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Ameres

@Ameres

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

Disclaimer: The following post contains content that may not be suitable for children under 15 years or members with heart condition. If you fall under any of the fore mentioned categories then it is advised that you leave this page immediately. As creative partners of this joint effort, we regret to inform you that we will not be liable for any side-effects from the story (eg. excessive dreaming, squealing, tadpaoing etc), hence read on at your own risk. You have been warned.

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Salaam Namaste Hello Hola Bonjour!

We welcome you all to the unique unveiling of our very first joint venture. This co-production is the result of the efforts of your very own Vita and me! What started off as a simple, one-liner musing between two rather crazy Phan girls very soon grew into pretty intense paragraphs - jaise ki raat kabhi khatam hi na huye!

And now prepare yourselves to be shocked, surprised and thrilled all pleasantly with us on this hatke journey of a very hatke couple.

AnVi Wild Images Production proudly presents their very first Short Story...*drum roll*

Kahaani Do Talwaar Ki

Story & Concept

Initiator: Vita

Taken Forward: Ameres

Official Media Partners: Us

Starring:

Abhay as the Bhooka Shair

Phulwa as the Jungli Billi

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Index

Part 1-Page 1: Khel Khel Mein

Part 2-Page 1: Sweeter than chocolate

Part 3- Page 2: Ek Shararat Hone Ko hai

Part 4-Page 3: Shararat Continues...

Part 5-Page 3: Shararat Shararat Mein Hua...

Part 6-Page4: Ek qayaamat hone ko hai..

Anyone who wishes to get a PM of the next part please Hit the LIKE button on Vita93 post on Page 5.

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vita93

@vita93

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

As promised, we begin our little nocturnal journey with something a little light-hearted, just two people sharing sharing some sweet moments together until...😉

Purple: Anu

Black: Vita

Part 1: Khel Khel Mein

Phulwa's laughing away, and tries to run from him. But Abhay's not about to let her go that easily, he just holds on to her and brings her closer till his face is right next to hers...

Stopping only to let his breath play on hers, he inches closer to brush his lips against her - her heartbeat running wild.

She inches closer to get a better taste of something delicious...but him being him would of course do as he please, not necessarily as she expects.

And just when she starts to move away disappointed, he grabs her from behind and whispers in her ear 'itni bhi jaldi kya hai' and then slowly traces the line of her neck with his lips...

As she suddenly gasps at his seductive touch, his fingers start to trace up her arm as well, with the other arm tightly secured around her waist...there's no telling where he plans to go next...

Phulwa stands breathless, almost. She looks at him with doe eyes and asks in a tiny voice,'Abhay?'

He looks at her with a mischievous smile, leaning in he...

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Leave us a comment, much appreciated:))

And keep watching this space for this kahani to keep unravelling through the night😉

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Ami

@beebutterfly

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

HOT!😆 Please don't torture us further. This is NOT enough😆

Vita Anu👏👏 This is way tooo sleeek..😍 Do have to say this???

As she suddenly gasps at his seductive touch, his fingers start to trace up her arm as well, with the other arm tightly secured around her waist...there's no telling where he plans to go next...

@ Bold - surely some place which will make us go breathless along with phulwa too!!!!😳

Waiting to see what exactly comes after the he...

Where are the others? Have they gone into PhAb coma after reading this??😆 Highly probable because you just happen to find the right formula to kill people Anu and Vita. Giving us small doses of our PhAb drug!

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mimi_s

@mimi_s

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

but him being him would of course do as he please, not necessarily as she expects.WOW👏👏👏..this is sooo ABHAY...love u vita fr writing this line...bt yaar dont tadpao us by putting it up in parts...how can we wait ..aftr reading the intro😉

Phulwa stands breathless, almost. She looks at him with doe eyes and asks in a tiny voice,'Abhay?

😳😳😳...can imagine phulwa feeling shy and going all red...excellent Anu👏👏👏

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aroojm

@aroojm

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

awwnn this is soo cute... and i agree HOT.. please do continue and soon.. please don't make us wait for a long time... continue soon hehehhe 😊

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Ameres

@Ameres

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

Ami, Mimi, Arooj- Thank you so much for the encouraging comments. Glad you guys like it. :)

Next update coming soon. 😉

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vita93

@vita93

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

Part 2:

...licks off the traces of chocolate at the corner of the mouth from the heart-shaped box he had gifted her that day. Her grip on his shoulder tightens, as she lets her lips part to be kissed by him, only for him to...

..stop again. She stands still almost waiting to feel the touch of his lips on hers, but he moves to her side. Removing aside her hair he traces the curve between her neck and shoulder sending shivers down her back. She holds onto him to stable herself as his unexpected touches leave her...

...giddy with delight and the colour rising in her cheeks. As he holds her against the door, her hands slowly move down, her fingers playing with his as a shy smile dances on her face that looks away from his. He starts to smile as well and...

..coming closer nuzzling against her face he whispers in a husky voice, 'Can you handle what's coming?' She looks at him with wide eyes and starts to protest but her words die there as his mouth comes firmly on hers. Just as she starts to lose herself to him he quickly moves away...

...making her lose her balance and fall, pulling his arm along that she was clutching onto. As they plomp safely onto the strategically positioned beanbag, with him on top of her...

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If nothing else, I think the both of us deserve a chance to get our work published regardless, what say?:)

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mimi_s

@mimi_s

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

Can u guys send this to the Ph or something???? if it has to end PLS it should end on a high note and such a damdaar couple need such a damdaar SR...grt job once again👏👏wish the writers thought like u people😉

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Ami

@beebutterfly

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

Guys, I'm sorry didnt comment earlier. Now that im reading it a little more calmly, will do sso.

First of all, Anu and Vita, u r amazing😉👏 How did you manage to raise the heat a notch up when it was already burning hot???

.giddy with delight and the colour rising in her cheeks. As he holds her against the door, her hands slowly move down, her fingers playing with his as a shy smile dances on her face that looks away from his. He starts to smile as well and...

I LOVE this bit☺️ Imagine we had gotten that scene. Abhay holding phulwa against the door? I would have just died of PhAb overdose seriously. N the bit of her fingers playing with his??? Aww, that's just SO sweet😍

making her lose her balance and fall, pulling his arm along that she was clutching onto. As they plomp safely onto the strategically positioned beanbag, with him on top of her...

Okay, after this it's me who's lost my balance! A beanbag??? Strategically positioned?? N oh the BEST part, him on top of her. LOL, think i'm going mad with envy now😆

A big 🤗🤗 for this. Whatever happens to the show, at least our imagination wont end. Thinking of saving all those stories we made. Will keep them close for comfort.

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aroojm

@aroojm

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

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awwwn first of all a big hug from me for the both of you 🤗🤗 after having a really bad week... and hearing all the news of our show ending 😒... this just made me happy.. soo thank you... you guys are too good.. soo glad you guys updated.. and ahh after reading this.. i don't know hat to say.. you guys did such an amazing job..

giddy with delight and the colour rising in her cheeks. As he holds her against the door, her hands slowly move down, her fingers playing with his as a shy smile dances on her face that looks away from his. He starts to smile as well and...

sooo cute... written so beautifully... i can just imagine this.. really hope we get a scene like this soon... 😃
please continue writing and i can't for the third part now... update soon.. you two 😃

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