TaaRey SS : Tujhko Jo Paaya {Completed} - Page 44

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: taarey_ria

This is an awesome update!!!👏👏

Rey finally realised his feelings,,,😳😳
Loved it...please update soon
And please pm me...😃

Thank you so much

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Fam_TaaReY-

Amazing update dear 👏

Thank you so much

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dh19

awesome lovely and cute
loved rey's concern and there convo
best part was rey's realization
he is smiling like an idiot loved that part
do cont soon

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ONLYTAAREY

Just came through this ff its amazing loved all the chapter...update soon...do pm me when u continue...

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Posted: 11 years ago

CHAPTER FIVE


ON BREAKFAST TABLE


All R having their breakfast...taani and archana r serving them

Manav : swayum tum sharon aur taani ke sath shoping ke liye chale jaana...kisi aur se toh umeed nahi kar sakta

Eyeing Rey...swayum nodded his head in yes b

Rey (himself) : yeh dad mujhe ese kyun dekh rahe hai...aur ab mene kya kiya..par dad ne mujhe jaane ke liye kyun nahi bola *pause* bolenge bhi kese last week mene taani ke sath shopping jaane ke mana kar diya tha woh bada rudely *feeling guilty* usko kitna bura laga hoga...but abhi kuch larna hoga mujhe taani ke saath time spend karna hai

Rey : dad if you want i can go with them

Whole family got shock...
Archana : beta tu jayega
Rey : ha mom isme itni hairan hone wali kya baat hai...vese bhi office mein kuch kaam nahi hai

Manav also feel happy...their old rey was coming back...they can feel this change in him...after that kriya fiasco rey start distancing himself from his family and friends

Manav : okay you both go taani aur sharon ki bhi help ho jayegi

After breakfast Manav and rey left for office and swayum for his dance academy
~~

swaron and rey r on their way to sanjeevni to pick taani thn go for shopping as city mall was very close to sanjeevni
Rey stop his car infront of sanjeevni when he sees taani coming
She was coming walking very fastly...her open long hair was flying in air making her look more beautiful


only she can look so beautiful in so simple saree

Rey got lost in her...swaron smirk seeing him lost and nudge him...he come out of his Taani dreamland...they come out of the car

Sharon ran to her and hug her...rey was amused to see this as sharon THE diva dont make friends easily she dont gave fu*k to kriya and he thought that sharon took time to get friendly with tani but after looking at shaani he got prove wrong
They were looking like long lost sister who met after ages

Rey open the backside door for taani
Taani smiled at him and sat in
Sharon was about to sit in but rey pull her aside

Rey : sharon i never thought that u would jell up with taani so easily without any efforts...i mean kriya ne kitni koshish ki tum aur woh frnds ban jao but u

Sharon : rey dont compare taani with that creep girl...aur taani hai hi itni sweet ki koi usse dur reh hi nahi sakta...in this one month taani came very close to me and now she is my best friend

With that she go from there and sat in car
Rey (himself) : sahi kha tumne sharon woh hai hi itni sweet ki koi usse dur nahi reh sakta...

He also sat in car and drove to mall

~~

Taani and sharon were searching for some good bridal wear and both the majnus were busy in admiring their lady love

Soon sharon called swayum for helping her in selecting her dress...both got busy
Taani left alone...she look at them...how she wished that rey n she also like them a lovely couple...where both love each other
Sge smile sadly and continue her shopping

Rey saw her looking at swaron and smiling sadly...he knows what she was thinking
He feels more guilty for his ignorance toward her and their relation but now he will make everything perfect for her

He walk toward her...taani look at him

Rey : do you need any help
Taani smiled at him
Taani : m confuse...what to select this one or this one

She shows him two lenhgas

Rey look at both of them and select Red and pinkish one as its his fav. Colour and he like her seeing in red
Sharon also come there
Sharon : taani tumne kuch select kiya
Taani : yeah this one...i think i should try this once
Sharon : okay
~
Taani goes in trial room to change...sharon was standing outside
Swayum came their n tell sharon that he had selected one dress for her...sbaron goes with swayum n tell rey who was busy in looking for saari for his wife that taani is in trial room

Rey also go there...taani dont know that sharon has left and now rey was standing outside

Taani from inside...
Taani : sharon...i need ur help with this dori

She needs help to tie the dori of her choli...Rey was looking confuse...ab kya kare

Taani : sharon...pls yaar jaldi

Rey smiles naughtly...thought to spend some romantic timw with his wife

Rey : but sharon toh yaha nahi hai taani

She again called her but with little irritation of not having any answer

Rey slowly open the door of trial room and step inside n lock the door beghind him

He rooted to his spot...she was looking like a fairy in lahenga...


her bare back was facing him...taani was not able to tie her dori...she turn toward door to look for sharon but instead of sharon rey was there..looking at her intensly


Taani for a second got lost in his eyes but soon comeback when she realise that she is standing there without her dupptta...she quickly turn her back toward him

With her this move rey come back to his sense

Taani : aa..aap
Rey : ha woh sharon swayum ke sath hai and tumhe help ki jarurat thi...main kar doo

Rey ask her and taani was feeling very shy but nodded in yes...rey stand behind her...taani clutch her lahenga tightly in her fist

Rey remove her hairs from her back...Taani shivered with his touch...closed her eyes

Rey tie the knot of dori and turned her toward him...she was breathing heavily because of their close proximity...Reys hand grip her by waist and pulled her toward him.
Their faces were inches apart both can feel each others heartbeat

Rey : taani i wanted to say something

Taani : hmm *still lost in him*
Rey : woh...i
He look at her face her eyes were closed
Rey kissed her right cheek...then left...she tighten his grip on his shoulder...he bend down a little n kiss her neck...both were lost in moment
His hands were roaming on her bare tummy...he move down little to kiss her cleavage which was visible to him as she was not wearing her dupptta...both were out of their sense...rey sat on his knees

Taani let out a moan as she felt his lips on her stomoch...she roam her hands in his hairs clutching them for support
Taani : Reyyy
Moan escaped from her mouth when he bite on her waist
Reys phone ring...bringing them back in real world...both realize their position
Rey stand up and taani turned to other side...she was blushing badly
He smiled seeing her blush

Rey moved closer to her ear and
Rey : bahot pretty lag rahi ho

Saying this rey move out from T.R leaving badly blushing tani behind


PS : sorry for mistakes and so boring chapter

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Posted: 11 years ago
Its not at all boring...
Dress selection is superb..
Shani friendship...loved it...
Trial room scene... No words to describe it 😉
Continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
it's not boring dear,
it's an lovely update,
pls update next part soon,
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow! Rey himself offer to go shopping with Taani and Sharon...
I love the way Rey was admiring his wife while she walk to the car lol
And he was so surprise that Shani are so close, I like Sharon reply to him
Aww Taani looking at Swaron and wish she had that with Rey too was a little senti
I like that Rey notice and he step up to help his Taani
OMG!!! Fitting room romance was so romantic, I'm still blushing 😳
Superb update, I love it
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Posted: 11 years ago
yupiiieee i m first one to comment!!!
i just loved this update!!!!
it was taareylicious😉
update soon
n please pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow awesome
rey lost in taani
shaani bond is super
trial room romance haye super
TR confession soon
update soon

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