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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Thanks for the update Di, i will come back with the review later 😊

I saw your review bawa
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Chandani raat ki sair, terrace ke jhule per ❤️

Beeaauuttiiffuulll 👏 ⭐️ 👏Too amazing na?Thank you Bawa.
You have very gracefully written this chapter Alka Di !Thank you Bawa Loved the way Ashu said..

"Sirf chandani raat hi kyon?amavas ki raat,har raat har din khas hoga mere liye.Bus tum aa jao meri life me meri bankar.Tum duniya ko bhul na gai toh kehena.

Wow, what a love.. ! Bhaiya hum bhi ussi din ka wait kar rahe hain.. 😉😛main bhi 😛
Loved how Ashni talked abt their love and life.. They are in fear that anytime anything can happen, still their love is so strong that they will emerge as winners in love !Bec life is so unpredictable
Nidhi is ready to surrender herself cos for her this is how she looks at life.. But Ashu is in full control.. Achha laga dekh kar that they are talking at this level.Now unka fear/dar unhe aur kareeb lekar aayega.

Nidhi: Aapka pyaar ped ki tarah hai jo ful bhi dena chahta hai aur chhaya bhi.Aur ,mera pyaar tufani nadiya ki tarah hai.Sagar se milan ke liye woh har had paar kar sakti hai.Muze intejaari hai apne sagar me samaneki. Mere liye toh yah sher fit hai..


Tuze barbaad hona hi tha Barah_haal
Naaz kar tuze usne barbaad kiya

Loved this part where Nidhi has shared her thoughts to him.. ⭐️Thank you

Ashni are ready to talk abt themselves to the family.. but its a surprise for Ashu when Col. Verma asked him if he loves Nidhi !Mallika madam ne baji maar li Its a good light hearted scene and i liked how Mallika comes to know abt her little sis' feelings n emotions towards Ashu ! she is her elder sister.
Its a very pleasant atmosphere at home and at hospital too. Loved how Nidhi comes to know from Ashu.. then Nidhi talks to Mallika and then Armaan comes n hugs both of them.Armaan is too cure
" Jalkukda " .. haha.. Ashu's entry here makes the scene more special for everyone.. And loved the four hugging.. !Very precious family
Ashu calling Nidhi " hey doc " and she calling him " Suniue jee ".. mazaa aayaa.. I am like viewing this scene Alka Di !
Loving this track.. and loving the way you have surprised Ashu, Nidhi n Armaan.. They knew everything n Mallika made things more convenient.. ! ⭐️For Armaan and Ashu it was zatka
Looking forward to the next chapter Di.,. Good narrative part and cute scenes with awesome dialogues. Loved elders giving full respect to the decision of their children.apt elders

Thank you Bawa.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: suku_07

Awesome update Alka di...So it was Abhi...Chalo acha hai nahi toh I though its baba oe Mallika...BTW I like that line of Ashu "Bhai toh mera hi hai, bhabhi ko lekar bhaag gaya"...Too cute 😆

Waise badiya hai ji...aap kya romantic scene likhne lage ho... 😆 Last scene was way too romantic ☺️

Thank you suku.Mallika abhi thodi Armaan ke sath busy aur baba Alok ji ke saath😛Ashu became naughty..Romantic couple ke liye toh banata hai.
Thank you suku
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: suku_07

Awesome update Alka di... So everybody knows about them also... Loved the small scene between Col. Verma and Ashutosh 😆 Very cute...Poor Ashu hamesha aisi situations mein fas jata hai...😆

Well...So Nidhi is doc now and Ashu is Suniye ji...Awesome...!!

Waiting for next 😆

Thank you suku.Yeh toh hona hi tha.Col Verma testing Ashu's patience and courage.And he fails.😆 Tabhi toh Armaaan pe bhadas nilkal raha hai.😆

Thank yu Suku.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: parmarA

Thank you suku.Mallika abhi thodi Armaan ke sath busy aur baba Alok ji ke saath😛Ashu became naughty..Romantic couple ke liye toh banata hai.

Thank you suku


Bilkul banta hai ji 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 11 Review
Sorry Alka, I am very slow with this OS

Very sweet chapter... both the couples feeling bad about the separation .Liked the first hug between Ashni and also like that Ashu know what Nidhi feels and hides from him. So this Ashu also plays violin... nice selection of old. songs. Finally they will part... so sad, yet this was bound to happen.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 12 Review
Smart Armaan! 😆 So he has found out in a very clever way. And poor Nidhi is not able to control her tears... finally both the couples have separated!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 13 Review
So Nidhi and Ashu are on fast track. They have informed the elders and they are old friends! So cute Alka. And now Armaan also knows about Ashni and approves.

Alka, your stories are very simple, and ideal. ITs soothing to read, 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi friends.
My net is too slow to give update.So,i will try to give update tonight or by tomm for sure.

Chap 21 will be much enjoyable i promise.

Sorry
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Posted: 11 years ago
will give update as soon as possible Tasha.
Sorry,my like button is not working

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