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Hey friends This os is gift to my dearest friend on her birthday... My paglu... beauty hope u like it...love u❤️


-Runaway Love-

A black sport car enters through DPS College grabbing everyone's attention. A girl with tight jeans and Sleeveless top came out of the car. Her pony was placed high which moves right to left whenever she moves her head giving her cute look. Geet...college k pehle din bhi late... Her gang came towards her...oh come on what's about this first day... We are here from school...Geet replied arrogantly... And princi said no ragging at all Pinky reminded her knowing her friend very well Pinky we are seniors here...So officially we have all the right to rag newbies... Geet smirked. Geet see...a newbie...lets go... other girl from the gang said. They came towards a boy having two glasses, brace basically total geek in their views. What's your name? Geet asked scanning him tom to bottom scaring hell out of him a..adi he stammered a.a.adi what type of name it is. All laughed at him Geet took his glasses making fun of his...Geet looked at pinky who was completely lost in Adi...what's wrong with you...please Geet spare him na...See he is so cute...please... What !!!! Are you mad pinky...How can you find him cute? And No ways I am gone let him go this easily every newbie has to go through all the rituals before entering to class room...samjhi... then turns towards Adi...oyye sun...she stopped adi who was about escape... You have to....her talk stopped in middle as she heard omg what a hunk...she turned towards where all are looking... A Boy getting down from his red sports car...not better than mine sporty she thought... Geet's eyes popped out seeing his car parked so near to her sporty. As no one dares to park any vehicle near her sporty... It is her special place And the scratch on her sporty because that guys car just erupts molten lava in her... Oyye... How dare you scratch my sporty with your khatara...Excuse me?? All the girls hooted hearing his so manly voice... She stared at all angrily and turns again to maan... Glaring at him maan forwarded money towards her yeh lo thik karalo khud ki khatara...he was about turn and left she held his collar and pulled him... You just said khatara to my sporty my...Geet Handa's...what do you think of yourself... Maan Singh Khurana Maan said jerking her hand away from his collar... All the girls just screamed few even fainted Geet looked at them disgustingly... Maan smirked at her and left. Geet couldn't believe he is maan... He changed so much... Obviously he was handsome before 5 years back but now he turned so manly... much like Greek God... But that doesn't matter to her anymore. She hates him... She will show him his place.

Oyye Khurana... Geet stopped Maan who was about enter the class room... Yes Handa... Say madam as I am senior to u...senior when that did happen you are younger to me by 6 months 3 days 5hrs remembermaan answered with smirk... Geet always hates his smirk it shows how arrogant, cruel and utterly sexy he is...she mentally slapped herself for thinking such thing about him. Look yaha meri chalti hai...it's my college.so you Maan cuts her in between Really handa waise kitne me kharida ye college... Geet was about to pounce on him but all girls dragged her from there as they saw principle was coming in their direction. Maan laughed you didn't change a bit meow...left to his classroom.

Bell rang all students settled in their classroom. Geet came with her gang all made way for her. She sat alone at her usual place. Princi came with Maan introduced him to whole class as Maan was their trustee's son. He is new here students so co-operate him. After fifteen minute's of princi's lecture regarding Maan's success... Princi said So he will seat with...he raised his hand toward adi but maan pushed his hand towards Geet...Thank you sir...and even before anyone could react he sat next to Geet pushing her toward other side...Geet angrily scratched his hand with her nails Ahhh meow... Don't you dare to call me that ever again...Geet said with hatred why? Maan asked because you don't hold that right anymore Maan kept quit the moment.

At night Maan and Geet were lost in their past... remembering every moment of their togetherness...

Past

Maan's father Yash singh khaurana and Geet's father Mohindar Handa both were business partner more than that they were best buddies from childhood. Both Mansions were beside each other. When Geet was born they decided to turn out their friendship into relationship. So Maaneet's fate was decided by their parents when Geet was born.

(Maaneet in 7th standard now)

Maan was really fond to Geet as she was cutest thing in the whole world. Both were in DPS and same class. Armaan was common friend of Maaneet in same class as Maaneet.

Maan, where are you yaar...yaha Geet roye ja rahi hai... I can't stop her... Armaan said to Maan on call... He was hell worried for Geet as she is crying nonstop... He tried to stop by making funny faces, cracking jokes but she just cried more loudly getting frustrate with his stupid act he had to call Maan as he couldn't stop her cry. After a minute Maan came running inside... Armaan stared at him from top to bottom he was all dirty from head to toe before he could ask anything Maan dragged him to Geet's room. Geet hugged Maan crying more Maan kitty didn't return home from yesterday...I searched everywhere but she is nowhere... And again cried Meow you couldn't found her because she got trapped in store room. Geet stared at him when her kitty's voice grabbed her attention who was in Maan's hand which he was hiding behind his back. Maan forwarded kitty towards her Geet took hugged it like baby. Geet kissed Maan on his cheek...and again got busy with her kitty. Maan and Armaan admired their innocent friend with smile.

