hint of that hot, kick-boxer body, and was every girl's desire...But he didn't spare those dim-witted girls even one glance...Okay, maybe that was a bit exaggerated...Obviously he looked at other girls, he was a guy...After all he was a Casanova all his life..Like Literally .But he normally did that only to get on my nerves...!

Then why was I getting so worked up, I wondered? He was all that I could ask for.

It had been like my whole life since I know him...I had met Ranveer on my first day in school when I was Five..We obviously had not hit it off instantly, he use to call me Moti but whenever someone else called me by this name he just took fight with them..Just for me..And all those year..We were like always there for each other..In every thick and thin..My family is his only family and I am his only Best friend..Same goes for me also..I don't know why and how I fell for him but according to my Mom I am in love with him since I was seven..May be she is right..Few months ago when he confess his feelings to me that too in a dramatic way..I was on cloud nine..I mean HE is the only one I want for Me..My Nonu<3

Right now we are working on a song..Firstly I thought that had been the cherry on the cake for the two of us, because we got to spend every hour of every day with each other, But now I am regretting this..Aarrghh..It's a valentine night for god sake..

Finishing on the last bit of the Notation, I proceeded towards him and found him deep in thought, staring at a piece of paper in his hand.

"I'm done! Can we head home now?" I asked and plopped myself on the chair , while he looked up and gave me a vague smile.

"Yeah...Just one favor please! Can you read up this one...Need your feedback on it, and please make the necessary corrections...Then we can head back home..." He gave me an apologetic smile while I glared at him. He was testing my patience big time, and the point was that he knew that!

"Ranveer, it's Valentine's Day okay? Can't we just finish this tomorrow? I'm exhausted!" I sighed and got up.

"I understand Moti, but seriously we have to get this song done by tomorrow afternoon! St. Valentine isn't gonna come and finish this for us! Please! And I'm right here right? Like who cares if we don't go to any fancy restaurant? Your valentine's right here! " He grinned at me but then stopped smiling when he saw my nostrils flare. "I promise I won't make you wait longer!" He added to appease me. But that word 'wait' was the last straw for me!

"Yeah right! Not make me wait longer? Seriously? You don't know exactly how much you've made me wait! Its been all my life Ranveer! I've been waiting since childhood! How long? Isn't this long enough? I'm sick of this! Every morning, I wake up and hope that maybe today would be the day when you take this relationship a step ahead, but you disappoint me every time! I'm fed up Ranveer!" I yelled, as I felt two fat tears of frustration roll down my cheeks.

Ranveer just looked at me with a forlorn expression, but didn't make any attempts to come to me, give me a tight hug, tell me he loved me, and that everything would be okay...

"Just proof-read this once and you're free to go then..."

He mumbled, while all my expectations flew out of the window. I didn't know why, but I had this sick feeling in the pit of my stomach that his words 'you're free to go' meant something else...

Sobbing silently, I took that paper from his hand and kept wondering ' what just happened? Was this it? The end? Had I screwed up by telling him all this? Screwed up big time?

Leaning back against my chair, I sighed. I wiped my tears and decided to get done with the task and call it a day, sleep on it for the night, and hope...Hope that nothing would change after this night...So much for a nice, lovely Valentine's Day...

I took a deep breath and began to read, but then sat up as I read..

"Panchi aka My Moti

I won't say this over a candle-light dinner on the beach.. you know how those romantic beyond belief kind of things never appeal to me...I know, I use to do all this for other girls..But for You..Naahh,..You are way to special Panchi..

Although words would never explain what I feel for you, I felt it was the best way to let you know, since it was our passion for music and songs which always bring us together!..Since Childhood.. I thought maybe it would be best if I penned down what I had to say, what I felt, what you mean to me, and how these years we've spent together have changed me and made me what I am today...

I know I've kept you waiting...Waiting for very long...And I don't know if I would be justified when I say that these years I've spent with you have been so amazing, I didn't have the heart to move forward lest all of that would change... I cannot lose you, because if I ever did, I'd have lost my best friend, my soul mate, my smile, my laugh, my everything

But now, I think I'm ready for those changes which I had been avoiding all this while...And I don't mind telling you something I've been dying to say since the past few months...

I love you Panchi...I'm madly, crazily and head over heels in love with you!

I can't promise I'll never hurt you...But I promise to make it up to you every time...

I can't promise I'll never let tears come in your eyes...But I promise to be there to wipe them off...

I can't promise that we'll never fight...But I promise that I'll love you through it all...

You can get angry with me how many ever times you want, but I'll never fail to bring that smile back on your face...You can shower me with your all your love and all your abuses, and say that you hate me, but I'll love you no matter what...

I know you think I'm perfect for you, and also seem to think that you aren't for me...But if imperfections are gonna be as beautiful as you, then I don't mind having an imperfect life...

You complete me in every way possible, and you've changed
me in ways no one ever could!

I know you always wanted that perfect romantic setting at the time I would ask you, by the beach, in candle light, with slow and soft music, but for me, everything is perfect the way it is only if you're part of it all...

And that's why, I'm just gonna ask now..."

The words ended there, and I turned the paper around to see if he's completed it...But he hadn't...What did he wanna ask me?

"If you have some time to spare, will you be my valentine for the rest of my life?"

I turned around to find him on his knees, his hand held out with a tiny box in his hand...He opened it, and revealed a heart shaped diamond stone for a ring...

"Please?"

