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Katie

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: shiv456
nice update but sad as well

Thank you...this one wasn't that sad...the next one is a bit more sad..

Originally posted by: tina_1234
Awesome part
Loved it

Thank you!

Originally posted by: shalini_s
good conversations happening all around.. may be this will lead to a good future... waiting to see how Khushi answers this..

Yep!! all the conversations were necessary for the most part...Khushi and Arnav will both deal with Amber's queries.😉

Originally posted by: GAURI29
awsme update

Thanks!

Originally posted by: IsleOfCapri
simply fabulous
loved it.

Thank you!

Originally posted by: ifsaal044
I've been waiting for the father children confrontation and who best than Amber.

Yeah, but there's still time for that...just one more milestone for Arshi to cross and then the confrontation..

Originally posted by: LadyR
A really cute conversation between Arnav and Khushi, loved they way she told him what she wants,nicely addressed, yay for a confident Khushi.
A celebration of a Father's Day, what an apt time for Amber to address this, I look forward to how they address the elephant in the room. You indicate sadness ahead, hope it's not too unbearable.

Anjali shared with Aman which I itself is a major step forward, if says a lot for her tryst in Aman otherwise she would not have shared.

Roll on Feb 8th

Thank you! Yeap, Khushi is very vocal about what she wants from him and how she feels...I mean...if Arnav's usually bad with words, someone's gotta make up for it, right?😉 It wnot be too unbearable...it will show more of the Arnav-Twins bond and Arshi's progression, again...its become a pattern these days that with each update, ArShi take a step closer.😉 Aman-Anjali's story will progress faster than Arnav-Khushi's over all, simply because Anjali is dealing with Aman rather than Shyam..

Originally posted by: neha2013g
awesome update... beautifully written... loved it...

Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: dumas
amazing update loved it khushi inter moil is expected and she is afraid not fo herself but for the kids and amber wants to know where her dad it oh boy loved khushi giving her the cards and the fathers day memento loved kripa and khushi conversation and anjali and aman loved how he debunked all her excuse amazing update waiting for the next one thanks for the pm.

comment updated for part 40 page 23

Thank you! Yeap, Khushi has to think about the twins, the family, AND Arnav...she may be over thinking things sometimes, though...she'll need to be selfish this time if she's going to listen to her heart.😛 Thank you for unresing the comment on the previous part, I shall reply to it later.😳

Originally posted by: sudhalata1
Awesome update. I think Khushi should tell the kids about their dad

Thanks! I know people are expecting that, but unfortunately, its not quite the time yet...

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Oliver.Queen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#242

I was jus thinking abt ur next update. I hope it id quite emotional to ensure the parents r able to see the void in their children's lives. It really would b heartbreaking. I hope Arnav n Amber hav some moments together!

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bewakoofLadki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#243

Came acrross this now
vl surely read ut
seems nyc

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Katie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#244

Originally posted by: rkapoor1382
Amazing update
Emotional parts coming up na

Thanks! and yeah...one emotional part coming up...😳

Originally posted by: sfghfj
awesome update. loved it

Thanks!

Originally posted by: henamani
the conversations seem to be working; however, i would like more of heart guided action rather than intelligent conversations and subsequent measured paces

Thank you! The heart guided actions will come, definitely, but before that some conversations do need to take place, right?

Originally posted by: ravalisharma06
superb update...
loved it

Thanks!

Originally posted by: ammi22
wow, love the update. hope everything is going to be great between them. I hope Khushi is going to tell Amber where is her Dad.

Thank you! Things are moving towards the better and I'm not about to change that.😉

Originally posted by: ARSHI_FAN11
Hey Katie, I totally love an update where I find all the characters, specially Aman-Anjali and Angad-Kripa and their families... it just leaves me very happy 😃

This update I totally loved the part where Khushi gives reins of their relationship to Arnav, they are crossed a huge milestone according to me 😉 Aman and Anjali's conversation was totally needed and I was actually waiting for it to happen, of course Aman was not at all a surprise - I expected nothing less than this reaction from him...

