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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
Hey its really nice. Loved thepansh end part amd kds concern for panchi... Loved it. It wad worth the wait... 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ok I am back with my story. I thought that no liked my story so I stopped writing but I came to know that my frnds khushi
and anjali really liked so I am continuing it for u guys hope like it,

I am writing it as 2 parts because I don't know when I will be free as I am having my final exam
part 5
after the classes were ove4 kd called panchi and kiya and introduced them to his frnds.panchi and kiya easily got along with the others.and of all the frnds panchi and piddi had a nice bond.as all were discussing panchi caught kd and kiya giving side glance to each.so she thought of a plan(a plan to make kd and kiya spend time with each other) when it was time for them to leave home panchi went to the parking area and found kiya's car.she took some sharp object and made holes in the car tire and joined kiya who was in here way to here car"panchi were did u go all of a sudden .you always disappear""sry yaar I was thoda busy"as the two reached the parking area kiya was shocked seeing the condition of her car's tire"who the he'll did this to my car"panchi to acted as if she was also equally shocked"oh my god! it must be the guys who ragged u this morning""those people r really irritating.now how I am gonna reach home?"that's when kd and piddi came to the parking area to get their bike (they were going to their home which they have rented) panchi approached kd and told him all that had happened.kd was angry hearing that"I am not going to leave the bulls I have to teach them a good lesson"panchi and piddi calmed him down."kd it's not the time to fight already its getting late.so I just want u to drop kiya in her home""I will do it panchi.but piddi is coming along with me and wat about u how r u going?"I have rented a house just near the college so I will go by walk.but piddi..."piddi cut crossed her in between"don't worry kd I will go along with panchi and u drop kiya in her home"kd thought for a while"no we can do like this.I will go along with panchi and piddi u Take my bike and drop kiya"panchi thought to herself"my plane is back firing I have to do something""come on kd I am not a small girl more over piddi is coming along with .u just drop kiya at her home"kd could no longer argues with het so he finally accpected.he got on his bike panchi called kiya to the place were kd was there"kiya come I will drop u at ur home"kiya was just hestitating but panchi pushed her near the bike.so kiya sat in kd's bike at a distance"kiya I think u better not sit in the bike instead u sit in the air"panchi teased her seeing the distance between them""panchi be quite""can we go kiya""sure kd"and before going kd went to piddi"take care my sis piddi""sure bro"with that kd and kiya left.panchi was so happy that her planning worked and shouted in happiness and hugged piddi.but piddi could not understand y she is behaving like this.raveer came to the spot when panchi was shouting happily.he was just watching her.panchi took piddi cell from his pocket without his knowledge"piddi can u give me ur Mobile.I wanna just check out some music"when piddi searched he would'nt find it so he gave panchi his bag and told her to wait there and he will check for his mobile saying so he went.panchi quickly tore a paper and wrote some letter to piddi"hai piddi I am having ur mobile .I just want to go to home alone that's y I played a prank.see u tomorrow bye"this was the thing she wrote and placed in piddi's bag and left.all this was sawed by ranveer "wat is the girl upto"he quickly ran and stopped panchi on here way


I know guys this part is a waste but next part is for rahi so with a short break I will post the next part to

waiting for ur comments

😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
Shruthi...
First things first...sorry for not commenting earlier...

Loved loved loved alll the parts
The story build up s great...
Loved panchi...vibrant n naughty. N the pansh bond...
N Ranveer s sooo smitten with her...aweee

Please do continue whenever u can...wil be waiting n with rahi on the cards will be waiting more😳..

