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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am just hating CV's like anything...Gosh, What the hell is happening in the show yaar🤔...I am missing My RaHi moments like anything. I know, you all are also. So I hope u will get some relief after reading this ...Will be waiting for your views..😳

My Idiotic Soulmate



"What do you think I should get her for her birthday... how about makeup from MAC?..I heard girls love that brand".. he said while running to the makeup section.

"See, she'll look beautiful wearing these... WHAT! The total comes out to be 15000-/, how on earth, no wonder girls love this brand, they get to clear out a man's wallet". He said sighing, while walking to the billing area.

"The things I do for love" he said nodding his head, while getting out his credit card.

"Will that me all sir?" the employee asked politely.

Ranveer looked at him with a paranoid expression, "Why, should I buy her more makeup, or should I buy her a perfume...why aren't you answering me..My relationship is at risk here, and you're just standing there" he said panicking.

"Ranveer, chill man, just relax..Panchi isn't going to dump you, you bought her a wonderful present, and she'll love you for it" KD said calming his friend's nerves.

"OMG! Did I just buy her makeup'? Shit' shit' shit, now she's going to think that I think she's ugly', but seriously, I don't think she's ugly, she's the best thing that has ever happened to me, I'm such an idiot" Ranveer said while banging his head against the wall.

"Ranveer! Just get a grip of yourself dude; you and Panchi have been together your whole life... You both are Childhood buddies. Always there for each other... And now she's turning 21, don't you think you can give her something else that is even more special then makeup" KD said raising his eyebrow, and looking at Ranveer panicking him even more.

"I have no idea what you're talking about KD, why can't you be like those friends who are straight up?" Ranveer asked, getting even more confused by KD.

"I'm trying to say is that; you're a slow person man, I mean for her 24th birthday I think you should propose her . Last time she proposed you publically but now its your turn dude.. You two have known each other for 12 years, so I think it's time" KD said slowly, trying to make Ranveer understand.

"You mean propose to her. You must be out of your mind, I mean when I told her I loved her, she started crying so badly, and imagine what she would do if I proposed, she might commit suicide, so bad idea man" Ranveer said, still baffled about hearing KD's idea.

"Ranveer those were tears of joy you idiot, anyways it's all up to you, otherwise makeup sounds great" KD sighed at how stupid his friend was.

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"Hey Kiya, what are you doing here all alone?" she asked Kiya, as she spotted her friend sitting alone in a cafe.

"Nothing Panchi, just talking to KD on the phone blabbing about how crazy Ranveer is going to buy you the right gift" Kiya said while shaking her head.

"This guy I swear, he is so slow, even a turtle can beat him mentally" she sighed, and sat next to Kiya.

"I know Panchi, you know KD actually suggested to him to propose to you, and Ranveer said how you'll start crying" she said weirdly, as Panchi gave a blank expression.

"I swear, this guy is gonna kill me one day with his cuteness, I mean he's such an adorable idiot, he can't see my tears, but doesn't understand that they are due from happiness, such an idiot" she said, smiling and shaking her head, while Kiya smiled at her friend.

"Still doesn't mean I don't want him to propose, but I guess proposal is out of the list of presents, I swear if he doesn't propose tonight I'm breaking up with him, and running away with another guy" Panchi slammed her coffee cup on the table with anger.

"Anyways I'm leaving, see you tonight at the party" she said getting up from the chair, while Kiya nodded.

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"SURPRISE! HAPPY BIRTHDAY" the crowd screamed, as she looked around surprised. Her eyes only wandered for one person, which obviously was Ranveer Shergill,her Nonu

"Happy birthday Moti" he said hugging her from behind, and kissed her cheek. Panchi looked at him in disappointment, and ignored his hug by showing him attitude.

She pushed him away, and approached KD and Kiya, as they pulled her into a hug. "Thank you guys" she said while accepting her gifts.

Ranveer smiled at her disregarding him, and approached the three. Panchi felt his present behind her, and just left him there standing, with his cute smirk.

"She hates you Ranveer, she told me if you don't propose, she'll dump you" Kiya said nodding her head.

"She doesn't really mean that, I know she would wait for me for eternity, she loves me so much" he said checking her out dreamily.

"But your hurting her man, I mean she waited for you for 12 years to be asked out by you, and then so long to say I love you, and how long do you want her to wait for you more,aren't you the one who said you can't see her cry, but imagine the pain she will go through if you make her wait more".. Ranveer looked at KD and smiled, as KD looked at him suspiciously.

Ranveer walked up to the stage, and held onto the microphone as he gained the crowds attention.

"Ladies and Gentlemen, well as you know this party is held for Ms. Panchi Rastogi's aka My Moti's 21st birthday and this song I'm about to sing goes out especially for her'..Hope you like it Moti... he said with twinkling eyes, as she smiled at him unknowingly..

Kaise Mujhe Tum Mil Gayi, Kismat Pe Aaye Naa Yakeen

Utar Aayi Jeet Mein, Jaise Chaand Utar Ta Hai

Kabhi Haule Haule Dheere Se

Gun Guni Dhoop Ki Tarah Se Tarango Mein Tum

Chhoo Ke Mujhe Guzari Ho Yuh

Dekhu Tumhe Ya Main Sunoo, Tum Ho Sukoon

Tum Ho Junoon..., Kyun Pehre Raat Aayi Tum

Kaise Mujhe Tum Mil Gayi, Hooo.., Kismat Pe Aaye Naa Yakeen, Hooo...

