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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part - 4

Vicky takes Geet out to get a cake...

It's already mid-night and everyone is celebrating the victory...

They are so happy as if they have won some battle...

The fans come out on the roads and celebrate their success with the pthers...

They part sweets among the crowd and congradulate each other though they don't even know the name of the other person...

The fire crackers...shout slogans...

Some even chant Maan's name...

Geet feels so happy to hear his name...

As it's celebration time the cake shop is still open and there are special cakes made for the criclet fans...

Vicky gets one in the shape of a bat...

Geet cuts the cake at the shop itself with the fans cheering her...

They thought it's for the winning team...

Vicky says that it's his sisters b'day and she is a cricket fan too...

They all hug and wish her though they are strangers till last minute...

Geet has never celebrated such a wonderful b'day...

All thanks to Maan, had he not hit the century and India had not won Geet wuldn't have got this cake fron her brother...he would have said that her b'ady is very unlucky for India and he would have prayed that no other match falls on that date...

Maan too celebrates his success with the team...

And maybe one day they will celebrate together...

The team returns and the fans throng the airport to receive them...

Vicky had also gone to cheer the boys with his friends...

he didn't tell Geet...

He came back and told her that he saw the boys with the cup and he also saw Maan...

But the securities didn't let them go near them and meet them...

He is very disappointed...

Geet is also disappointed...

Geet: mujhe chodkke gaye haina? Toh aaisa hi hoga

Vicky: tumme lekhe jaatha toh mujhe airport ke andar hi jaane nahi dethe

Geet: kya? tum jaanthe haina ki mere b'day pe hi hum jeethe hai

Vicky: haan haan, jaise tum ne unkko jithaya?

Geet: hhhmmm, mein ne bhi babaji se dua kiya tha

Vicky laughs...

Geet: kyun hasthe ho?

Vicky: agle bar Dhoni se kehthe ki woh bhi practice chodkke tummare saath dua karne aaye, haina?

Geet: tum dekhthe raho agle bar tummara team har jayega

Vicky: kya kaha tumne?

Geet: haan har jayenge tummare stars, aur woh MSK duck out hoga

Geet andar hi andar babaji se kehthi ki ye sirf ek mazak hai, aap issko bhool jao...teek hai?

Vicky gets angry...

Vicky: Geeet

Geet: maaa , dekho bhai ko mujhe mar rahe hai

Vicky: kya?

Ranno: Vicky, tumme toh apne behen ki itna bhi parwa nahi, bahar jaake dekho sab apbe behen ke liye kya kya karthe hai

Vicky: unkke behenne iss ke tarah shaitan nahi honge

Geet: shaitan? Mein? Tum shaitan ho

The fight continues till Handaji comes and supports Geet...

Jeet toh hamesha Geet ka hi hotha hai...

Vicky bechare ko hamesha Geet ke wajhe se dhaant khana padtha...

Maan's friends wait for Maan to return...

They want to celebrate his success...

Mehnat Maan kartha aur masti ye karthe?

They ask him to throw a party...

They know Maan's weakness for alcohol and they arrange a drinks party...

Dadi was just happy that Maan has diverted his attention towards cricket from drinking...

But after so much hardwork Maan is lured by his friends to relax and have some fun...

Itna mehnat toh issiliye katrthe haina? To have a taste of triump?

Maan gets back to drinking from that day...

Having a minths break fron the hectic cricket schedule doesn't help much...

Maan shuns his practice sessions and remains drunk all the time...

Dadi ne Maan ko rokhne ki bahut koshish ki, lakhin Maan ghar jaatha toh Dadi kuch kar pathi?

Maan din raat kissi na kissi friend ke yahan party karthe rehtha...

Ab Maan sare bills settle kartha toh har din koi na koi party organize kar hi detha...

This is the result of bad company...

Aaisa hi ek din Maan kissi party attend karkke ghar wapas jaa raha hai...

Aaj toh Maan ko drive karne ka mann kartha...

Driver ne Maan ko rokhne ki bahut koshsih ki, lekhin MSK koi driver ke baat ko kaise manega?

Maan driver se chabi lekhe kudh drive kartha...

Itne nashe mein Maan control hi nahi kar patha...

Aur sadak ke side pe kissi ped par gadhi takratha...

Achcha hua ki uss waqt koi aur gadhi nahui aayi, warna kissi ko kuch ho jaatha toh?

Driver bhi saath mein that oh ussko bhi chot lagb gayi...

Maan too broke his leg...

Being a sportsman this could mean the end of his career...

Maan behosh ho jaatha...

Driver hosh mein that oh ussne ambulance ko bhuladhiya...

Aur woh Maan ko Sanjeevani lekhe jaathe hai...

Geet toh wahi apna internship kar rahi haina?

As Maan is a cricketer this became a breaking news...

Media people surround the hospital and Geet is puzzled to see all this drama...

Pehle Geet ko lagtha ki hamesha ki tarah koi politicial ya film star admit hua hoga...

Sanjeevani city ka sabse bada hospital jo hai...