And then, my tears gave away...I would give away a lifetime for this beautiful moment,! Ranveer grinned and got up, and pulled me into a tight hug...

While I sobbed into his shirt, clinging onto his collar, he pulled my other hand and put the ring into my finger...I smiled slightly as he kissed my hand...

"I don't remember saying yes!" I teased, while he cocked his eyebrows skeptically. "I might have to check my diary you know...Since my best frnd keeps feeding me with so much of work; ..his song composing and all..I doubt I'll have time to spend my life with you!" I sighed dramatically, while he chortled...

"I guess we'll just have to ask him to lay it off now don't we?" He grinned while I laughed.

Pulling me up slightly, he pulled me into a sweet, gentle kiss, and I savored the moment...

"Oh and Happy Valentine's Day!" He pulled back and smiled, while I just kissed him again in response...It was the best Valentine's I could have ever asked for!

So this is it..I hope I am succeed to penned down My RaHi feelings through this OS😳...waiting for your comments guys...don't forget to press the like button...Happy valentine's day once again..Love you all🤗

Lots of Love

Geet

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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
Yayyy. First one to comment..
Geet i loved it loved loved.dude you are too good.
I mean its just feels amazing reading ur works.
Thanx a lot for this.
Love u... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Geet THANK U!!! U gave me something worthwhile on rahi to cheer today... the episode m yet to catch it...
ur os s dreamy... perfect... different... unique... nonu moti magic at full play..n the way rv proposed s out f this world n had me grinning like crazy in the middle f the restaurant n my friend's stares too..until I showed it to him n he found it so well written though he doesn't know the characters... n I loved the forever dimension u hv added to their relationship...so rahi yaa..u have sure succeeded n expressing my rahi feelings through this os babe... thanks once more...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Gr8... 👏
Mast... 👏
Awesome... 👏
Amazing... 👏
Kya kahoon ???? I'm out of compliments Geet... 😕 😆
Ur sooo good & fast... must say...*1 din mein 2 OS* 😲
HATS OFF
Luv u loads ❤️
🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: anjali1805

Yayyy. First one to comment..
Geet i loved it loved loved.dude you are too good.
I mean its just feels amazing reading ur works.
Thanx a lot for this.
Love u... 😊


Anjali🤗
Thanks dear
I am glad u liked it😳
Love u too sweetheart
Muhaaa
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely...
would be an understatement!
It's just so sweet!
I loved the piece of paper...it was just so full of love!
I wish that they could use this work in the show also!😆
It's amazing how you have described every emotion!
*blush* I can imagine Panchi's face!
I loved it!
Do please continue writing more!
I am so happy that you are a part of RaHi fandom!
Cheers!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#7

Originally posted by: sneha02

Geet THANK U!!! U gave me something worthwhile on rahi to cheer today... the episode m yet to catch it...

ur os s dreamy... perfect... different... unique... nonu moti magic at full play..n the way rv proposed s out f this world n had me grinning like crazy in the middle f the restaurant n my friend's stares too..until I showed it to him n he found it so well written though he doesn't know the characters... n I loved the forever dimension u hv added to their relationship...so rahi yaa..u have sure succeeded n expressing my rahi feelings through this os babe... thanks once more...


Neha My dear🤗
Awieee thanks a lot sweetheart for such long and sweet comment
Just made my day😳

Awwiie
I am glad that u liked it so much😳

that's so sweet of you
yupp Our RaHi are indeed the best

Thanks once again for ur valuable comments
Means a lot
Love u

Muahhh🤗


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Posted: 11 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: luv_u_Bharti

Gr8... 👏

Mast... 👏
Awesome... 👏
Amazing... 👏
Kya kahoon ???? I'm out of compliments Geet... 😕 😆
Ur sooo good & fast... must say...*1 din mein 2 OS* 😲
HATS OFF
Luv u loads ❤️
🤗


Hey dear🤗
I am glad u liked it so much
Means a lot

So sweet of u🤗

actually I was planning this from last week
want to post both the OS's on this special day😳

small Valentine gift for all TBPians😳



Edited by sweetdesire - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: diyataarey

Lovely...
would be an understatement!
It's just so sweet!
I loved the piece of paper...it was just so full of love!
I wish that they could use this work in the show also!😆
It's amazing how you have described every emotion!
*blush* I can imagine Panchi's face!
I loved it!
Do please continue writing more!
I am so happy that you are a part of RaHi fandom!
Cheers!


Hey dear🤗
of-course I am a big crazy RaHi fan yaar😳
so proud to be their fan

Thanks a lot for ur sweet words
I am glad u liked it so much
Means a lot😳

will surely write more
Muahhh🤗



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Posted: 11 years ago
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its v day, and what else better than a romantic os? that too on rahi?😉

ok i just loved these lines


I won't say this over a candle-light dinner on the beach.. you know how those romantic beyond belief kind of things never appeal to me...I know, I use to do all this for other girls..But for You..Naahh,..You are way to special Panchi..



I can't promise I'll never hurt you...But I promise to make it up to you every time...

I can't promise I'll never let tears come in your eyes...But I promise to be there to wipe them off...

I can't promise that we'll never fight...But I promise that I'll love you through it all...




hayyy they are way too special, their style of expressing feelings is way better than those candle nights...though i dream about this setting a lot😆 but its perfect for them. this couple dont need anything special, being together is enough and they make it magical😳


thanks for pm and happy V day

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