THE LOCKET (17) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 25

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Posted: 11 years ago

yeh dot kyun?

hum pe itni meherbani?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jasraj123

omggg sooo sorry avi
I don't know how to say and how i forgot😭😭😭
i thought i did comment but damnnn me again did the blunder.
this is problem with me when i read at blog then i forget to come back and comment.
will try not to let it happen again


Now the update omgg

love the update so so much
maan's restlessness and then him using stairs to calm him down😆😆
uff maan babu can any stairs calm u down other than ur mishty
then him admiring her playing with kids and omg what was geet thinking comparing him with aman🤣
haila hatta katta hamara maan or aman🤣 koi comparison hain kya😆😆
but love the geet's try to tease him and she did paid for that tease too😉😉

then their locker room scene hai sher ke moonh mein haath daala hain to ab bugto
was mind blowing written avi

ufff us ke baad him asking and going to her apartment.
ab kya kahoo avi the whole update i read three times again and again
bus dil hi nahi bhar raha tha from their cute come passion full moments and
maan's mission is still on
pehle dori's tie ki and ab khol di
then her sharing about her dream😆😆 she does not leave any chance to tease poor maan
he is waiting for five years and she is still thinking it's early😕😕

then their passionful lunch and then his vow to himself to eat lunch with her all the time

once again kaan pakkar ke so sorry


Thank you Jas. I do miss when my regular readers don't comment so I did miss all your smileys😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: krati5

part 65 (2)


How come sumeet know about mathali?? oh he is a rich person, aab tak to dub jana chahiye tha uski sari property... leecher insaan...😡
Sumeet has always known where they were. He abandoned them but he wanted to get his haq for having raised a boy. He assumed Megha to be a rich girl since the event was at the Khurana's.
& even now he is arrghhh😡 behaving like he is God!!!!! kabir 😭, usko marta hua chod diya aur aab haq jatane aaya hai...

isme ek salute ki smiley bhi honi chahiye thi. i wanna give that one to mathali... its very very tough to break the abusive cycle... she stood for herself...👏 ⭐️...a very very inspiration chapter for all those who hesitate to stand up for their rights...I think even when I was writing the outline I picked her name to be Maithili for that reason. It is the name of Sita and her character was also shaped like that. Today's men are not like Ram unfortunately otherwise no woman would suffer like this.

i love spending girlfriends time out... so masti... u can't help urself to not enjoy that... it end at a upset note but hey they were successful to fight... kapow!!!!

NOOO... maan ka accident!!!!!!!! yeh scene to that hi nahi... yeh kaha se aa gaya... darn authorities... my poor baby is praying out there & they r not letting maaneet meet...
dev again a savior... have i told u i like this dev a lotI do believe you mentioned it once or twice. 😆I actually lost half my readers in the beginning when they saw NT and Dev in the story.😆

Thanks Krati for a lovely comment.
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Posted: 11 years ago

special precap sunke... mera dil more kare ... for update pading...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo

10000th post in one of my most loved stories' thread! 😃


congo sizzling mari


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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful romantic part
finally maan could gather some time with geet
ufff...maan jealous of aman, a little boy...
loved geet stealing moments to savour maan while palying...
omg...geet thinking that maan will be the winner in kissing marathon in olympics...lol...
glad this time geet did not deny him
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Posted: 11 years ago
Like button is not working today...will like it later
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Thanks Krati for a lovely comment.


those readers missed a wonderful story... idiots...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1


🤗

Glad you liked it.



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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely teaser
was missing devtara
dev is back now it will be fun
daadimaa now you have to thank the gods for getting sweetest daughter inlaws who can handle your ziddi grandsons
chotu to geet hai buddhu maan
dev song selection😆

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