New SS-dard-e-ishq part 5 on pg 23 (9 feb)

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Prologue

Shlok agnihotri the man who doesn't trust anyone after the betrayal he got from his father. Just because of thatman he lost his wife who loved him alot but he played with her feelings. He became a body without soul after she left him. He doesn't know where is she,how she is..he know nothing. But in all these circumstances varad was there for him.
Varad-shlok...why are you doing this to urself??
Shlok with pain-coz i deserve to be like this...i deserve nothing but just hate..i did wrong by trusting that man..just because of him i hurted aastha like hell..i will niether forgive him..nor myself. With this he stormed out from his cabin..wheras varad looked at him helplessly.

On the other hand...a beautiful and cute girl of 5 yrs old was pretending to sleep. Her mother was there to wake her up for her school. For her mother,she is everthing...her world,her life,her love. She doesn't have anything to lose as her everything got destroyed by the man whom she loved like anything but he made fun of her love.
Aastha saw her child who was covering her face with her blanket. She went towards her bed and smiled.
Aastha-pari...pari got up sweetheart..
But pari being a naughty child got up and held her head in her palms-mumma..i m suffering from stomach ache..
Aastha chuckled-really??if h r having stomach ache then y r u holding ur head..
Pari bite her tongue-mumma..i don't wanna go to school..
Aastha-bad habbit..u must go school everyday..
Pari pleaded-plz mumma i will go everyday but not today..
Aastha asked-why??
Pari fumbled then said sadly-coz its parents teacher's meeting..and this time i have to take my father..
Aastha's felt a pinch seeing her daughter sad..her daughter who is as strong as her but as egoestic as her father..
Aastha kissed her forehead-i will come with u.
Pari smiled a bit-as always mumma..

Here is just a small introduction of the story..if u all will like it then i will continue it otherwise i won't so please be honest.
Fiza.
Index
Part 1-pg 3
Part 2-pg-8
Part3-pg-13
Part 4-pg-19
Part 5-pg-23
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Posted: 11 years ago
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fiza baji.. just continue.. flash backs bhi chahiye di..
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Awesomeee start cant wait too read more add me in your pm list if you haveee oneee
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Wonderful SS, please continue.😊
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Originally posted by: crazygul

fiza baji.. just continue.. flash backs bhi chahiye di..


I will dear.
Ok done i will give flashback too 😊
Thanks for ur comment.
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Originally posted by: .SajnaVe.

Awesomeee start cant wait too read more add me in your pm list if you haveee oneee


Thanks 😊
I will add h for sure.
Thanks for ur comment 😊
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Originally posted by: Pveenat

Wonderful SS, please continue.😊


Thanks dear.
I will continue for sure 😊
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Originally posted by: pt311288

nice start do continue


Thanks:)
Will continue for sure 😊
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Wow love the prologue please update it soon can't wait to read the story it will be awesome
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Awesome start plz update soon

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