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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
Phew read all the part
sorry sorry sorry sorry
I know I'm late sorry
but all the parts are amazing
loved it
plz plz continue soon

luv u
Ishita
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
"HAPPY HOLI" Shruti its ok dear we kisha fans can wait,but this part is amazing dear!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: loveukisha

"HAPPY HOLI" Shruti its ok dear we kisha fans can wait,but this part is amazing dear!



thank u dear and wish u too a happy holi 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
read the last 3 updates...they were lovely sruthi...thnx for the pm..!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
Hi:) read all the parts, loved it so much! Waiting for the next RaHiculous update:) update soon pls
Edited by Sarah_Angel9 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
HEY.. FIRST OF ALL I AM SO SORRY THAT I AM LATE.
SECONDLY WOW YOU WROTE TWO PARTS...
ME LOVED BOTH THE PARTS. THEY WERE AMAZING. WOW PANCHI IS SO MUCH FUN LOVING. AND RANVEER HE IS TOH MY SWEETHEART AND HE WAS SO LOST IN PANCHI (YAYY). RAHI IN RAIN WAS THE BEST PART AND A BLESSING FOR ME. I LOVED IT. YOU ARE A VERY GOOD WRITER.
DO CONTINUE SOON AND THANX FOR CONTINUING.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
part 7

kd and kiya were travelling silently.kd kept on seeing kiya through his side glass.she was some wat nervous and could not balance in the bike so kd thought of striking a conversation"kiya panchi told that u talk a lot like her but u r so silent""I
do talk a lot kd but piddi told that u hate girls and u talk only to panchi because she is ur sister kd thought to himself piddi u r finished today"it's not not like that kiya I talk to girls piddi must have been jealous that y he would have told u like that""ok"so they started discussing about their likings etc...kd"she is sure like panchi talking non stop"kiya was now comfortable she moved close to kd and even placed her hands on his shoulder.kd felt her hair dashing his face due to the wind and he enjoyed the feeling that she was so close to him.she gave instruction to kd regarding the way and asked him
to stop at a spot she got down for the bike and thanked him and was about to go when kd came back to sense he looked around and the place was familiar to him he stopped kiya in her track"were r u going?""this my house and I gonna enter it any problem kd?"u got to be kidding this piddi's aunt house and she have give it to rent and the house in the next door is ours and in this house a aunt and here..."he suddenly stopped in his track

flashback (in the morning)
kd and piddi were getting ready to college when they spotted new people getting into the house next to them.they saw a lady standing outside"hai aunt r new here?""yes chota I and my baby r going to leave here""nice to meet u aunt if u need any help ask us""sure chota"

back to reality
"that means..."kd was about to speak but a lady came from the house towards them"she turned to kiya and asked"baby y r u late? and wat happened to the car?""I will explain about it later mom"kd astonished"aunty she is the baby u were talking about this morning?""yes chota"kd started laughing as he thought it to be a small child .kiya was just staring at him and her mom could not understand anything"any way thank the brother how have helped u and get in"kd stopped laughing and had a serious expression on his face"wat brother a?"now kiya had a bright smile on her face and was about to do wat her mom has told her but kd cut crossed her in between aunty wat is this u r calling me chota and u want ur daughter to call me brother"kiya's mother was thinking."it's better I would stop her before she tell kiya to call me by some other name"it's ok aunty let her call brother""thanks chota.kiya soon thank him and inside"saying so she left as soon as she left kd started laughing"baby, kiya baby""brother it's enough o laughing and thank u for the ride bye brother"she went inside after telling it.kd's expression changed ones he heard it.
piddi was in the house tensed that wat he would say to kd if he asked about panchi then he got a msg for panchi that she had reached her house and don't need to panic.piddi was reviled after reading it that's when kd entered.piddi ran over to him"bro I have drop ur sister in her home don't ask any other question""don't call me bro piddi it is irritating.and u did u say to kiya that I hate girls and don't talk to them""s bro I only told..., no I did tell like that really I did tell just a slip of tounge"kd was in no , mood to listen to him and started chasing him.piddi thought "both the girls have got me into trouble wat a day for piddi"both kd and piddi went to there respective beds kd was just thinking about the bike ride and just switching on and off the lamp near him."my god kd has fall in love.both the ghost and a frnd who has fall in love r the same both don't other to sleep"on the other hand ranveer was thinking about the Time he spent with panchi.when he got a call from an unknown number he thought it to be panchi and picked it up it was indeed panchi."hai ranveer sry for distrubing u r u free now?""it's alright panchi ur phone number is a fancy one and it's nice"panchi laughed"is that so ranveer then u should give the credit to the booth owner as I am calling from a booth near my home""oh sry""any way r u free r not?""ofcourse I am free wat work do I have in this midnight""ok I feel like eating pani puri r u coming?""wat r u sayings crazy it's midnight and u want to eat pani puri.seriously I Don't know how ur mom left u out in this night.just go home and sleep""nonu don't advice me r u coming r not?""no I am not coming""fine then I will call avi"with that she cutted the call"wat she told she is going with avi who is that guy.anyway wat troubles me I am going to sleep"but he was not able to sleep so he changed his cloths and went out...

to be continued
hope so u like it.waiting for ur reviews
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
wow it was awsome
hayee kisha bike ride😳
kiya's mom want kiya to call kd brother😆
kd is irritated by word brother😆
ransh in luv wow😉
do continue soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
I m so sorry yaar...
I didnt comment earlier...
I read all d parts now...
Wow pansh are siblings...
Ransh in love...
Do continue...
Loved it...
Plz along with kisha n rahi...do include pansh...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
Shruthi...the amazing story continues n m loving it
Loved the fun n naughty kia kd part
Kd bechara... bro???...actually felt for him...hehehe
N Rv jealous already...hayee...n so avi is also there...cool
Loved the urgency with which he left for that midnight date...

Thanks for this one yaa...
Waitng for the next...

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