OS: My Only Exception - Updated Last Part+Epi on Page 16 - 11th Feb

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello Guyz, Surprised to see this thread? 😆
I'm writing one story for my Uni Competition, and its the 1st time I'm actually participating in any writing competition 😆
So i am thinking about posting it in MG version here. though I've wrote it as Kate and Cavill, i will change the names as Maan and Geet

Posting the prologue now, do share your honest opinion for this, whether I should continue or not
And i will post the whole story on 4th feb, after submitting my story for the competition on 3rd Feb

Prologue - Below
Part 1 on Page 8
Last Part + Epilogue on Page 16

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Prologue


I never believed in fairy tales, or the happily ever after.
Destiny played its game and society made me believe that I'm unlovable
But then you came in my life as the knight in shinning armor
You make me believe that I'm Beautiful,
I'm Acceptable and Lovable
You make me forget my dark painful past
And now I believe in the love quotes

"Millions and millions of years would still not give me half nough time to describe that tiny instant of all eternity when you put your arms around me and I put my arms around you" - Jacques Prevert

You are my bright present, my dream future
cause you are "MY ONLY EXCEPTION"




So tell me, anyone interested to read this out?
will wait for all your response. i guyz do reply and give honest answer, as I am submitting this story for a competition

Love You All
❤️ Sam ❤️
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Wow awesme prologue.I love ur writing style.Best of luck fr ur compition.will wait to read the whole story.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Can't say much
But take my comment as positive👍🏼
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awesome prologue di...
waiting for more..
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Interesting
Eagerly waiting for the whole stry
N best of luck in competition
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting prologue di 😃
waiting for part 1 😳
continue soon
All the best for the competition ⭐️
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Interesting prologue. waiting for story now..😊
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congrats for the new story
prologue seems interesting
continue soon
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interesting n nice prologue...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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