Our first Kiss!! A KriYaansh OneShot

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zona_malik

@zona_malik

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Woah Woah Woah

u every time leave me wid no words to say

i love dat cute n innocent KR works of urs

dat again was Freaking Awesome

Amazing

Superb

Fab

Splendid

Marvelous

Woah

Valentine day scene was Cute

LOved it n love u too :)

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Muskan Verma

@Muskan_SwaRon

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

res

P.S. i typed a long cmnt when this os was at pg 1 but that got deleted nd coz f anger i didn't type again 😵

will unres soon

Unres

that was hell roantic deeth 😳

really awesome

loved the drunk kriya, the way she was throwing flying kisses..that was very cute 😳

nd "baatcutter bulao na pljjj" aww cho cute 😳

nd then Reyansh trying his best to focus 😆

their first kiss ☺️

P.S. coz f yours and snigdha write ups i stated reading KR os also 😆

nd m loving it 😉

keep writing more

Edited by muskan108 - 11 years ago

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@Black_Stone

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

This was fun and Amazing one

Loved it !!!

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

such a awesome n mind blowing os.. n perfect song for a perfect os...
loved it a lot lot lot...
so simple pure n superb os..
loved d trust kria has on rey even in that drunk state n d way rey controlled himself so kria doesn't regret was awesome..
rey waiting for her to tel love u in sober state was nice..
loved d silent brush of lips n d flushed face of kria...
kria said love u rey n rey lost everything n ran to her n kissed her telling love u al along..
loved d way kria again trusted rey n rey just wanted that trust was awesome.. romantic n passionate os...

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Deethu.. this was amazing.. bechare ki toh bajaa di tune.. din raat sorf usse yahi poochne ka plan kar raha tha.. air phir woh kiss in front of SwaRon.. nchh gaye unhone notice nahi kiya..and last mein jaise Rey I love you bulwata hai and proves he really loves her by not crossing the line.. yeh hai real Rey.. the Reyansh.. we knew...