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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi guys, just wanted to add a twist :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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yar ye kaisa twist hai? ek dum badhiya... this is possible, like may be ... hmm this might be his new plan... that's why I took the story this way...
Tilak's sis- Eh kya boldiya aapne? Aradhya ki shadi uss adiyal se?

Tilak- Yahi toh humari chaal hai... Shamsher se shadi kyu karenge bhala? Bas yahi khabar hum Arjun tak pohochayenge!

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Arjun gets to know abt the proposal..

he goes to confront Shamsher, there shamsher is thinking not to force Aradhya, cuz he himself doesn't want to marry...

P.S. : *omit this part if u dont like it guys... *
Edited by -Pree.Jaani- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Pree.Jaani-

yar ye kaisa twist hai? ek dum badhiya... this is possible, like may be ... hmm this might be his new plan... that's why I took the story this way...

Tilak's sis- Eh kya boldiya aapne? Aradhya ki shadi uss adiyal se?

Tilak- Yahi toh humari chaal hai... Shamsher se shadi kyu karenge bhala? Bas yahi khabar hum Arjun tak pohochayenge!

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Arjun gets to know abt the proposal..

he goes to confront Shamsher, there shamsher is thinking not to force Aradhya, cuz he himself doesn't want to marry...

P.S. : *omit this part if u dont like it guys... *


Yes pree ...thats the fun of a collab story ... wanted to show a forced marraige of shara ... But full takkar wali...

Continues :

Shamsher was standing on the terrace... He had a bottle in his hand ... Arjun fumed at him

A. Yeh kya kar tahe hain ap bhai ??!!

S. Kya kar raha hoon mein arjun?

A. Ap aradhya se shaadi karne wale ho... ???

S. Woh... ( he looks everywhere but arjun ) woh... Tilak raj... Woh mein... Khud.. ...

A. ( arjun gets relaxed ) haan toh isme galat kya hai bhai. ? Ap itna darr kyun rshe hain mujhse ?

S. Huh... ? Tumhe kuch farak nahi pad raha ? Tum toh usse puaar karte the na ?

A. Kya ???!!!! Pyaar ??!! Aradhya se ???! Bhai woh meri ek sirf achi dost hai... ! Bas !!! Na woh mujhse pyaar karti hai... Aur na mai usse !
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Posted: 9 years ago
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S. Dheere bat kar arjun... Aaji umma ko iss baare mein filhaal kuch pata nahi lagna chahiye ...

A. Par bhai... Apko kabhi toh batana hoga na?

S. Haan arjun... Par abhi nahi... Maine tilak raj se keh diya... Mujhe kuch dino ka time de... Main khud aji umma ko bata du ga... Lekin... Ahi nahi... Aji umma ko kisi bhi tareeke ka strress nshi dena abhi...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So many twists :) nice ones

Amaraah give us more ideas and write sth too please :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nyc twists yar! itni jaldi itni cheezei huh :D :P chalo since u guys want a forced marriage I'm not changing the story...
Arjun- bhai aap toh chupa rustum nikle! aapko aradhya se pyar hai aur aapne bataaya hi nhi! waise Aradhya is like that, kisi ko bhi ussey pyar hojayega...

Arjun keeps pulling his leg n Shammu smiles...

Arj thinks- Chalo. I think Aradhya k bhai k life mei aane se bhai ki life badal jayegi. only she can bring the good out of him. sudhar jayenge bhai. I might be selfish to think like this, but I seriously wish Aradhya ye zimmedari uthaane ko tayyar ho! I'll have to talk to aradhya abt this...

he leaves

Shammu thinks to himself- humne iss shadi k liye kyu haa kahi, ye hume pata hai. todna hai hume uss doctor ni ka guroor... ab jhukegi woh humare saamne, sirf aaj k liye nahi, zindgi bhar k liye... *smiles evilly*

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Pree.Jaani-

nyc twists yar! itni jaldi itni cheezei huh :D :P chalo since u guys want a forced marriage I'm not changing the story...
Arjun- bhai aap toh chupa rustum nikle! aapko aradhya se pyar hai aur aapne bataaya hi nhi! waise Aradhya is like that, kisi ko bhi ussey pyar hojayega...

Arjun keeps pulling his leg n Shammu smiles...

Arj thinks- Chalo. I think Aradhya k bhai k life mei aane se bhai ki life badal jayegi. only she can bring the good out of him. sudhar jayenge bhai. I might be selfish to think like this, but I seriously wish Aradhya ye zimmedari uthaane ko tayyar ho! I'll have to talk to aradhya abt this...

he leaves

Shammu thinks to himself- humne iss shadi k liye kyu haa kahi, ye hume pata hai. todna hai hume uss doctor ni ka guroor... ab jhukegi woh humare saamne, sirf aaj k liye nahi, zindgi bhar k liye... *smiles evilly*

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Lovely pree!

The next day... arjun is about to call aradhya ... but shamsher comes to his room

S. chal bhai... theke par chal... aji amma ne kuch kaam diya hai hum dono ko... karke aate hain..( but he sees that arjun is calling someone ) yeh tu kisko message kar raha hai ?

he comes near him and tries pt see it but arjun tries his best ot avoid it ... but he sees it

S. Aradhya ko !!!! pagal hua hai kya arjun ! Aradhya ko iss bare mein pata hui nahi hai...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Arj- Kya Aradhya ko nhi pata?
Sham- nahi! abhi.. abhi nahi!

Arj- /bhai! dont tell me ur chicken to confess your love!

Sham- she hates me yar!

Arj- haan toh, acche bano unke saat, manaalo unhe...

Shamsher thinks- this looks like a great idea. pehle main usko manaaunga, fir usey uski aukaat dikhaunga,, :D

Arj calls up Aradhya and arranges a dinner date, he doesnt say who will come but he just calls for dinner... Ara agrees...

nxt... shara's dinner date! shamsher acts all nyc :D

cont...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aradhya gets ready... She wears her faviurite pink and yellow anarkali ... Her phone rings... Its arjun she picks it
A. Hi arjun ... Tum batao toh kiske saath dinner hai ?

Arj. Uhh... Woh ... Tumhaari fiend hai na... Uske saath dinner... Dekha.. Mujhse bulwaliya na... Ab woh mujhe daate gi ki maine uska surprise kkharaab kardiya

A. Ok...

Arj. Acha chalo bye
Ar. Bye...

Shamsher is shirtless... Thinks about aradhya when hes taking out a shirt from his cupboard ... The first time he saw her... He was wore the white shirt ...

He got ready and went to the resraurant... aradhya reached there and her eyes fell on shamsher ... He saw her ...without giving her the deadly look...Normally...

Edited by miniapplepie - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aradhya was shockedcto see him... She walked where shamsher was .. She reached the table where shamsher was sitting. ...

A. Tum ? Yahan ? Nahi nahi... Tum toh yahan hoge hi... Jahan mein jau... Wahahn toh tumhe aana hi he...

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