(Maaneet and Armaan in 9th now)

Armaan always admired Geet as a friend but Maan's feelings changing towards her. He was always possessive for her but it was increases tenfold now. He would fight with every guy who even stared at her talk was far thing. Armaan was only guy other than him who could talk to her or be friend with her. He couldn't fathom what the name of this feeling which he have for her but whatever it is but it's beautiful...

(Maaneet and Armaan in 10th now)

Geet do you know apne class me new girl aayi hai...She is so beautiful... tujhse bhi jyada...Armaan said teasingly Geet looked at Armaan irritatingly So what My Maan loves me the most... I don't care about these things. Toh usse kehti kyu nahi...Why main hi kyu kahu... He should say it first... Geet declared her wish and left from there. Armaan shook his head as both says this only. Maan wants her to confess first and Geet wants Maan to confess it first Issi chakkar me dono k pyar ki gadi aage nahi badh rahi...

Geet was coming from her class with her friends when she saw Maan in parking lot with that new girl. Geet's mouth hits to the floor seeing the scene in front of her both were laughing, enjoying... Geet ran towards them she stopped near tree behind them to listen what they were talking about. Maan I heard that you are very close to that Geet, Is it true? Who that meow... and laughed no way Pari darling... you call her meow? Ha because she scratches people by her nails like cats... both laughed. Geet was ready to pounce on him with her sharp nails. Geet scratched on Pari's face stopping her laugh Maan!!! She cried in pain. Woh kya bolega he is mine only understand... If I saw anywhere near My Maan tere face ko Facebook bana dungi... Pari ran away from there Geet turns to Maan he was smirking... giving an angry glare to him she was about to leave Maan held her hand and pulled towards him. So I am yours ha? He asked huskily... Geet just hits on his chest I know you did this all drama to make me confess... but you know what I hate before she could say further Maan pecked her lips I love My meow... Geet stared at him shockingly she couldn't believe what he just said... Maan smiled at her innocence. This is the one of reason he fall for her. Her face broke into beautiful smile... she just hugged him almost jumping on him I love you Maan... I love you so much... Maan too held her tight to himself lifting her from ground. Ahhem Ahhem both broke there hug embarrassingly as they heard Armaan's fake cough. Armaan teasingly smiled at both of them...then hugged both.

Maaneet were very much happy with their new found relation when they return home there everything was changed. Maaneet's fathers had big loss in their business last month since then their friendship got barrier. After that each loss lead to misunderstanding and cracked their relation. But today was final blow when their personal as well as professional relationship finished. They have become enemy in personal life and business rivals in professional life. Maaneet couldn't understand anything about business but they knew in all this their love will suffer the most. Both families were shifting their house wanting to get away from other family. Maan Geet tried to stop but their parents shut them down.

It's been month since both didn't see each other as Maan's father changed his school too. Maan left to his new school but took turn to DPS School. Geet and Armaan were waiting for Maan as it was planned a day before. As Maan reached there Geet ran and hugged him tightly crying complaining that how much she missed him. After calming her down Maan said Meow, don't cry please calm down. But Maan they will never accept our love... That's why I have plan Geet looked at him questioningly. We will runaway tomorrow night. Geet grasped with shock Armaan too got shock hearing Maan's plan. But Maan that's too risky and tum log jao ge kaha? Armaan asked worryingly for his best friends. I have talked to my nani Armaan she is ready help us. We will live there for some day then will leave somewhere far away from here. Maan turned to Geet Meow you trust me na? Geet nodded for yes without hesitating. Then be ready tomorrow night and come to the park in front of your home. I will pick you from there. Hmmm? Geet nodded with smile. Armaan be with her all the time please. Oyye, you don't have to plead for it...I will be there for both of you... Maan hugged Armaan and left giving assuring look to Geet.

As per their plan Geet and Armaan came to park at night jumping from her room's window waited for Maan. Minutes turns hour Maan didn't come. Armaan call him na... Armaan called Maan his phone was switched off he called his home Maan's mom picked up the phone. Aunty, Main Armaan ... Maan hai? Beta, woh toh kal raat ko hi new york chala gaya... what!!!! But why? Armaan almost shouted getting shock... Geet was staring at him with fear grabbed the phone put it in loud speaker... Maan decided he will study further in New York so he left... Geet just dropped the phone fell on her knees breaking down Armaan cocooned her as she kept crying. Why he did this to me Armaan? Why? Armaan took her back to her home from balcony sat there until she slept then left to his home. Nobody comes to know that Geet was away from home for hours. After that day Geet was completely changed. She never gave anyone chance to break her. She was strong now... who left her past far behind... But unknown to her the love she had for Maan never ended it was there only in pretense of hate.

