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Love.life2

@Love.life2

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Thnx for d pm

Awesome updt.

Nice start to the story.

Hey jus a question

Did the convo bet Arnav n Khushi reg the revenge n past occur b4 the news of pregnancy or after.

I mean d prologue hd a convo which ws in bet the 2 updt.

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Sutapa Sarbabhom

@sutapasarbabhom

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Asom part just confused is kushi prgnt with aditya child loking forward hw story unfold tanx for pm

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Sarah

@ifsaal044

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Khushi is the one that betrayed! This is got to be a first. Very interesting. You have to write this!

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priya

@priasweet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#64

amazing update
poor arnav
even though he did wrong
this is a very big punishment for him
pls continue soon

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ipktouch

@ipktouch

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#65

superb update..well written..betrayal is painful..will destroy the gud in ppl that inturn destroy their life..make our life upside down..i think that was what happening with arnav..he had learnt the lesson..lost his love now..and the lesson was waiting for kushi to get learnt..she miscalculated arnav..but with his gud response her heart was pricking..one had betrayed n the other took revenge n destroyed the beautiful relationship..waiting for the next..

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rockingchamp

@rockingchamp

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

awesome start i m loving this story already a 3 dimensiol betrayel khushi betraying arnav arnav betraying khushi adi awesome start it all happened bcoz of arnav's obessive and monstrous nature somehow i didn't pity for arnav after he betrayed them atlast he did a great thing by setting her free hope both of them got what they deserved..great start continue soon...

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Chandana

@chandana.s

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Wow... Thats a dhamakadar update...

Arnav loves Khushi but she loves someone else & to get her he told everyone that she slept with him & married her,Now she is preggy & its not Arnav's child...Seems like all 3 of the betrayed one or the other

Is she really preggy with aditya's child.? and Khushi may tell that she hates him but it doesnt seems like that..

Great start... Looking forward for next update

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Michelle

@-ChildOfChrist-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

😲 Seriously Khushi I can't believe you did that 😡

poor Arnav 😭

That was a dhamakedar update

update ASAP

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bs1224

@bs1224

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Read in a go...

Loved it

Arnav was wrong.. But he did apologized . didn't he ?... She not only betrayed him but is also got pregnant...

Arnav rightly said...if she was not ready to forgive him..she should have said it. She should not have played with his emotions.. When he truly was guilty for his past deeds and was now ready to make up for it...

But she ripped his soul apart...

He is setting her free...that's the only thing a person madly in love can DO...

Adi ... Do he seriously love her...

Why am i have a Strong feeling like she is also going to be ditched by her So called LOVE..

Anyways waiting desperately to read more..

Thanks for pm.

Well done 👏

Update soon

Edited by bs1224 - 11 years ago