Thanks

Neha
Edited by sneha02 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
Oh! It was so perfect!
I just loved it.
I am ur big fan from now!
Keep writing!
Happy holi
.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
wow this so awsome
sorry for late commenting
read all parts its too good
kisha bike ride😳 already in kishaland
plzzz update soon...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
part 6
"hi Mr senior""hi panchi may I know wat r u upto?""wat do u mean by that""panchi I sawed every thing wat u did""ok, ok, ok panchi is got red hand by Mr senior""u can call me ranveer""ok ranveer.anyways wat r u doing with Me? do u go to ur home by walk"ranveer forgot totally about his car but he lied to panchi"yes I go by walk"but he was silently praying"pls god safe guard my audi car""so I got a company that too the company of the hottest guy in the college.so don't u have any girl frnd like true lover?""no I do flirt with girls but I don't want to get committed to any one"as they were talking suddenly it became cloudy and it started to rain.there was a shop near so they entered inside it."oh I did not think that it would rain"ranveer kept on talking but panchi was just looking at something outside he just followed her gaze and found that she was watching a man selling ice cream.she rushed out and reached the man and bought two ice cream and she also called ranveer to join her.he to reached her"r u crazy it is raining and ur eating ice cream in this heavy rain and see ur self u r completely soaked""come on yaar just enjoy here take it I bought one ice cream for u too""seriously I can't believe wat I am doing eating a ice cream in a heavy rain along with a crazy girl in the world"after getting soaked fully by the rain they again entered the shop.it was so cold ranveer was just starring at panchi lost in her she was trembling so he got a cloth from the shop owner and gave it to panchi.she got it from him and thanked him.rancher to started trembling so panchi gave back the cloth to him "u keep it I am alright""I can see that u r trembling and u r saying u r alright just take it"but he refused"so we will share it"saying so she moved close to him and putted the cloth around him.the two were so close too each other.panchi caught ranveer eyeing her"wat happened ranveer do u want to say something"yeah I thought we would take a photo together""sure I love to take photo's"ranveer took his mobile and was adjusting it when panchi placed her face so close to ranveer's face it was as if some one glued there two face together.ranveer felt some wat strange he does not usually feel like this when he was with other girls.but he felt different with panchi and he loved it.after taking the photo panchi sawed her watch it was so late and the rain have stopped by then"ranveer it got late I have to reach my home bye""ok see u soon bye"ranveer really wanted to ask her phone number but she went before he could say something then he thought to himself "ranveer how can u struggle to talk to girl wats happening to u man?"suddenly panchi entered the shop"ranveer give me ur phone number"""sure"he gave his number"wat about ur's"I will call r msg u that Time u can note it down bye nonu""bye panchi""wait a minute wat did she just call me? nonu?"
he was smiling hearing it


sry for the short update next part is for kisha fans but u guys have to wait for
sry if there is any spelling mistake 😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: tinaswea

Oh! It was so perfect!

I just loved it.
I am ur big fan from now!
Keep writing!
Happy holi
.



thank u dear.and happy holi to u too 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
Shruthi u r on a roll n m loving it...

Happy holi dear

Kya super romantic tha yeh...aweee
M in love with this struggling for words nonu n bindass panchi...
Rain, ice cream, selfie, that tingling feeling that nonu felt n panchi asking for his no. were perfect
Spelling mistake ka mujhe nahi pata since u sent me to rahi land n m still there😳

Thanks yaar..loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sneha02

<font size="2">Shruthi u r on a roll n m loving it...</font>

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<font size="2">Happy holi dear</font>
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<font size="2">Kya super romantic tha yeh...aweee</font>
<font size="2">M in love with this struggling for words nonu n bindass panchi...</font>
<font size="2">Rain, ice cream, selfie, that tingling feeling that nonu felt n panchi asking for his no. were perfect</font>
<font size="2">Spelling mistake ka mujhe nahi pata since u sent me to rahi land n m still there😳</font>
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<font size="2">Thanks yaar..loved it</font>



thanks for the complement 😊 happy holi dear 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
OMG dis super duper amazing yaar...
Loved both d updates 👏
Kisha's bike ride 😳 & Rahi's 1st walk 😳
Gr8 updates 😃
W8ting 4 Kisha's part eagerly 😉
U gt 2 update dis 1 fast 😆
Sry 4 delay 😭
Thanx 4 d pm 😃

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