Next day when Geet entered her college was about to leave to her class someone grabbed her by arm and placed his firm hand on her mouth to stop her scream then he took her darkest corner of corridor. Geet knew who it was ... she tried to free herself but he was so big compared to her. He pinned her to wall and leaned on her. They were so close as if one body. Why you bring me here? Geet asked him angrily...we need to talk ... Maan lovingly answered what is there to talk about Maan... everything finished that night itself... you finished it. Geet said with pain... Geet that's what I want to talk about.. Please Maan you already had done the damage... what you wanted to prove? That I will run away from my home, leaving my parents just for you... that I was desperate for youGeet said accusingly... Please Meow.. listen once... I said don't utter that word.. Geet just pushed him away turn to leave but Maan pulled her again pinned her to wall came close to her... Give me a one chance at least to explain... Maan said... his voice clearly indicate his helplessness. Geet kept quit indicating him to continue. That day when I came to meet you in the school dad saw me and heard our plan Geet stared at him shockingly...

When Maan came home from Geet's school... His dad came towards him slapped him hard. How dare you.. How dare you plan something like this that too with that Handa's daughter? ... I love her dad... Maan said firmly. He again slapped Maan locked him in his room...made all arrangements to send Maan New York. Next day they forcibly sent Maan away from there... When Armaan called his home they already knew Armaan too was involved in all this so Maan's mom lied to him knowing Geet will be with him.

I tried everything meow but they didn't let me...but now they think after five years I forgot you...How can they think like this meow how can a person forget to breath how can I forget you.. Geet's tears rolled down from her eyes. Maan I am sorry... nah nah... this is not what I want to hear. Geet smiled with tears jumped on him hugging him the way she hugged him at their first confession I love you maan I love you so much... Maan tighten his hold on her I love you more... Maan placed her down came so close that their lips almost touching each other's. Waise The plan is still there.. Let's runaway to the place where only love could found us with his each words his lips touched her sending shiver down to her spine. Maan stared at her eyes for her acceptance. Geet closed her eyes nodded for yes... with that Maan placed his lips on hers ...

Geet threw her bag from her window get down with ease as if she practiced it daily... She reached at the park near to her home...it was half an hour maan didn't show up. Geet's heart beating heavily... though she trusts Maan but that night kept flashing in front of her reminding the pain to be away from Maan... This time she knew everything will be alright. A Bike zoomed towards her Geet smiled knowing her Maan came. Sorry baby got late... Maan held his ears asking cute sorry to his meow. Geet pulled his hand away from his ears shook her head for no... Both stared at each other's eyes promising a future to each other...Geet climbed on bike kept her hands on Maan's shoulder but Maan pulled her hand around his stomach Geet shifted more close to him moved her hands around his torso held him tightly. Maan accelerate his bike... Chale? Let's go Maan far away from here... jaha sirf hum dono aur hamara pyar ho... Maan turns to her kissed her cheeks so let's Runaway love... And they zoomed out in foggy night away from every damn thing which could stop their love journey.

sorry for any mistakes...

Thank you!!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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jerry very nice os.👏👏


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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww.. cute one...
maan and geet are so sweet..
loved it!!!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww such a sweet, cute lovestory!!!
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os for my birthday how sweet!!!!!!😳

kitna cute tha!!!!!!
bilkul meri tarah😆

love the starting geet in full tashan...😎
mujhe laga adi toh gaya but pinky aagi beech mei to save her cuty adi😳😆

red sports car mei maan ki entry😎
geet ko laga shock!!!!!😲😆

both giving tashan to each other
me was thinking ab kya hoga but pata chala they already know each other😳

past was so cute re...
maaneet always together❤️
childhood love
love armaan too , very good friend
maaneet ki family ke beech jadha, hayee maaneet juda hogaye

but my super crazy maaneet decided to run away from this zalim duniya😃😆
they were in 10th class then😳
armaan helped geet , but maan nahi aaya, geet depressed
present truth reveals!!!!!😊
maan is not dokebaaz , he is sacha aashiqi😳
he came to take his geet again!!!!
geet forgave him
maaneet together , they kissed , u wrote that scene😳
they finally ran awaay...😳😳😳

love it!!!!!!!!!

can we get an epilogue too????
Edited by -MSKdeewani- - 11 years ago
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Abhi read nahi kiya...but liked it...😆😉
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cute stry,,,
lov deir innosnse ,,,
cngrts dear,,,,👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congrats for the new OS
awesome OS
loved it
maan and geet are childhood friends and their fathers also good freinds
but circumstanced turned two families in to enemies and here two love birds had to pay for that
finally maan and geet ranway from their families to cherish theri love and start a fresh life

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Posted: 11 years ago
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its really a cute os
maaneet were as usually super duper
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what a lovely os sweetie!
it's amazing!

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