THE LOCKET (17) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 27

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Posted: 11 years ago
dev and his i star story also cherry on cake dev is really charming champ he had the charm to bow a man also then i star is also not an excemption must say
haha i am literally laughing my head out with i star curses for dev lolzz
wow so there story started now as dev falling for his i star after watching her in that avatar

maaneet story is really cool going and you know i love maan more here your way of presentation just holding me tight here i am reading your story at night till 12pm i am worried my drak circles will grew up now i am already suffering for that lolzz

will be back with comment reading total story more over i have an interview in 15days so wont be able to comment like this

so i am thinking to comment for on going parts after i completed reading hope you wont mind in that

ps: i wonder will i be able to stop my self not to comment after i read parts as i am loving it
but i have to interview is really IMP for me now so lets see
you know deactivated my FB account even lolzz

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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved the teaser in which Maan is being teased by his twin and of course by CID Dadi😆😆
Oh dear all that sajna gearing up to look irresistible is going down the drain with Maans acceptance! The foolish Romeo is not aware that Chotu is Geet!😉
Can't wait to see his reaction when he realises what he has done.😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update kya kahein iss ke baaremein

maan wants to spend time with giit but dadi and dev ne poori tarah se decide kiya ki usko wo mauka nahi dene waale hai😆😆😆aur kaamyaab bhi hone waale thay par maan ne achi tarah se dev ko pataliya

planning to meet his friends maan and dev are going to take them to disc and here tara ne geet ko wo dress dekhkar geet ko nahi balki maan ko bhi tadapne diya😆😆😆

dave is just like maan less words

just loved the song and dance
Edited by priya111111 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
😉aur main bhi reserve kiya😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
First of all, thank you so so sooo much for the dedication! 🤗

You had my interest with the twin talk at the start. I could so understand what Maan felt having a twin who understood the unsaid words as well as took a great deal of fun in the other half's condition. 😆

Dev's humming habit reminded me of the start of this story when he'd first met Tara and the songs he had thought of then. He's been MIA for a while and I have missed him. Not that I'm complaining of back to back MG romance. 😳

This chapter, like I said, was so perfect. It felt like no harm had ever touched the couples in there and there was love and contentment surrounding all of them. I know , I know, it's ending and I am getting that strange feeling of what I'm going to do once it ends, but I figure I might as well enjoy it here and now rather than worrying of the future. Easier said than done, I tell you!

The bike ride. Even though it was short, it pulled me back to the younger Maan and Geet, the ones of the silent love era. They have progressed from the time that she sat with a tentative hand on his shoulder while he quietly wished for more, to the time that he can possessively pull her against his back and put her arms around his waist, yet the essence is still the same. They have changed yet they are the same. You're getting what I'm trying to say?

The song was perfect to depict the voice the hearts of the couples had. Everything I do, I do it for you... I love the song's lyrics!

You know, I always confuse Mohit Raina and Mohit Malik, though they are nothing alike. 😆 I guess I'll remember now that Mohit Malik is WOL's Maan's father and Mohit Raina is TL's Dave. 😆

The pictures you added were a treat. The pathani suit ❤️, the off white dress ❤️ and the look in his eyes... ❤️

Thanks for this chapter! I thoroughly enjoyed it. 😃
Edited by mayyo - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update...⭐️...loved maaneet moments......loved it...❤️...eagerly waiting 4 the next update......thank u 4 pm...😃...pls continue soon...😊...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice part. Liked dev maan interaction,typical siblings. 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome lovely update
I lovedd song its apt
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thats an awsome update😃😃..ye dev bhi kuchh kam nahi hai..😆
thanks for update..👍🏼

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