Coming to Angad-Kripa, I so enjoyed the part of them all teasing Angad for Kripa's b'day gift 😃

And now coming to the best part - Father's day cards... It was so heart touching (I was on verge of crying) when Adi-Amby went to Khushi and gave her the cards... Arnav's punishment is far from over still... I almost cried when Arnav asks Khushi if he can keep all the cards...
Last but the only constant question in my mind since we came to know that Adi-Amby are Arnav's kids... how will kids react to the news that Arnav is their father... and Amby's question has just triggered it... am totally enjoying the way you have approached this topic 👏👏👏

As usual am waiting for the next update !!! I do love your cliff-hangers 😉

Thank you hun! I try to keep more parts with all the characters but a lot of the time, they're not needed and I don't like having too many silent spectators...I feel odd writing like that haha...so yeah, for some scenes, I'll have them all in there...😳

They really have crossed a huge milestone...and Arnav needed to be handed the reins seeing that its him holding back more than Khushi...so now she wants him to take this relationship at a pace that he's comfortable with...

Khushi handing him the cards was meaningful to me in the sense that she truly acknowledges and accepts the he is the twins' dad and that he holds the right over those gifts...it signifies that she's one step closer to revealing to her kids who he really is...

And as much as you love my cliff-hangers (yeah, right!!😆)...the next update will NOT end with a cliffy.

Originally posted by: amfashionista
its very interesting update
very curious for next update

Thank you!

Originally posted by: PixieFlame
Aww!
Poor kids! :(

Obviously, they want to know their dad.

Yeap...but will they find out?

Originally posted by: JRia
Thanks for keeping ur promise.. It's awesome.. Loved the way Khush and Arnav understand each other. Angad's helping Arnav and Khushi to be alone.. That was so sweet of him.. I would love to know what Akash and the rest of the family have done to find Khushi.. I would like to know more about Aman's past.. I would like to see more of Aman and Arnav scenes..

Thank you! Yeap, there is one more serious conversation coming up with Arnav and Khushi (as far as I can see...there's no more of those..but you never know)...and after that conversation, things will really fall in place. Thank you for all your suggestions, I'll try my best to include them except Aman's past...unfortunately, there isnt anything outstanding in his past to show...and I've always said that Aman-Anjali will remain an aside...😳

Originally posted by: arhi-raizada
awesome

Thanks!

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Oliver.Queen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#245

Waiting for Saturday! 😃

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Katie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#246

Originally posted by: --peehu--
amazing update...loved it..
it was written so beautifully...the fathers day part...it literally got a lump in my throat. god! i feel so bad for Arnav now. he is in front of his kids and cant tell them that he is their father...

u said next update would be a sad part..does that mean Khushi would lie to her kids?? god! i hope not. that would really be heartbreaking for Arnav..but somewhere i think she would lie. yet, i hope you prove me wrong this time :)

eagerly waiting for next update

Thank you so much Peehu! Another serious conversation coming up...this time Arnav is taking up the role that Khushi usually takes up...lets see how he handles it.😉 As much as I want the kids to find out that Arnav is their dad right now...its still not time. remember Arnav-Khushi's conversation about when to tell the kids?? they will tell them when Khushi is ready to be a wife to him in its complete sense...and like you saw in the previous part, Khushi is still confused...

Originally posted by: SPraba
Hey dear as usual an awesome update. Glad khushi had the conversation with arnav and happy with the way thins are moving. Still khushi is confused but happy she is slowly accepting arnav. Simlarly arnav is also putting behond his past and looking forward to the future. The Fathers day update was very nice and unexpected but Amber's mood swing was natural. Oh boy what is arnav and khushi's reaction going to be for Amber's question. She must be missing her dad abd voiced out her thoughts. Cant wait to read the next one. Thanks for the pm

Thank you sweetie! Slowly but surely, she's accepting him back in her life...I mean, it can't be easy for her, right? so the fact that she's even trying to a huge step on its own. Amber's question will bring about a few important things that need to be addressed and the most important of all, Arnav will get to be in Khushi's place for once...see what its like..lol.

Originally posted by: AnjuRish
heart warming con btw arshi
will kushi tell the kids??

You know what I'm gonna say, right?? Stay Tuned!😉😆

Originally posted by: cosmina
''As per the next part, it shall be up no later than Feb 8th. ''

That was the worst sentence from this update 😕 till on 8 February we must to wait?!

Maybe they will tell her the truth,but i prefer not to,i wish that to be later,and in front of both children.I'm glad you made this little girl so smart and sharp! I love your story and i'm always happy when i receive your pm.Thank you!

I'm sorry...but in my defense...it was only a week away...I have 'Always You' going on as well, right? so technically its two updates from me in a week...and that's way more than what it was before.😆😆 Amber's maturity level is above her age, and I have hinted towards that quite a bit, so I think its not a surprise to anyone that this question is coming form her rather than Aditya...

