New MG SS 'Humhari Adhoori Kahani',part1 pg3,updated 12/2 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rashmivaish

congrats Sheens for the new work

ek baat bataao sad hai kya ?
I mean traguc end..
If yes then ... I feel depressed seeing a story ending in a tragic way
please kaho ki ye aisi nahin hai
I mean jitne chahe utne twist laao but no tragic end please eee eee eee

thank ya di..!
Lol cant reveal it now,but let's c how it goes...!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Maan.maniac


HAPPY ROSE DAY
UPDATING PART1

same to you Sheens
waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Alag huwa tujhse

Jane kyun yae duriyan huwi

Pucha jou Khuda say

Muskura ke bola

Pagle teri khata nahi

Is Ishq ki kahani maine likhi hi adhori thi...

(by Prernain)


They were meant to be togethr but their

"HEART" betrayed them..

They sacrificed their "FRIENDSHIP" for the sake of "LOVE"

They sacrificed their "LIFE" to earn their "LOVE "..


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Part1


It was a sunny morning,after geting fair share of rain since last 2 days on the roads of Washington, sunlight encroaching the clouds was quite hot and bright..In one of the royal mension one occupant was tosing n turning on the bed to escape the hot blazing rays of sun ,after lot of struggle , the quilt was blowed away in air, "there stood a taught muscular Greek God in black vest n black trousers Maan S Khurana known as the King Of business World .."

For world he was the richest n young busines tycoon but deep down he was alone n the weakest person," squinting out the intensive light of sun which was penetrating throught the windows Maan lazily dodged from bed puting his feet on ground held his acing head inbtween his hands due to excrusiating hangover ,",Drinking was sumthing he was never fond of but time n circumstances made him to take help of the liquor when pain at times was too unbearable to resist...

He searched for the Glass of lime juice but there was nothing, anoyingly checkd time on watch he was late so without wasting any more time he walked away to washroom to freshnup...it was after 15 mnuts whn door knob clicked maan walked out of the washroom in ust towel wrapped around his waist n water droplets dripping down his hair adding more to his alluring luks...

everything was same the way he left ,checking around he noticed neither his coffee was there nor his formals were been placed on bed,which was quite unusual.shruging off he himself went n took pair of his formals out of cupboard heading back to washroom to change...

Khurana Mansion Hall,

Royality was oozing out of every corner,Lavishing decor with beautiful paintings n carving adorning every grand wall of the hall...

Nakul an indian skivvy but the most trusted man, was seting bowls on dining table ,seeing Maan decending down the stairs Nakul fastly stepd into the kitchen to get his coffee, .maan dodged on the head chair of the dining table, whole mansion was quite asusual, maan was engrosed in file siping cofee from mug simultaneously.

Nakul who after butering the bread steped off to leave when maan beckoned him " Nakul ghar mai koi nahi hai",

Nakul who absurdly lukd back to his master with a dipped head replied " sir woh Mam subah subah hi kahi chali gayi",

maan noded his head n continued havng his cofee...while nakul left to kitchen...

Emptying the mug ,maan grabed few of files from the table n left for his work...

After wat apeared like an eternity the car stood infront of the giant building of K&S Industries n black dressed security guards rushed towards centre car to open the door for their master...

Maan steped out of car marched towards the giant building with english security guards following him, Maan was dresed in formals white shirt under grey vest n formal pants, elegance ozing out of his every gesture, adding fervlous looks to his hot demaneour...

All employes got up to greet their boss, but maan wthout replying back to any one dodged inside his cabin...folowed by his accountant Aditya shergill n senior architect Sasha, with whom he got busy in dscussing sum designs...

whole day passed ,darkness bgan to engulf the city n cold breeze of air was blowing n a gal clad in black saree was moving aimlessly along the streets n her face was shielded by the long strands of her long hair which was messed up by the blowing air. Too occupied by thoughts n events through which her life was going,lost in agony n pain, for world she was married but in reality alone no one to care for, no one to share her pain, no one just alone n her soul engulfed by the darkness of loneliness ,

she was cnfused wat she did to desrve this life,

she was jolly fun loving ,but now being happy n smile was a curse for her, she had everything name ,fame, power n capital but the one for whose love she craved he was physically with her but his soul belonged to sum one else.,


for world she was the happiest n the luckiest gal but in reality she was the most unfortunate gal who steped into this life with all her will, just to be with the person whom she luvd with all her might,too lost in her agony she didnt even heard the bell of her phone which was beging for her attention since how long, meanwhile a car from nowhere caught up to her smashing her body to the ground.. .

Earlier before Maan called back to mansion informing nakul to get the red covered file from his study table to office which he left back at home n before he cud have disconnected line maan interrupted him " where is madam ,have she returned ",to which nakul replied no sir.

it was aftr than maan got woried about her absence " kahan chali gayi", when adi told him that clients r waiting for him so he left without thinking much...

I******'

After meeting Maan was deeply engrossed in his work a slight knock on his door derived him out of his file " come in" ,


A gal of mid twenties in black knee length skirt in white shirt neatly tucked in it and golden brown hair tied in a bun stepped in ,

Maan: Yes Jeni,

Jeni : Sir we hav a meeting with T&C telecom company.

Maan who was busy typing on his lappy answered " so",

Jeni: sir actually Mam has to attend the meeting, but she haven't yet arrived,

Hearing her words he stopped doing his work and turned towards Jeni who stood in front of him,

Maan: did u informed her,

Jeni: sir she already know , we still tried to contact her but she's not answering the call.

