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avantika_2012

@avantika_2012

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

"How long did it take this guy to get home?!' 🤣

I just burst out laughing at that. That's the only reason it got a special mention! :P

Why were you not happy with it? I really liked it! It was a lot of fun to read. My reactions varied among smiling, laughing, a little blushing and a lot of grinning. 😉 Such OSs really help me unwind so thank you for that! :D

I want more of this kind. Please! Puhleezz?? An Eid gift, maybe? Pleaseee naaa!

Edited by avantika_2012 - 12 years ago

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Haw! How did I miss this one?!

Its so cute and its in the genre of 'The Bedside Manners' and I think we both know how much I loved that one! You have a talent for writing these dialogues only fics, Nafisa! They are so cute and so fulfilling that you dont miss any setting etc...the dialogues are enough and paint such a vivid picture! Loved it! Also power to knowledge! I didnt know about this legend and now I do and its likely that I wouldnt forget it considering it has the ArHi stamp all over it now! :p

Hilarious work, Nafisa! I wanted to quote but then I couldnt decide which parts to quote!

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jeetega

@jeetega

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

I like this conversations between this two. u can make a series of it. their banter is so amusing. the side of arnav you show in this series is seen in the serial when arnav is into the flirt and tease mood with kushi. then there's no stopping him. have always loved that side of him.

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Ayra Nuzhat

@-LazyLamhe-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Nice one..Enjoyed reading Arnav's lines here!!..needless to say I loved the OS :)

Edited by -HoneyBunch- - 12 years ago

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#55

These just dialouge one shots by you are quite brilliant and I just love them :)

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Scarboroughfair

@Scarboroughfair

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

So, so cute. If I could have kissed this flirty Arnav somehow through my pc screen, I would have done it. I can't blame Khushi for beinh confused. Arnav Singh Raizada is flirting with you. Swoon! Like swoo...oo..oon. You're really talented! 😊

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Res

So, Arnav Khushi know each other since their school days.

Arnav had always been funny and laid back and Khushi had always been super serious and hard working

One thing hasnt changed though. He wants her attention at all times. Be it classroom or the library. If she is around him, she shouldnt be quiet and inattentive towards him. Bas! He will trouble, tease and finally (after years of being friends [???]) kiss her too 😆 (sorry not a kiss, but a small peck... sorry an unnecessary small peck)

But banda uski bohot care karta hain yaar... He sits besides her in class and pays attention to her notes, then reads about her topic, then forms his own opinions about it (That Persephone knew exactly what she was doing was a brilliant touch) and then goes to her so that she doesnt get frustrated about her coursework... He will annoy her in spite of knowing she doesnt like being disturbed when studying. Probably he is confident that he can get away with it. That she wont mind too much if it is him disturbing her

This Khushi Arnav of your OS made me laugh so much. I can see that after years of acquaintance Arnav is finally hinting at her what he wants from their relationship and Khushi too seems to be quite accepting of those hints. Love them. Loved this OS. ⭐️

PS: The bit about him jumping track in the middle of the conversation knowing she can keep up... I liked that. Shows for him Khushi isnt just a pretty face. He accepts she has a working brain in that head of hers. 😊

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 11 years ago