New SS-dard-e-ishq part 5 on pg 23 (9 feb) - Page 2

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Interesting concept. Please update soon!
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Wow love the prologue please update it soon can't wait to read the story it will be awesome

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love the prologue do continue pm me if possible please
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Part 1

Today is the day on which shlok and aastha become one in a very strong way. They got in the holy relation of marriage. They become two bodies but one soul. Its their 7th wedding anniversary. This day brought shlok out of his shell of cruelness. This is the day which made him realise that what he lost by letting aastha go. But he always used to celebrate this day...he use to go to temples,he used to visit an orphanage where he used to playwith kids. But the pain of hurting aastha was there in his every action. On the day of her birthday's he used to cut the cake. He realised his love for her when it was too late. And now he only wants his aastha to be happy and sound. For the whole world he is same shlok agnihotri who only knows how to crack a deal and even his rivals can't help but praise his business skills. But for his close ones he is not the same anymore. His attitude is no where to be seen,his eyes hollow,face full of pain and guilt. Shlok was busy in staring at the picture of his wife who was looking an angel with her breathtaking smile. He caressed her picture with his finger tips and tears rolled down from his eyes. Suddenly he heard a cute voice..this is the only person in his life who can make him laugh when he don't even want to smile..

He turned around and find a cute kavya there rubbing her eyes and holding a cute teddy in her hand.
Kavya-good morning chachu..
Shlok walked up to her and picked her up in his arms-good morning my princess. What happened today chachu's jaan got up so early
Kavya-because kavya want to come to her chachu. I wanna kiss and wish good morning to yoi.
Shlok smiled and kissed her cheek-awww my baby...u know what i love u alot..
Kavya kissed him back-and kavya loves you too..
Their sweet conversation got interrupted by sojal's voice who was looking for her angel since she got up. She finally entered shlok's room and find her jaan being there in arms of her chachu.
Sojal-hurry up...kavya u r getting late for ur scho.
Kavya pouted-huh...i don't wanna go school
Before sojal could say anything shlok said something in her ears which made her giggle. She happily agreed to go school. Sojal was surprised but didn't said anything. Sojal is varad's wife. After aastha left sojal become responsible and strong. Now nothing is same in agnihotri mansion. Now women are equally respected and treated. Sojal has also changed for gud.
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On the other hand...

A girl in her late twenties got up and looked at the calender. Its theday which turned her life upside down...on this day she got the hard slap in the nsme of marriage. Just the mere thought of the day and her eyes turned yeary. This marriage gave her pain.lifetime pain to endure but it also gave happiness. Shlok indeed hurted her alot but also gave her a happiness by giving this cute and naughty pari who is the only reason because of which aastha is living. She moved closer to her daughter and hugged her tightly.
She kissed her cheek and made a silent prayer to bappa..that shlok will never ever come to know about her andd her daughter because she know if he will get to know this pari is his daughter then he will do anything to snatch her away from her and she is not that much strong that she will bear the pain of getting separated by her daughter..

Here is the first part. Plz let me know ur views so that i will continue. Thanks for ur support 😊

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