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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very very interesting update...Khushi is damned being hard on Arnav...A very different glimpse of him and Khushi as well...Still in denial this baby is of Adi not Arnav's...It's quite possible it's Arnav's baby, Khushi is only hiding to have him pain...But truly it's hard to believe...because so far what I have read is same from the serial... This one I love her...good she is taking revenge...he so damn needed it...He is getting what he did.

As far Adi is in a picture, he is definitely culprit who might use Khushi's baby to take Arnav's property or something...

I am loving it...continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing update
May be Adi and Karan are one. I think.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
did she really allow adi to mark her...feeling sad for arnav...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
Interesting update
loved reading it
feel that Khushi will be let down by Aditiya big time.
Thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Feeling very bad for arnav he loves khushi so much n she hates him..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
nice chapter...
so much hate towards Arnav...

But still she went in the pool for him...

Arnav is so much concern, the way he said he will take care of her...

Seems like Adi is going to ditch her...

looking forward
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
loving dis story great portray of characterisation khusi a sharp independent women arnav first a monster now when reality hit him he is in guilt as well as in pain a real deadly combination it could be fatal i hope he survive this trauma and not land himself on a big mess his brain and heart is not responding properly after the betrayal i dont know how he came wid those witty replies or it was his guilt speaking for him but the impact is awesome i really would hope dis adi guy to be good who really love khushi that would spice up dis story a great deal i really felt arnav's pain and have fallen in love wid him all over again if khushi does not pair him wid me (priya) that would be awesome really i m loving dis story and a great 2nd part looking forward for the 3rd i know i m being greedy but plz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
I'm now more of sure of adi .ditching khushi...
Poor arnav ..he is so shattered that now no pain seems to hurt him...
Well done👏👏👏👏
Thanks for pm...
Khushi will get what he deserve ...
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice written
Poor Arnav
Looking forward to read next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh my god. what khusi is doing?

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