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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am writing this story as cvs r not giving rahi scenes I am missing the a lot 😭
colleges were reopened after summer holidays there were two boys who were excited that they are going to face each other after a long summer break
they r none other then our heros ranveer (rv) and kd
introduction:
rv and kd were senior students of imperial college.the college would often turn into battle field because of these two
back to my story:
rv entered into the college along his frnd samar.samar kept on talking to rv but rv was not even paying any attention to him instead his eyes were searching for someone finally his eyes were fixed on a boy who was standing under a tree and happily chatting with his frnd rv straightly walked towards the boy who his none other than his enemy kd .kd who was talking to his frnd piddi noticed rv approaching him through the mirror of a bike which was parked next to him he turned back to face him .they both were now facing face to face when there was a announcement asking the students to assemble in the ground.before they could speak samar and piddi dragged their respective frnd to the ground.when all the students were assemble the principal started his speech"I welcome u all back to the college after the long summer vacation and I also have a request for u I want all of u to maintain discipline as new students r joining the college today and I also want the seniors to help the newly joined juniors if they r in need"and after the speech was over the time swiftlya
and all the new students were assemble in a hall the principal introduction rv to students as he was the college president and asked rv to give instructions and went and as soon as he went rv started to flirt with the girls as he was college heart throb the girls were impressed by him suddenly their was a knock in the door but before rv would ask the person to get in a girl rushed in and found a place to settle down herself and turned to face rv.rv was shocked by the girl's behavior he was also not able to see her face as she had covered it.the girl slowly removed the shawl from her face her eyes were like a blue ocean the wind started to blow heavily and her hair was like waves covering her face and when he sawed her face he was standing still as if some one has hypnotized him the new girl apologized for her behavior that's when he came to sense and told "it's ok and I am sir and ur senior only"sayings so he started to give so speech the new girl was bored by his talks and was looking around to make some frnds finally she saw girl who was also not listening to rv talk and was playing in her mobile the new girl introduced her to the other girl who was playing in her mobile"hai I am panchi.Wats ur name? the other girl stoped playing and turned to see who was taking to her"hai my name is kiya.r u not listening to the seniors speech""to say the truth I am not liking his speech he just boosting about himself kiya""ok wat about a cup of coffee after this speech panchi sure kiya"rv was just looking at the new girl through out his speech once he finished his speech he started moving towards the new girl but was surrounded by the other girls when the girl was about to leave kiya shouted "panchi u forgot ur bag"rv thought to himself so her name is panchi I will meet u afterwards 1st I have to escape for these girl"
both panchi and kiya were in canteen when panchi caught kiya eyeing on a boy who was sitting next to their table"kiya the guy in the next table is hot isn't he"kiya absent mindly nodded her head "it's not like that panchi he was the one who saved me from the other seniors""so u was want to thank him?""s but I am afraid ""do u know his name kiya?""no panchi""it's ok his name is kd he is a senior""but panchi how do u now about him"kd was about to leave "kiya I will tell about it later now you talk to him"asking she pushed kiya infront of kd and hid herself behind a pillar.now kiya was face kd.kd asked her if she wants to say something.kiya was at lose of words she turned back to look at panchi but she was not their so with lot of struggle kiya thanked him and kd said "it's my pleasure"and lifted his hand for a shaken and kiya to gave her hand and after he went kiya kept on looking her hand when panchi came to her"I think so someone has fallen in love with a senior"kiya asked panchi to stop teasing her and she started chasing panchi
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice One! 😊
But it all seems a bit rushed... Could u just slow down a bit with a few periods, exclamations and full stops...! 😕 😕 😕
I had to read it all in a breath.

Anyways... brilliant story, I must say! 👏 👏 👏


Regards
Aishwarya
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start shruti.. good storyline..season 1 yaad Aa gaya..
Rv n Kd ka tashan once more..waiting for it..
Btw just a few pauses n breaks would make it more wonderful..hoping u don't mind me saying that..

Thanks n really liked it
Neha.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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WOWWWIIIEEE... 😳
Dis is really Gr8... 👏
I've already fallen in love with it... 😉
Plzzz continue sooonnn...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey... Its awesome. Loved the KIAN frndahip. N ofcourse my dearest RAHI. Love RAHI frm d bottom of my heart.Pls continue soon.. 😊
Edited by anjali1805 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: aishwarya2905

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Nice One!😊</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">But it all seems a bit rushed... Could u just slow down a bit with a few periods, exclamations and full stops...!😕😕😕</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">I had to read it all in a breath.</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Anyways... brilliant story, I must say!👏👏👏</font>


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Regards</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Aishwarya</font>


sry yaar I know it is too rushy i was in full force to complete it as I was having my physics exam the next day
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: anjali1805

Hey... Its awesome. Loved the KIAN frndahip. N ofcourse my dearest RAHI. Love RAHI frm d bottom of my heart.Pls continue soon.. 😊


thanks for commenting I glad that u like my story I will surely continue it 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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guys I am glad that u people have liked my story and I am really sry as it was too rusty because j had my physics exam the next day tomorrow French exam only so thought of continuing my story but this time slow and steadily
ok back to My story
part-2
finally when kiya got hold off panchi she asked her"y did u hid ur self when kd turned to look at us?""come on kiya stop questioning me it's time for class"kiya too stopped talking about the topic and the entered the their class room .after the class was panchi asked kiya to wait for in the basketball ground and she would join her later as she is heading to the library to get some books
when panchi was walking in corridor kd was coming in the opposite direction when he sawed panchi he was shocked he followed her to the library and to make her stop he got hold of her hand"watch r u doing her panchi"that's when rv who was searching for a book and spotted kd hold ing panchi's hand he straightly walked towards and started to scold kd for behaving like this to the new students but before he could continue panchi cut crossed in the middle of his talk"Mr senior it's our personal problem pls don't interfere in this"rv was heart broken by her response and went from there in his angry mood he entered the canteen and panchi's words were echoing in his mind suddenly he heard someone's ring but Theresa no in the canteen expect him he spotted a mobile in one of the table he took the mobile and unlocked it to check whose mobile was it and he found kd photo' as the wallpaper one's he sawed it he was about to leave it back in it's place he was stunned seeing one of the photo in kd's mobile
on the hand kd kept questioning panchi but she did not reply to it all of sudden she hugged kd and told him "I missed u a lot kd"that when kiya entered the library in search of panchi and was shocked seeing panchi and kd hugging each other and back of her rv was also present he was burning in anger seeing there hugged he straightlying walked towards the, with kd's...


guys any guess watch rv sawed in kd' mobile????
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yippie !!!! 1st 1 2 comment... Loved it...😃 Gr8 job...👏

Ummm...

Is Panchi, KD's cousin or smthin ?????
Plzzz don't say she's his gf... 😲
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Posted: 11 years ago
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SUSPENSE... YAAR NOW I WILL KEEP ON THINKING ABOUT IT AGAIN N AGAIN. LOVED IT.
I GUESS ITS PANCHIS PHOTO IN HIS CELLPHONE. HOPE THEY ARE JUST COUSINS OR FRNDS NOT BF GF..

PLS CONTINUE SOON ITS AMAZING👍🏼

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