Akdha Threeshot: Jodha POV update pg 11

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Shanzy

@-Shanzy-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#91

This is the BEST OS I've read on Akdha so far. Beautifully written. Absolutely loved it. 👏

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srividhya68

@srividhya68

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

read the 3 shots in a go
all were awesome

u r a fantastic writer

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ash

@ashpat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

I read all three of ur POV shots and they are amazing, fantastic and just magnificient.Each of them is one better than other. I cannot pick which one is my fav. These are so far one of the best threeshot I have read across all forums.

Please write more on Akdha and start ff on them.

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dailysoapfan1

@dailysoapfan1

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#94

Okay. Can i just say this is THE most beautiful story i've ever read? Like this is just beautiful. I've re-read it like 20 times bu now. I LOVE LOVE LOVE the POV of ruqaiyya! <3

This story actually shows her feelings although she is a vamp in the story. And girl you are such an amazayn writer. And your enlish is too perf and so is your punctuation. <3

Keep writing! <3