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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
it answered a lot...but i really hope they won't part forever... i think aditya is going to turn into a bad character now...??
is this going to be dark and twisty??

update soon...

P.S if u want to reply to my comments pls scrap me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
superb...

poor Arnav...

guess Adi will ditch Khushi...

continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
Wow can't believe the hatred Khushi has for Arnav? What next? Is Aditya really a nice guy?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
Loved d update
y do I have a hunch
of Adi being d bad guy
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
I love this ASR...
He got that skill which catches you instantly...
I love his witty replies to every Khushi's angry retorts...
He is hurt beyond anyone can put into words, his brain isn't responding to any of the pain...
I am concerned before Khushi will realize what she has been doing.
It will be too late...

Arnav is hurt...You can feel it...
I hope he doesn't end up doing that will turn into a big mess...
I don't know whose baby is really Khushi carrying...
If it's not Arnav but Adi...I must say very good job khushi...She was totally prepared to hurt Arnav in every possible way
I hope Arnav will be fine...
I got scared while reading as he remained under water...
And came out only to realize Khushi was there and he said,"you shouldn't have come!"
Just because she came there and he was concerned about her...

And hats off to you, for making Khushi such a character...
She is a head strong lady...I liked it...
She is standing for herself...
But if Arnav apologized for his deeds, and ultimately married her. Than I think she is being way too hyper...
But yes obviously she never loved Arnav but so called Aditiya...
Looking forward to the next update!!!

If Aditiya didn't show up or denied to accept the baby!? Looks like he isn't a good guy at all...
If he is not...Khushi is falling a prey into her own set trap!!

I will not be surprised if she will come back to Arnav...
I also doubt the damage she is doing to Arnav, he will ever come out of his trance!!

Awesome chapter...can't wait for the next part!!!
Edited by Banilovesbarun - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
i think adi n karan r d same person, i M just guessing.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: Banilovesbarun

I love this ASR...
He got that skill which catches you instantly...
I love his witty replies to every Khushi's angry retorts...
He is beyond pain, his brain isn't responding to any of the pain...
I am concerned before Khushi will realize what she has been doing.
It will be too late...

Arnav is hurt...You can feel it...
I hope he doesn't end up doing that will turn into a big mess...
I don't know whose baby is really Khushi carrying...
If it's not Arnav but Adi...I must say very good job khushi...
I hope Arnav will be fine...
I got scared while reading as he remained under water...
And came out only to realize Khushi was there and he said,"you shouldn't have come!"
Just because she came there and he was concerned about her...

And hats off to you, for making Khushi such a character...
She is a head strong lady...I liked it...
She is standing for herself...
But if Arnav apologized for his deeds, and ultimately married her...
But yes obviously she never loved Arnav but so called Aditiya...
Looking forward to the next update!!!

Aditiya didn't show up...Looks like he isn't a good guy at all...
If he is not...Khushi is falling a prey into her own set trap!!

I will not be surprised if she will come back to Arnav...
I also doubt the damage she is doing he will ever come out of it!!!

Awesome chapter...can't wait for the next part!!!




Thank you for the analysis on Arnav and Khushi...
Arnav is dealing with his guilt...
Whereas Khushi is a sharp woman...I guess yes, I introduce a very different Khushi...
For a change!!!
And to be honest I am loving writing this story...
I am loving writing Arnav, who is hurt, who is betrayed, but at the same time he is calm...
Edited by InLuvWithASR - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
poor arnav...i really feel bad for him...
Ummm i a hv feeling lyk adi may not accept his child or tell khushi to use child for gaining arnav's propety...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks for the pm


Why I dont know somewhere i think arnav is the father of the child and khushi is taking revenge on him saying its adi's
Edited by madhusquare - 11 years ago

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