Ek minute Geet becomes curious to know who is in the hospital, kahin salman toh nahi?

Hare Geet, tumme Salman se milna hai toh kissi shoot pe chale jaathi, aaise ussko Hospital mein admit kyun karwana chahathi? Phir Geet ko apne galthi ka ehsaas hotha, sorry babaji, mere salman ka rakhsha karna...ye zaroor koi aur hi hoga?

Geet ko aaise fan following se koi interest nahi hai, she just ignores them...

Vicky calls Geet and aks her about Maan...

Geet is surprised...Maan yahan kyun aayega?

Jab Geet ko patha chala ki koi accident hai she just wants to make sure he is safe...

And then she learns that he is fine and nothing serious...

She tries to keep away from him...

Ye koi star hai toh TV pe dekhteh hai, issi milkke kya faida?

Bechara toh yahan patient bankke aaya hai...

But her heart still wishes to have a glimpse...

She won't run after someone like a lunatic, star hai toh usska kaam hai fans ko entertain karna aur hum bhi ussko TV pe dekhkke kush hothe, use aage kuch nahi hai, haina babaji?

Geet thinks that afterall he is just another person ...

See he too drunk drive and made an accident...

Ye koi mahan nahi hai, ye bhi galthi kartha hai...

Achcha hua ki kissi ki jaan ko koi kathra nahi?

Ye star hai toh kuch bhi kar saktha hai kya?

Issko toh jail mein dalna chahaiye, tabhi toh sudrega...

Geet is angry with herself for supporting Maan all these days...

Talent is God's gift and one should not be judged by that alone, you are judged by your character and your deeds, jaise Sachin hai, tabhi toh woh all time super star hai...

MSK...the budding cricket star...huh...damn it...nothing is real...

It's all fake, yahi asli MSK hai, aur ye toh bahut bhura hai, bilkul Dhust Danav...

She hates alcoholics...and that too he has driven the car after drinking...

What a criminal act? He could have all the money but his money can't buy a life if he runs over someone...haina?

Geet hates Maan, yes, all the admiration turns into hatred...

Maan falls very low in her POV...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
awesome update
maan drink and drive, hogaya saari repution ka kabada geet ki pov mei


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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update...
ab geet hates maan bcoz wo drunk ho kar drive kar raha tha...

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part 3
awesome...
so Geet is getting addicted to Maan...
but Maan has no idea about someone named Geet is there...
arey aise kaise...
Rano's calculation is excellent...
hahaha...
nice...
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Part - 5

Geet wants to saty away from Maan...

He has fallen in her eyes not only as a cricketer but also as a human being...

She hates people who have no respect for others and think that they are the only people ruling this whole world...

Now she hates herself for being a fan of this MSK...

This attitude and arrogance should be limited to the sports field that too only in the game, not outside it, and this man is a real devil...

But being a physiotherapist Geet had to meet this VIP...

Maan ki treatment shuru karthe hai...

After a couple of days physiotherapy sessions start karna hoga...

Vicky had been pestering Geet to take him with her tot sanjeevani...

He has to see Maan somehow...

Geet had to do this for her brother...

Vicky is very happy...

Abhi isskke autograph aur photograph letha hoon, kya patha kal yahi gala sachin ban gaya toh?

Waise Vicky ko Maan ki batting bahut pasand hai, kaise bat kartha? Bina koi dar ki, haina?

Geet too likes his batting style but she always disagrees with her brother and this time too she had to go against his liking...

She always argues that Maan is not such a great player and pretends to hate him...

Ye toh zyada din nahi chalega...

He is just lucky to score those runs, he will not last much longer, we will have to wait and watch...this is too early to judge him...she keeps saying so...just to aanoy her brother...

Vicky says that she is a cricket illiterate and it's better for her to keep her views with herself...

Ye kya jaathi hai cricket ke barein mein? Mein toh challenge kartha hoon ki ye zaroor agla star banega...

Vicky keeps talking about Maan with Geet...

Geet ko toh game ki technical batein saamj mein nahi aathe, she just keeps nodding her head...

Geet Vicky ko Maan ke room no bathathi, Geet ko koi aur kaam hai toh Geet Vicky ko pehle jaane ko kethi, Geet badh mein aayegi...

She deliberately avoids going there...

Ussko apne bhai ko kissi ke samne gidgidathe hue dekhne pasand nahi hai...

Jo bhi ho Vicky uska bhai hai aur Geet usski bahtu izzat karthi...

Chahe ye MSK kitna bhi bada batsman ho, Geet ke liye apna bhai se badahiya toh nahi ho saktha...

She is very clear that evreyrone has his own speciality and talents, no one os bigger than the other, and she values her self respect more than anything ...

What if he is a star? you admire them, adore them and just forget them and get back to your life which is real and much more significant, haina?

But little did Geet know that he is going to invade her life and he is going to be part of her life soon...

Vicky Maan se milne jaatha...

Dr had informed Maan that the physio would come for the therapy sessions and has to co-operate with them...

Maan is waiting for the physio...