Originally posted by: DIYA_21
Supar Emotional Update!!
Khushi's decision to Arnav decide next step in their relationship was correct...
And feeling happy to see Arnav finished his unfinished work from previous Night...
''Father's Day''- was a Special Day For Every Father, Arnav is not exceptional..
Surely it hurt Arnav to see his kids infront of him, but couldn't claim..
Amber question at last was natural for any child in her age..
What will Khushi answer her??
Waiting for next...

Thank you!! Yeap, because Khushi is more comfortable with things than Arnav is so now its time to let him take this at a pace where he's comfortable...It has hit Arnav for sure about the whole father-kids situation but he understands why they can't find out right now...just like any other father, he's putting his kids' hurt and pain before his...😳 As for Amber's question...the entire next chapter depends on that question...and the things that followed..

Originally posted by: manikka
fantastic part dear...
arnav must felt bad after the teacher's day fiasco...
and i think seeing other children with their father adi and amber muct hav felt the absence of their father badly...

Thank you sweetie! Yeah, Amber will have an outburst in the next update..lets see how that's dealt with.

Originally posted by: sutapasarbabhom
Amazing updt i think they shud tel kid about their father wait for updt tanx for pm

Thank you! Unfortunately, its not quite the time to tell them yet...

Originally posted by: Smrikta992
Beautiful update.. Lovd it.. Nw wht wil do khushi ?? Hw did she give her a ans about her dad..? Thnks fr pm..

Thank you! Khushi isnt ready to tell them that Arnav is their dad yet so lets see how this situation is handled...

Originally posted by: ankitamishra201
nice update
ohh dis was d ques dey were trying to run from so many days but finally dey hav to face it

its going to be very hard for both arnav n khushi

Thank you! Yeap, now that same question is going to stare them in the face...it will hard for them but lets see who deals with it better..😉

Originally posted by: aquagal
Lovely update.
I loved the way Arnav-Khushi talked about the last night and have decided to move on. I loved that this time he kissed her like she wanted him to.
Also the Aman-Anjali part was good.
Father's day had me worked up. It was obvious that the kids would ask about their real father one day. Also for Arnav to know and yet to not say it aloud would be painful.
How will they handle and answer Amber's question now?

Thank you! Yeap, now she has handed the reins to him and he can take this relationship at a pace where he's comfortable..😉 and like he said "her wish is his command"😆 Amber's question will turn into an outburst from her...lots will be said, lots will be felt...lets see...

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Katie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#247

Originally posted by: Arnav1Khushi
I can totally imagine the Amber N Arnav bonding. I wish we had seen this in ipk. None the less, u made it a reality. I can confidently say if Arnav had a kid, he would treat them like this.

You'll definitely see Arnav-Amber bonding in the next update...You'll see Arnav's equation with everyone actually...its an Arnavlicious update.😉 I agree with you...I wanted to see Arnav bonding with his son/daughter but we never got to see that...oh wells...us FF writers shall do that for the rest of us.😳

Originally posted by: swatim318
hey... can we get this one too a little early??? please please

A little early it shall be, according to my time zone, anyway.😉😆

Originally posted by: Arnav1Khushi
I was jus thinking abt ur next update. I hope it id quite emotional to ensure the parents r able to see the void in their children's lives. It really would b heartbreaking. I hope Arnav n Amber hav some moments together!

Both parents realize that there's a void in their children's lives but they also understand that they're better off with that void rather than have that void filled only be rendered vacant again in the case that Khushi doesnt want to go back to him...

Originally posted by: massu91
Came acrross this now
vl surely read ut
seems nyc

Welcome to B&B! let me know when you're all caught up.😉

Originally posted by: Arnav1Khushi
Waiting for Saturday! 😃

If you're still online for the next half-ish hour, you'll get the update before Saturday.😃

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Katie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#248

Originally posted by: swatim318

ok first thing first.. ummm no.. i better ask this in a PM... a PM on your way dahling!!-- gotcha and answered it already.😉

ahaaan.. so acting shy, are we??😉.. awww... i can imaging khushi turning red thinking abt last night..😳 loved how arnav teased her abt that...😆... but good to see they are easing out in each others presence now.. ---well yeah...first kiss in five years you know...and she was all bold and stuff thanks to the rejection/anger she was feeling but when she back to normal, she got all shy...😉

know what... I always love when Arshi share anything about the childhood of the twins.. it seems their faces glow when they think abt tht.._-I guess its a parent thing...😕