Main To Yeh Sochta Tha, Ke Aaj Kal Kuch Bataane Ko

Fursat Nahi Phir Bhi Tumhe Banaake Woh

Meri Nazar Main Chadh Gaya, Ruit Pe Duaa..Aur Ban Gaya

Zindagi Sitaar Hogayi, Rimjhim Malhaa Hogayi

Mujhe Aata Nahi Kismat Pe Apni Yakeen Kaise Mujhko Mili Tu

As the song ended, he was shocked when he realized he was in a person's embrace. As he looked at the person, he saw the love and passion she held inside her eyes, as tear drops rolled down her eyes.

As the spotlight fell on both, he knew it was time to ask her. "Moti, you are the most controversial girl I have seen, I mean you cry during happy times, You always put my wishes before you, Always there for me, Those are the little things I love about you, and make you unique, your smile holds my day; your tears shatter my heart, I promise everything will go your way, with our life having a new start. I guess what I'm trying to say is that'"

He bent down on his knees, as she looked at him with teary eyes, with a smile on her face, "Ms. Panchi Rastogi, are you willing to be with an idiot like me, and give me private tutoring to make me smarter" he said, as his eyes glistened in the light.

"Yes" Panchi mumbled, as he placed the beautiful diamond ring on her ring finger.

"You're so slow" she said, as he got up, and hugged her. "I hate you so much" she whined, while he kissed her lips. She kissed him back, as the crowd cheered at them.

"GUYS! FINALLY AFTER 12 YEARS, RANVEER PROPOSED TO PANCHI" KD shouted, only to get slapped on the head by Ranveer.

"Ouch, what was that for" he said, only to be slapped by Panchi on the head again. "Panchiaaa" he whined.

"Stop it, I love my slow Nonu,He is My Idiotic Soulmate ..even though I waited so long, he finally did proposed" Panchi said kissing his cheek.

"I love you so much Motii, thanks for being all mine" he hugged her, while she hugged him back.

As a finally touch, sparkles fell on the couple as they remained in each others embrace.

@yusramazhar1...First of all toh I am so sorry dear ..I know I promise to write something on RaHi marriage..But what to do..aisa kuch dimaag mein abhi nahi aa raha😳...will surely try to write something like this for sure 😳...Hope u will like this one dear...

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MyLifeMyRulz thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
Hmmm...let me think
what to say? what to say?😕😕
aaa Geet this is not fair I am again speechless because of u
that proposal was just perfect👏
and idiotic ranveer thinking so much and buying expensive things for simple panchi 😆
Geet sachi teri tarif kese karu samaj nahi a raha he
but really thanks for writing this os when I really needed it all because of cvs not giving us rahi scenes😡
Geet your are sweetheart🤗❤️
Muhaaa🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Geet oh! dear thanks because by this OS rahi fans will be satisfy😊 because they are not getting proper scene,but dear thanks to you specially form me because your OS bring not only rahi but kisha also together👍🏼.You give proper space to four of them.
Sometimes i feel you guys should take creative responsible instead of that stupid CVS😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow Geet nice OS yaar...once again Portraying Rahi very nicely😃😃
panchi's birthday...Tensed Ranveer...and Proposal...

In todays episode also Rahi were too cute and understanding...😳😳

smriti
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi geet..that's your name right??..well thanks for this surprise relief..it sure brought a smile on my face.. warna toh cvs are pretty much determined to not give us any romance on the show.. u understand the essence f nonu moti so well..a goofy ranveer n his cutesy angry panchi are a delight..loved Kd n the slap that he received from both his friends for his help too..hope u remain inspired enough n we get to read these lovely works on rahi..
Thanks so much...Neha..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Geet

thank you so much for this!

its a lovely OS,the way he was getting all hyper finding a perfect gift!

the way KD was handling him

and Panchi waiitng for him to propose and then the proposal,she was in his arms

ahhh and then the way it all happend!

he proposed her,but one confusion,he did for marriage?or official I love you?

ahhh the Kiss(i am loving this baarish of kisses😆😆)

he cant see her cry?my Nonu

loved it Geet Di,keep writing more!😳😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww 😳 dis was sooo cuteee 😉
Really Hats Off 👏
T way u handled all t 4 characters was awesome...Gr8 job 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww this is so cute! I love how you retained the characters and stuck them to canon; and KiSha's help in it was amazing too! Loved the OS, do write more!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Geet it was jst so perfect...
Loved it to d core.. Ur Nonu cant see panchi crying aww..
I didnt like it i loved it...
Especially d Title was fab..
Geetu..its lovely update..Cvs should appoint yu fr Rahi scenes sachi.. everyone would be so happy..
N u did justify to Kisha even showing dem as gud buddies..Thats wat is perfect abt u..:)
Rahi together n forever..The way Mr.Nonu aka turtle finally propose our panchi...I loved it..<3
Wow jst perfect geetu...
Thanks fr pm..keep writing like dis always..
Lots of love..<3
Big hug..:)
Takcre..<3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww geeet this ws SOOO BEAUTIFUL n CUTE jst lik RaHi.....truly fantastic...!!

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