Veeba:OPPOSITES ATTRACT..-Chapter-1,page-5...

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[NOTE:I know by now u all hv da proof of my craziness!🤪Okay dis 1 is on requst from our friend angelk1..And this is basically her baby..Da idea hers..nd m narrating dis..Dis is da story of a modern Baldev and da village girl Veera.. 😉
Lets see if u lyk it or not..Nd yes if u lyk it da credit goes to Kanie(angelk1)🤗..nd if u dnt lyk it plz bash me!😳Coz I could not present da story properly!
So lyk or hate..Do let me know..😉Criticisms are always welcome!😃I do want to improve..

p.s. Dnt worry I'll update alda stories!😉

Tehsina.]




PROLOGUE:

It had started to rain heavily,and he watched in frustration,that she was walking away..

Her pink shalwar clung to her skin and draped to every curves of her slim curvaceous body,as the rain dripped her wet..

Thunder light lighted up the stormy dark night sky,and he swept away pouring rain water off his face,unable to stop looking at her..

And not knowing how to stop her from leaving..

Something struck him as another thunder light lighted up the night sky..

He was inside his black SUV parked by the road,within seconds..

He found the cd and turned the music player on..Loud sound of the music flowed above the sound of the heavy rain,and thunder sounds..

And he strode towards her..

Veera stood in mid stride,as the beautiful music flowed from the car,and then the song started..

"Kabhi jo badal barse,

Main dekhu tujhe aankhein bharke,

Tu lagge mujhe,

Pehli barish ki duaa.."

She gasped out as she was whirled around and locked in his strong arms..Music swayed as she stared into his deep dark eyes,burning down into hers,as the rain poured over them..

"Tere pahloo mein rah loon..

Main khud ko paagal keh loon..

Tu gam de ya khushiyaan,

Sah loon saathiya.."

She set herself free,and tried to move away..

Her hand was grabbed by him from behind again,and she was whirled into his arms again..

"Koi nahi,tere siva mera yahaan,

Manzilein,

Hain meri to sabh yahaan,"

His hands tightened round her waist and pulled her hard and close up against his body,and she gasped out again..And his hard handsome face came close to hers,his eyes searing into her soul..

"Mita de sabhi aaja faansle,

Main chahoon,

Mujhe mujhse baantle,

Zara sa mujhmein tu jhaank le,

Main hu kya.."

The music swayed as his one hand clasped her waist tight,while the fingers of his other hand entangled with her fingers,and gently swayed with the music,his face still close to hers..

She again tried to leave but this time he pulled her from behind,and her back crashed aaginst his hard chest,as he held her in a tight embrace from behind..

"Pahle kabhi,

Na tune mujhe gham diya,

Phir mujhe,

Kyoon tanha kar diya,"

His hands swept away her long plait,as his lips caressed her neck from behind,making her melt and lean more against him..

"Guzaare the jo lamhe pyaar ke,

Hamesha tujhe apna maan ke,

To phir tune badly kyoon ada,

Ye kiu kia!"

He whirled her around,and knelt his head against her forehead,as rain kept pouring on them..He swayed slowly making her move with him..His dark eyes melting her all reserve and inhibitions..

"Kabhi jo badal barse,

Main dekhu tujhe aankhein bharke,

Tu lagge mujhe,

Pehli barish ki duaa.."

His hand around her waist tightened,and he suddenly picked her up in his arms,as her arms curved round his neck..But this time she did not protest,as she stared up into his not burning eyes,with a similar fire in hers..

"Tere pahloo mein rah loon..

Main khud ko paagal keh loon..

Tu gam de ya khushiyaan,

Sehloon Saathiyaa..!"

The music slowly faded as he carried her towards the car,to complete this emptiness within him..To find himself again before he got lost once again..

TRING!!!TRING!!TRRRING!!!

The loud ringing of the bell woke Baldev up with a start,and cursed loudly,wiping his eyes,still with traces of sleep..He checked the clock..It was 1 am..

"Who the hell came at this time of night and broke my beautiful dream?!"He muttered angrily,as he removed his blanket,got into a T-shirt,and strode down the staircase..

Still angry at the dream being broken,he peeped through the peephole,but he couldn't see anyone..

It was another stormy night,and there was a heavy downpour outside,he just could not imagine,who could come at this time of night in this heavy rain..?!

Cursing he started unlocking the door..

"I had just seen her again,and was enjoying some moments with her when someone had to interrupt and break my-.."He opened the door wide.."Dream.."

He said the last part of his sentence almost inaudibly as he stared at her standing at his front door,completely dripping wet and shivering in the rain..

Baldev could not believe that she was actually standing at his door..Her,the same Veera of whom he had been dreaming only a moment ago..The only difference was she was wearing a green kameez now,and not a pink one..

He gulped down,not able to believe his eyes,when suddenly a slight movement at her feet,made him look down..

A tiny baby face peeped out from behind her legs,and stared at him with wide innocent eyes..Its small head and body wrapped up in a red raincoat..The child held onto her dress tightly with its small hand,as if scared..

Baldev had not stopped getting out of his shock,when he heard his parents from behind him..

"Baldev who is it..?!Who came at this time of night?!"His mother Bansuri called out,just before a soft gasp escaped her lips,as she saw a dripping wet Veera,standing at the front door,with a small boy child of about one year behind her..

Balwant Singh,Baldev's father,seemed to be the one to recover from the shock first..

He put on a polite smile,and looked at Veera,moving his eyes from the small boy's face..

"Who are you beta..?"He asked softly..

A moments silence,then a strange light burning in her eyes,she looked into Baldev's eyes,as she replied..

"I'm Veera..Veera Sampooran Singh..I'm your son,Baldev's fiance.."Her words fell like a bomb into the quiet house..Shock reflected on every face..


Chapter-1,page-5:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/105109289



Link to my VEERA works😈:

Tehsina's VEERA Writng Index:Come,Live The Love..:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/102274391



INDEX:

Prologue:Above!😛

Chapter-1,page-5:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/105109289






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tamzin43 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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whaaattt😲 baldev you naughty boy 😉😉😉 shaadi seh pahli 😉 hhhmmm looks interesting i love it and dear i love your craziness😆 you got a fan in me thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this is just amazing 😛 !! guess it was not a dream after all 😆😆 !!! was he recalling their past intimate moments 😉..hmm if this is true then that kid😲...is it their baby 😳 isnt it ??!! Oh God.. am feeling dizzy with so much of anticipation lol !!! loved it totally 😛 !!

wow to top it all its sheharee munda Baldev with pind di Veera..awesome cocktail btw hehe !!! Tehsina, you ought to continue soon 😆😆
Edited by aDarkAngel - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oooh *butterflies* I wanted to read a change in equation in their settings.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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kya veera ballu's fiance ????😲 & child 2...
interesting,do continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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gharvwalo ko nahi pata he ki veera uski fiance he??? oh god toh woh bacha unka he??? jaldi bata do di 😊
Edited by meera.rajeev - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting yaar tehsina
nice start continue soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG!!! Awesome prologue!!
Can't w8 2 read more!!
Plz continue ASAP!!!
Thnx 4 d pm!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wat was dat
she is his fiance and no onw knows abt it
do update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Poor Baldev, he's only dreaming about her and lo, here she comes with a one year old child

Tehsina, this is another damn interesting story. Its almost midnight but here i am reading the updates. Thank you for the beautiful stories dear😊

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