OMG the shy blame...😉.. but it caught the right chords.. and I am glad that Arnav yet again bared his heart in front of khushi.. and vis-a-vis for khushi, when she shared her disappointments with him...Khushi is very vocal about what she feels or wants from him...I mean..if ASR's gonna clam up, someone's gotta make up for it right?😛

awww they crossed one more threshold... and he kissed.. not a nerve ending kiss.. but a soulful one and one full of love... made my toe curl.. 😳--hehe...the nerve ending kisses are slowly approaching...slowly...😛

yesss i expected the same from Aman.. I knew it dint matter to him.. i mean Anjali's past.. but i dint know was that he is an orphan??😲.. poor guy.. though I can understand Anjali's reservations.. i still think Aman, Anjali and even Ishan deserve this chance of happiness in their lives.. hope Anjali takes the right decision soon.. oh and he is a Taurus, really?? know what.. i have a special liking for Taurus men.. 😉😳--well yeah, recently orphaned...unlike Anjali who lost her parents when she was really young...but...that's not too crucial...it still wouldn't have made a difference to him..I'm glad you mentioned Ishan because he may be the reason why Anjali really gives it a chance..😉 I think I know why you have a liking for Taurus men...according to the western zodiac sign system...I'm a Taurus too and I use that line all the time...anytime I'm accused of being stubborn, my response is: *shrug* I'm born with it. I'm a Taurus.😃

Ah I sooo loved that fact that Arshi are behaving like a normal couple... for me, i believe, these little PDAs strengthen the bond one shares.. they knew that everyone's watching.. but still it was like the most normal thing to do.. yess One Step forward..I agree...I'm not one for ridicuous PDA but genuine and cute gestures, holding hands, quick kisses etc...I find that adorable...its like they're not scared of showing the world how in love they are but the moment it seems to me like they're going to rip apart their clothes and get down and dirty in public (*ahem* friday night subway rides *ahem*)...that's just gross..

ahaaan so Kripa's birthday is coming.. is there anything more to it.. ❓Not really...just a small affair..

Oh God I dint expect this AT ALL.. Fathers Day.. dint see that coming.. i cant even imagine how Arnav would have felt... 😭.. i dun want to say poor guy.. coz he is not a bechara.. but.. OMG.. this must be the most dreadful feeling for him... he is in front of thier kids and yet they give the fathers day card to Khushi.. 😔 ---Oh Arnav isn't a bechara at all...you'll see that in the next update...he's got his act together...

glad that Angad pitched in and took the kids out.. And yet again we see Arshi's bond strengthening..

know what.. I always love Kripa's advices in this story.. she is the Shakespeare of this Family.. I am sure khushi is gonna take her advice seriously..---I'm warning you right now...I will be using this "shakespeare of this family' line in the future...I'm in love with it, its perfect!

Oh God, poor Amber.. being the more mature one.. she must have been thinking about her father.. specially when everyone at school was celebrating this day with their fathers.. I love the fact that Arnav was the one who noticed her aloofness...--You know what they say about daughter-father relationships...can you see a 'daddy's girl' in the making??😉

I wonder whats coming in the next update.. is the secret going to be out?? Whats gonna be Khushi's response to Amber's question?? To know the answer stay tuned to B&B.. oh god.. how much i HATE waiting for your updates..I'll put your mind to easy...no...the secret wont be out...not quite the time yet...and I absolutely adore how you know what my response to your question would have been...stay tuned, indeed.😉😆

BTW my IF-Rockerz (oh Congrats honey).. u dun need to apologize for cliffhanger at all... thats a very old habit of urs.. and i dun think you are gonna correct that in near future.. yeah agreed that you didn't want to end this cute-ish part with the sadness, but yaaar.. you completely left us hanging.. and we are now supposed to wait till 8th Feb.. You Must be Kidding me.. Ha!!--Thank you hun! I thnk replying to all these awesome comments is increasing my post count more than the updates.😆..and yeah??? I shall prove you wrong in the next update..why?? because it wont end with a cliffhanger!

waiting waiting waiting..

Fantabulous Part..👏 Thanks a lot love!

thanks for pm..

Originally posted by: P4rveen12
Congrats on your 5000 post, I'm so proud of you.--Thanks a lot!😳

You have become a IF rockerz, the red colour suits you better, lol.--I'm not going to lie...I liked the teal better but that's cuz I'm partial to that colour...red is cool too!😆

Blame my nephew for the late comment as he had hogged my iPad for the past two days, lol.--Oh, no worries! your nephew sounds a lot like my brother...I have to blackmail him to give me my tablet back! every time!