Stress lines became prominent on Maan's crown,her absence was worrying him from morning but Jenis words alerted him " ok you go i'l call her",

Once Jeni left Maan took his phone and was hesitantly looking to it, but continuous confirmation of her absence made him shrug off all his inhibitions n he punched the no. On his iphone, the bell was ringing but nobody was answering the call,he kept on trying but no result.. he punched some other no. Luckily phone was answered just after three bells, but before he could talk a voice stoped him,

Op.side = Owmygwaad i hope am not dreaming ,

"Mr. Khurana, the great business tycoon is calling me"

Maan was rubing his temple in annoyance,

Op.side = Hello, u there.

Maan=huhh take a deep breath Meer (Meera Raichand Maan's best friend)

Op.side = ohh Sorry, Seeing you calling me i was angry,

Finally you got time to call me, unlike that Lola Bunny!!!,

You know what i hate you guyz,

Two weeks have passed since i came back from Indiana but neither you nor ur that Bunny got time to meet me,

You guyz are too bad,

Maan who by now was relaxed with the thought that Meer is the only one who'll lessen his tension but it was doubled more

"that means she didnt came to meet you",

Meer= was she coming to meet me?

Maan who was feeling lost of words fumbled " no, ac- actually she's mi - missing from morning

, i thought maybe she came to meet you.

Meer who tiil now was busy with her complaining session,was kicked out of her reverie with Maan's missing word "What do you mean by missing??

Maan told her everything that took place from morning scaring Meera,

Meera: Maan what did you do with her?

Maan was caught off guard with meeras sudden question,

Maan= (hesitantly answered) nothing,

Meera who by now was sure now something was mis "did you called uncle, maybe she would have went to meet him",

Maan= No i didnt call there!!

Meera who got angry with his negligence "What do you mean you haven't yet called there,

It should be the first place which you should have checked"

Maan= hold on Meer,

I would have called there but dad is not keeping well from some days,

He'll get worried that's why,

Meer= so what?

Maan= I can't call there but you can call?

Meer = ohh yea I'll try to confirm in pretence of checking on uncles health..

Maan= ok i'l be waiting call me back soon.

After like 15minutes Meera called back Maanbut again was disappointed " thanks Meer will call you"

Maan ruffled his hair in anxiety he informed her PA to reshedule meeting to next week.

he tried to confirm from many places but got to hear same words "no".

it was almost geting dark when maan moved out of cabin n thought to call her again, after lot of trying there was no reply...


it was 8.00 of evening he called back home numerous times but got the same reply, after thinking for a brief moment he punched no. On his iphone calling again n again but was disapointed he stood to leave but was still calling this time after two three bells the call was answered , male with a gutty voice answered back " hello",


Maans facial luk was changed to astonishment like he was xpecting someone else, he puled down his phone n chckd the number 1ce again ,but his xpresions changed to panic imidiately he answered back the call",

" hello",who is this, n how cum this phone is with u???Maan shouted all questns in one go,

other side: Mr. Khurana (no. was savd wth same name),

maan: yes,

other side: do u knw the lady to whch phone blongs to ,

Maan who was horrified now " yes i know ,where is she n y is her phone with u???"

nex moment Maan started runing through the corridors of his company ,car was waiting for him but instead of siting on back he took the drivers seat n with swooping speed rushed towards hospital seeing him swooping away his security cars folowed him being the top most busines tycoons he alwaz was under threat of underworld .

with jus blink of an eye he reached the hospital n was runing when the guy who ringed him moment before was standing " Mr. Khurana", the boy whined "where is she"

the boy pointed to the door " emergency Room" Maan was frustated yet worried almost felt choked when the door of the room cranked open n doc apeared , " how is she" maan cried,haulting steps of doc wth his suden apearence docs panic striken face horified maan " Is she okay" maan asked in fumble tone

maan stood there staring doc unable to say anything further nor he had courage to listen sumthing bad!!!!!!!

"Mr. Khurana u here" doc was abashed with the sudden apearence of the most known personality of the WA,Maan who felt numb n wornout whispered

" she is,

She is my wife",

"Sorry Mr. Khurana",she has lost lot of blood n due to head injury cant say anythng bfre 48 hours, ",doc infrmed while

pating Maans shoulder " have faith on god Mr. Khurana"...


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Edited by Maan.maniac - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
ohhw was waiting for it,
Luvely update,luved the way u described Maan's Demaneour
who's this gal,
waiting to read further plz update pretty soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG,,, what is this... in the first part even, is she Geet, then who is Maan in love with,,, pls continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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who is this S in K & S comanyyy...!!
Ye wifey Geet to nhe lagtii Hopefully..
Looking frwrd to next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb starting...but plz no sad ending plz...

loved it...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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very interesting start...
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Congrats for new Story...

I have read a story before with same Title...are u same writer...please don't take it otherwise...many stories have same titles and it doesn't bothers me...I am just asking out of curiosity...

waiting for next part...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6




very interesting start...
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Congrats for new Story...

I have read a story before with same Title...are u same writer...please don't take it otherwise...many stories have same titles and it doesn't bothers me...I am just asking out of curiosity...

waiting for next part...

thanks dr.
I had already postd the intro n part1 of this ss from my previous id 2months back which waz removd may b u would hav came across that n this is first time m posting my ss on IF else i nly update my works on fb ..so don kn'w about any such story wth same title..yeah hav seen many fic's with title Adhori dastan, Adhori zindagi i don think there is any fic wth 'HUMHARI ADHOORI KAHANI'
Edited by Maan.maniac - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome start
maan is married & his wife, is that geet?

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