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Posted: 11 years ago
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BRAVO! BRAVO! I LOVE THIS ALREADY. i knew u could do it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very well written as usual, well done. The story im sure will be great I personally like the stories where baldev and veera are as we see them on tv.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Absolutely amazing prologue!!! Love the idea Angelk1 ! 👍🏼 And you my friend are very talented! But very bad acha! Left us with a cliffhanger! lool Anyways can't wait for next update! Thanks for the pm!! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Absolutely amazing prologue!!! I loved it totally!!! Lekin bacha kiska hai yaar...
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I am your fan girl! Your stories are just amazing .. hats off to your creativity ! 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh my god its an awesum start tehsina...i hav become a fan for this...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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AWESUM!!!loved it yaar!!!no words,i was like 😲 the whole time(in a good way of course)!!!!continue soon and pm me when u update it!! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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[NOTE:Thank u for being so patient my frnds!😳A sincere apology as u know my odr stories kept me away from dis 1!😳]

Prologue,page-1:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/100800913

CHAPTER-1.

Baldev knocked on the door of the guest room..

He had waited impatiently for his parents to fall asleep,and now when they had he was here..

He really needed to talk to her..

After the initial shock his father was the one who had recovered fastest,and urged Veera into the guest room..

He had asked if the child was her brother,and Veera's silence gave them the answer that he was.

Veera had been guided to the guest room by his father,where Baldev had kept her small suitcase.

Baldev knocked again,and this time again there was no response.

He was getting worried now..Why was she not responding?!Where could she be?!Was she alright?!

All sorts of worrisome thoughts crossed his mind,as she knocked harder this time.

"Veera?!"He whispered urgently against the door.

Finally impatient at the absence of response,he tried the door knob.

It opened instantly,and he quickly walked into the room,closing the door with a soft click behind him..

The room was lit in the golden glow of the lights from the two bedside lamps.

The creamy white bedsheet of the large bed at the centre of the room glowed in the golden light.

He could make out a tiny form on the bed.But Veera was not around.

The child,he decided.

Slowly he walked upto the little form.

The child slept pouting his bottom lip out,and his tiny arms were hugging a small brown teddy bear.

Baldev inhaled a steadying breath,something making him want to get a closer look at the bo a small brown teddy bear.

Baldev inhaled a steadying breath,something making him want to get a closer look at the boy child.

Soft slightly curly locks fell on the child's forehead,his tiny eyelashes long and spiky,as he slept without a worry in the world..

The boy had sharp beautiful features..And Baldev did not know why he felt he had seen the child's face somewhere before.

Where had he seen this face?

He went closer..

The child frowned,and crinkled his nose,at something in his sleep,and Baldev nearly gave out a soft chuckle at seeing the act.

He was never a fan of kids,and in fact steered clear of them.So why was he so curious about this child?Was it because he was related to his Veera?

Whoa!!Wait a second man!When did Veera become YOUR Veera?!His inner voice chided him,and Baldev felt uncomfortable at the thought.

He suddenly felt uncomfortable at his coming here in her room at this time of night,and turned to leave.

He had just turned when a soft sound made him turn.

He forgot to breathe at what he saw.

Veera had come out of the bathroom,her long heavy hair wet and hanging round her beautiful face..She was draped in a short but sheer white kameez and shlawar.

The white colour of the dress highlighting her innocence even more.

Her pale creamy skin glowed in the golden light,and Baldev inhaled a steadying breath as he once again was hit by how mesmerizing she was..

Strong stormy wind blew from the window,and made the light white curtains blow,as he stared at her standing by the window and staring out into the stormy night,lost in thought..

And then she turned to face the dressing table which was placed just beside the window..

Her back was now turned to him,and Baldev was about to inhale a long steadying breath,when he completely forgot to breathe.

She had moved her wet heavy locks off her back,and that was when he noticed the zip of her white kameez was completely open..

Veera was trying to reach her zip,and it was just a few inches away from her reach.

Baldev gulped the knot of feelings that arose within him,as he watched the creamy exposed skin of her back almost halfway to her waist..

A loud thunder split the stormy night,as Baldev was once again being pulled into the abyss of undeniable attraction..

Veera frustratedly tried to reach the zipper..

She had forgotten to raise it up a bit before wearing it,and now could not reach it.

How was she supposed to tie the darn thing,if she could not reach it?!

She was trying her best to reach it,when she felt a warm hand close over hers.

She gasped out in surprise and shock,when her eyes met a pair of deep dark intense ones through the mirror..

She stayed still for a few seconds,shocked to the core.

And then when she felt his hand on hers tighten,she moved away and pushed him away roughly.

"Don't touch me!"She hissed out.

She tried to take a step back,but instantly was pulled back into his strong embrace.

Her eyes glittering in anger,she stared up into his dark eyes,trapped in his embrace,as his arms were curved tightly round her exposed back.

"Let go of me!"She hissed out again.

"I can't.."He whispered softly,in a strange husky voice..

Veera felt a different emotion course through her system,as she felt his warm hands on her exposed back,and the heat of his dark gaze..

Thunder sound went on getting louder outside,as they stared into each other's eyes..As an all new storm started brewing between themselves..


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Whoo!!!?(shivers)Awesome yaar!!!and did i read right.. BROTHER???No ways,something really fishy!!thank you so...much sina for continuing this after so...long,hope we'll get more updates soon! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow, wow, wow!!! Another great story in the making and brother, hmmm something doesn't seem right... Thanks for the PM! 😃

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