When Vicky comes to see Maan he thinks that Vicky is the physio...

Maan ko kaise patha hoga ki koi ladhki yahan ka physio hogi?

As soon as Vicky enters the room and sees Maan he is overwhelmed with joy and he starts parising Maan's batting abilities...

Maan thinks that he must be a cricket fan...

Vicky gets Maan's autograph...

Maan is loosing his patience...when will he start his treatment? Aaise hi chaltha toh ye Maan ko help nahi karega balki maan ussko batting sikhayega?

Maan: toh ab toh humme shuru karna chahiye, haina Mr.Vicky?

Vicky: what? Kya shuru karna hai?

Maan: oyu are the physio? Right?

Vicky begins to laugh...

Maan gets angry...what is so funny about it?

Agar Maan ka legs teek hothe toh aj Vicky wahan se bachkke nahi jaatha, ussko bhi yahi admittion miltha, haina?

Par ab Maan kuch nahi kar patha...

Maan gets angry with himself...

Just then Geet comes in...

Vicky: hare Geet, aao, Maan se millo

Maan: ye kaun hai?

Maan sochtha ki aur kitne pagal fans bahar kadhe hai?

Vicky: ye meri sister hai ye bhi aapka fan hai

Geet stares Vicky...

Geet: kya?

Maan: kya? ye hospital hai ya koi hotel? Jo chahe andar laise aathe? Koi hai? hare yahan ka securities kya karthe? Tum log andar kaise aaye? Just get lost, idiots , yahan bhi disturb karne aathe...

Maan lets out all his frustrations and he is in pain too...

Geet had expected this...

Ye aaisa hi hai, isse koi umeed nahi kar sakthe, upar se ye drunken drive ka case hai toh Geet ko pura yakheen ho gaya ki ye ek no ka gunda hai...gamandi akdu insaan...

Geet: kay bhai: ab toh aap kush haina? Meinne pehle hi kaah ki ye baktameez gainka hai, aap nahi amthe, ab dekha aapne, ab jayiye aap, mein aapki beizzatthi bardaasht nahi kar sakthi

Vicky leaves...

Maan: tum kyun rukh gayi? Tum bhi chale jao, just leave me alone

Maan shouts as he doesn't know what to do, he hates to be in bed...

Geet stares him...

Geet: mein bhi yahan rukhna nahi chahathi, par kya kaein ye toh hummara kaam haina? Yahan koi bhi aaye, gunda badmaash kamina ya khooni humme toh sab patients he haina?

Maan: what? How dare you call me a murderer?

Geet: kyun aap khooni banna chahathe? Aaise hi phithe rahi toh zaroor aapka spana sach ho jayega

Maan: kya?

Geet: haan, aap jaldhi khooni ban jayenge

Maan: tum...samaj the kya aopne aapko?

Geet: baabji, patha nahi hummare sanjeevani ka kya hoga? Aap kaise kaise logon ko hummare paas bhejthe ho? inko hum kaise ilaaj kar sakthe? Inko toh aap bhi bacha nahi sakthe, haina?

Maan: tum yahan kaam karthi ho?

Geet: haan, mein yahan ka physio hoon

Maan looks at her from top to bottom...

Ye toh kissi bhi angle mein physio nahi lagthi...

Haan ye toh cheer leader zaroor bana sakthi...

Maan: kya bakwaas karthi ho? jao, asli physio ko bhulakke aao, tum chahe toh autograph lelo

Geet: kya? tumne mujhe insult liya hai, mein bhi dekhthi hoon kit um kaise yahan rukhthe, mein abhi chief se baat karthi hoon...

Geet goes and complaints to her chief...

But the chief is also helpless, MSK ke khilaaf koi action le saktha hai kya?

Geet then decides that she would not attend Maan's case...

The chief agrees to send another physio...

Lekhin Maan nahi mantha, koi ladhki Maan se takrathi toh Maan kaise chup reh saktha?

Maan wants the same physio...

Ab chief bhi Geet ki madat nahi kar sakthe!

Geet ka internship agle mahine complete hoga, iss waqt Geet koi aur Hospital join nahi kar sakthi...

Geet ko iss dhust Danav ko kaise bhi bardaasht karna hi padega...warna ye aamir log toh kuch bhi kar sakthe hai, haina?

Geet apne parents ko pareshaan karna nahi chahathi...

Geet wapas Maan ke paas jaathi...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Maan ko kya gali padi maza aya!!😆
Waiting for the next !
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Posted: 11 years ago
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so nice update continue soon
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awesome updates...I have a confusion...kya tum pm send karti ho iss story ki ya fir mujhe bookmark karna parega kyunki prologue ke baad main iss story ki pm ki intezaar kar rhi thi but u didn't send...now when I was going through maaneet stories I found this story is updated & even reached part 5...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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le phirse geet ne hate karna shuru kiya kyun nahi karthi maan ne kaam jo aisa kiya drink karke ghaadi chalana
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update...
geet ne achha khasa sunaya maan ko...
lo ab maan ko geet se hi check up karwana hai...

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