AbhayPhulwa- Silent promises

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Posted: 13 years ago
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As he saw her lying there amidst the fire and smoke his only thought was to save her, somehow. He didn't care that in the process he might get hurt, he didn't pay heed to her weak protests of not coming forward all that mattered in that moment was to save her.

Holding her in his arms he screamed her name, ran on the road like a mad man pleading for help. The desperation, helplessness, concern that was seen was not of a husband or a mere lover...it was the kind of madness that you see only when someone is truly in love. Forgetting his own pain he continued walking for he could see his life was slipping away right before his eyes and he could not let that happen. He had to save her, save his Phulwa.

Even when she was being treated upon he could only think about her, her sweet laughter, how her eyes twinkle when she smiles. She was in his every thought.

And when a lone tear escaped his eye he looked at it surprised and questions plagued his mind.

He was crying, that too for her? Phulwa, his nemesis? This can't be right.

Upon seeing her bangle entangled with his thread just like their lives are entangled with each other, even more painful memories came back. Opening up his heart and letting him feel what he had been avoiding all this time, making him question his own actions. With that tears rolled down jerking him apart.

Unable to deal with it his mind went to her and silently he questioned her...why had she stopped him? He was her enemy she could have easily let him suffer. But no she wanted to stop him...why? Even before he could understand his own state of mind fate send the answer: You two are made for each other.

As the doctor told him that the care they these two have for each other is more than that, it's only true love that can make you forgot your own pain and think about others. She survived because he was there; her savior, her healer.

And that point realization hit him hard. No! His mind screamed he can't let that happen. As his heart and mind battled it out, she again whispered his name. Even in her unconscious state she could only think about him, his life.

For a flicker of a second he did hesitate but then looking at her as she breathed his name he knew what he had to do. His guards down; he surrendered himself to her, to her love, to his life. In that moment it wasn't Abhay and Phulwa, no revenge no hatred, no right or wrong, everything dissolved into nothingness. For that moment was only about a man and a woman who had suffered long, a man who had just seen his love spring back from the valleys of death only for him. It was about a man discovering what he had been missing all along.

And as he placed his hand in her he made the silent promise of love and life, of always being there when she needs him, of never leaving her side ever. A poignant moment symbolizing that they are meant to be.

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Today was a real tear jerker epi. I never thought i would get so emotionally attached to a fictional couple but...Anywhos! The epi really moved me today; Abhay's concern, his realization, their love...It was very moving. Hence this post. Ok enough talking.

Comments and Likes please!! 😳

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vita93 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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THAT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL

Truly it was so well written...it was so, emotional and yet so poetic and so...true I guess.

The end was too perfect. Seriously, you deserve a standing ovation
👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved the part...
His guards down; he surrendered himself to her, to her love, to his life.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I loved it.. beautifully written.. I could actually picture this entire sequence..!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Today's episode was awesome. Abhay & Phulwa r gre8 actors.
waiting for the next episode.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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You should really create an archive for all your writings and put it up on the forum with links to the episodes. Seriously speaking, they're really too good.

It makes a hindi serial somehow seem like a romance epic, the way you put your words.

I know I'm not using many words but I was truly truly blown away by your writing. It was so so so well done. As I'm rewatching I'm reading your lines and I guess it fits in so well I'm just...

Sigh my words fail me when I need them the most.

Khair, so will you be creating your archive soon?😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very well Written You summerized whole sittuation very beautifully
Today was the turnning point of thier love story , The realization of Abhay was portrayed very beautifully. The way He regreted his old deeds of insulting phulwa and realized his unknown feeling and attachment to was beautiful.😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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An absolutely wonderful analysis, especially the way you wrote about Abhay's inner turmoil...beautiful! My favorite scenes were when her bangle got stuck on the thread around his hand and most importantly the scene after the doctor left him alone in the room with Phulwa and the inner dialogue that followed! Such incredible depth, it was the first time he was willing to admit to himself that there was something there other than just hatred, that they shared a bond that was deeper than just being enemies, and that completely shook him. He knew that if he gave in to his feelings and emotions there will be no going back and his so called revenge mission will fall apart completely. After that thought, he tried to walk away, he did, but he couldn't keep his eyes of her, and her calling out his name was his undoing, he couldn't move once he heard the concern in her voice for him. She was the one who almost died and yet she was more worried about him. She claimed to be his enemy and yet his life and well being was more important to her than her own, and that thought completely mind boggled him. He can't even believe that she could care for him let alone love him after what he had done to her, and yet here they were losing against their heart because no matter how far they tried to stay away there was something that just kept pulling them back. And it was this that made him sit down next to her, he kept staring at her hand unsure of what to do. On one side his heart was telling him to hold it and assure her that he was there with her, and on the other, his brain was telling him that he was treading dangerous waters, and that to protect himself he had to stay away. His hesitancy was beautifully portrayed and once again her voice was what broke him and all the barriers that he had built around his heart. Her voice calling his name became her greatest weapon against him and every time he had to surrender to it!
I know I have babbled on long enough, but this episode was just so freaking amazing and I can analyze in so many different ways that I just had to get some thoughts out! I am sure I'll be rewatching it multiple times over the weekend as I wait for Monday's episode!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Abhay and phulwa are the best Jodi..
Loved yesterday's episode
Abhay has feelings for phulwa
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very well written...you have portrayed abhay's emotions so well!!!👏

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