The update was amazing and simply superb,--Thank you!

Awww bless Khushi was feeling so shy after being so bold the previous night and love the way Arnav had realised as well.

I'm glad Arnav mentioned the kiss and Khushi also spoke up about feeling rejected, I'm glad she expressed her feelings and emotions perfectly. --Khushi has always been vocal about where she stands, what she expects and feels etc...so I thought it only fair that she let him know how she felt last night...

Wow love the fact Arnav actually kissed her and the kiss was amazing, so gentle, tender and simply heart touching.--You guys will have to bear with a few for more of those before the 'steamy' ones come in..😛

Love the fact Khushi realised that she has fallen in love with him again, so sweet.--About time, no?

Finally Anjali told Aman the truth as expected his reaction was spot on but I'm glad he told Anjali his feelings and decision has not changed towards her.

I'm glad Aman told Anjali just to go with the flow and get to know each other I hope Anjali gives him the chance and I know she won't regret it. --Aman and Anjali's equation will be a tad bit different considering that Ishan is very young and that Aman's not the one who mistreated Anjali...so...eventually but the fireworks will happen there too.

So happy angad and Kripa are back and bless angad was asking for birthday gift ideas, love the part in the kitchen especially with the potato cubes being thrown and aimed for the heads, lol.--I've done that to my friends before...its very effective!😉😆

Poor Arnav having to witness the happy Father's Day celebration, I felt so sorry for him but love the way Khushi consoled and comforted him and even made him feel better by giving him the cards the kids made from last year. ---Khushi accepts that Arnav holds full right over those..she isnt denying him any rights of a father except being called 'dad'...all in good time.😉

Wow Arnav knew Amber was upset about something and it was lovely read that he came to the realisation as a father instinct, beautiful. --She will grow up to be a daddy's girl..😉

So Amber has asked the question about her dad, can't wait to read how Khushi and Arnav will react and whether now is the time to finally tell them the truth, I personally think it is. --Not quite the time yet...remember Arnav-Khushi's conversation about not telling them until Khushi's sure about the future...? and as of the previous update..she's confused...

The update was a brilliant read, amazing writing. Thank you so much!!😳

Don't worry Hun I'm use to the cliffhangers and this one has already made me quite emotional, shall get my tissue box ready for the next update. ---yes indeed...you'll need it! I'll keep in mind to add the note at the beginning...😳

Thanks for the PM,

Eagerly waiting for the next part xx

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Oliver.Queen

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Katie that was such a beautiful update. Amber's outburst was really logical. Any kid would react that way. When others are happily celebrating Father's Day with their father, the kids are bound to feel the void. No matter how much additional love a mother gives to her children to make their forget their longing for a father, the yearning is bound to be there. It was logical that this came from Amber as she is the more sensible one. Her words were harsh n very cunning. I can totally imagine Khushi's state. When Amber said I hate u to her it was so heart wrenching. Khushi did so much for these children, for them to turn around n point a finger at her is really upsetting. But that's the mind of kids. They keep nothing in their heart n that is the purest emotion. When Aditya followed suit with the I hate u, I kinda thought it was cute. He is so adorable. I mean ya he is really harsh with his mother. But he relents to his sister's outbursts n gives her his silent support. They only seem to argue between themselves, but when in problems, they stick together. That is such a natural bonding. Most siblings do behave this way. For Arnav to sit around in that table n here the kids tantrums were hard but very necessary. The minute the kids bad mouthed Khushi, I love how he gave her his silent support. Holding her hand under the table was the sweetest gesture. I loved how he said he won't tolerate anyone raising a finger at Khushi, not even his kids. It was nice that he was the one he went to talk to the kids to make them understand. I loved how he thought that if it was someone else, he would have showed his anger now. He calmly explained Khushi's point of view n made them realize their mistake. The manner in which he did that is bound to make them repent. His tone was very father like. N the way he made the appologing seem like a sweet gesture really showed his parenting style. Once done with the Kids, I loved how he went to pacify the kids. N the hug was so sweet. Another kiss😉. Lol. Again another chance to back away. The conversation with Aman was nice. Really heart warming to see Arnav firm such a bond with Anjali. When he talked about parenting, I was like welcome to ur new world Arnav. N they spent the night together. It was a good milestone to cross. N khushi has the fairy lights on the ceiling. It's like a part of him is inscribed within her. Nice. Sweet.

The next update would b sweet. Mission Manow Khushi. Lol.

Edited by Arnav1Khushi - 11 years ago