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Posted: 13 years ago
#11

Thank you for agreeing.

Originally posted by: vita93

THAT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL


Truly it was so well written...it was so, emotional and yet so poetic and so...true I guess.

The end was too perfect. Seriously, you deserve a standing ovation
👏👏👏


Thank you soo much for all the love and encouragement. Really thanks alot! 🤗


Originally posted by: avishinz

loved the part...

His guards down; he surrendered himself to her, to her love, to his life.

I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for commenting! :))
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Binny...

I loved it.. beautifully written.. I could actually picture this entire sequence..!!


Thank you so much for reading and appreciating. 😳😳


Originally posted by: geetabudhabi

Today's episode was awesome. Abhay & Phulwa r gre8 actors.

waiting for the next episode.


True it was one the best epis of Phulwa till date. Indeed great acting by both the actors, very touching performance.
Same here bud!
Thanks for commeting! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: angelkti

Very well Written You summerized whole sittuation very beautifully

Today was the turnning point of thier love story , The realization of Abhay was portrayed very beautifully. The way He regreted his old deeds of insulting phulwa and realized his unknown feeling and attachment to was beautiful.😳


Thank youuu! 😳😳😳

True, Abhay realizing the injustice and pain he had caused Phulwa and how it pained him too was a very touching moment. Over all the epi was very heartening making you feel all the emotions. Splendid! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ameres

Holding her in his arms he screamed her name, ran on the road like a mad man pleading for help. The desperation, helplessness, concern that was seen was not of a husband or a mere lover...it was the kind of madness that you see only when someone is truly in love. Forgetting his own pain he continued walking for he could see his life was slipping away right before his eyes and he could not let that happen. He had to save her, save his Phulwa.

Even when she was being treated upon he could only think about her, her sweet laughter, how her eyes twinkle when she smiles. She was in his every thought.

And when a lone tear escaped his eye he looked at it surprised and questions plagued his mind.

He was crying, that too for her? Phulwa, his nemesis? This can't be right.

Upon seeing her bangle entangled with his thread just like their lives are entangled with each other, even more painful memories came back. Opening up his heart and letting him feel what he had been avoiding all this time, making him question his own actions. With that tears rolled down jerking him apart.

Unable to deal with it his mind went to her and silently he questioned her...why had she stopped him? He was her enemy she could have easily let him suffer. But no she wanted to stop him...why? Even before he could understand his own state of mind fate send the answer: You two are made for each other.

As the doctor told him that the care they these two have for each other is more than that, it's only true love that can make you forgot your own pain and think about others. She survived because he was there; her savior, her healer.

And that point realization hit him hard. No! His mind screamed he can't let that happen. As his heart and mind battled it out, she again whispered his name. Even in her unconscious state she could only think about him, his life.

For a flicker of a second he did hesitate but then looking at her as she breathed his name he knew what he had to do. His guards down; he surrendered himself to her, to her love, to his life. In that moment it wasn't Abhay and Phulwa, no revenge no hatred, no right or wrong, everything dissolved into nothingness. For that moment was only about a man and a woman who had suffered long, a man who had just seen his love spring back from the valleys of death only for him. It was about a man discovering what he had been missing all along.

And as he placed his hand in her he made the silent promise of love and life, of always being there when she needs him, of never leaving her side ever. A poignant moment symbolizing that they are meant to be.

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The ones in bold are the lines that struck me the most, and those in red still resonate in my mind...
I guess no matter how many times I read your post (10 times and counting I should think😆) it's so flawlessly put, seaming up the gaps within the scenes and transforming it into a page of words bursting with meaning and life - wow seriously. It transcends mere description and seems like a page from a romance novel:)

Your use of language was so powerful that I just kept reading and before I knew it, I was at the last line. Again.

When it comes to writing, I find it hard to be impressed by everything that I read but your post was so marvelous, it made me wish I had the ability to write it:)

Guess I'm not very good with compliments, but once again, WOW. I'm still blown away every time I read this👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Allbut1

An absolutely wonderful analysis, especially the way you wrote about Abhay's inner turmoil...beautiful! My favorite scenes were when her bangle got stuck on the thread around his hand and most importantly the scene after the doctor left him alone in the room with Phulwa and the inner dialogue that followed! Such incredible depth, it was the first time he was willing to admit to himself that there was something there other than just hatred, that they shared a bond that was deeper than just being enemies, and that completely shook him. He knew that if he gave in to his feelings and emotions there will be no going back and his so called revenge mission will fall apart completely. After that thought, he tried to walk away, he did, but he couldn't keep his eyes of her, and her calling out his name was his undoing, he couldn't move once he heard the concern in her voice for him. She was the one who almost died and yet she was more worried about him. She claimed to be his enemy and yet his life and well being was more important to her than her own, and that thought completely mind boggled him. He can't even believe that she could care for him let alone love him after what he had done to her, and yet here they were losing against their heart because no matter how far they tried to stay away there was something that just kept pulling them back. And it was this that made him sit down next to her, he kept staring at her hand unsure of what to do. On one side his heart was telling him to hold it and assure her that he was there with her, and on the other, his brain was telling him that he was treading dangerous waters, and that to protect himself he had to stay away. His hesitancy was beautifully portrayed and once again her voice was what broke him and all the barriers that he had built around his heart. Her voice calling his name became her greatest weapon against him and every time he had to surrender to it!
I know I have babbled on long enough, but this episode was just so freaking amazing and I can analyze in so many different ways that I just had to get some thoughts out! I am sure I'll be rewatching it multiple times over the weekend as I wait for Monday's episode!


You said it and that too so beautifully. :))
@Bold- Ah! The bond. Yes it always has been there unknown to them. They dont realize it yet but they are connected and this connection wont let them be apart, makes them feel each others pain and crumbling all the walls sets their heart free.
Like when Abhay prayed to God not to let it happen because this relation has no meaning, I felt like saying silly the bond you two share is the most meaningful and stronger than any other you may have...And soon he will realize it too. :)

True it was one the best episodes till now and it belonged to Abhay. Kudos to the director and actor for such a brilliant execution. *thumbs up*

Thank you for reading and commenting. 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: NimmyRose

Abhay and phulwa are the best Jodi..

Loved yesterday's episode
Abhay has feelings for phulwa

Yes they are indeed. It was a great episode wish they continue with such amazing tracks.
Thanks for commenting! :)

Originally posted by: winniepooh

very well written...you have portrayed abhay's emotions so well!!!👏

Thank you so much for the kind words. I'm glad you liked it. 😳

Thank you soo much. 😃

Originally posted by: Minerva_

very nicely written !

Thanks bud! 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow Anu what a post 👏even the title is so perfect silent promises yes they made sllent promises to each other that they are only ones who can lessen each other's pain
and they can ..no one else can take their place and they will never foregt each other in time when one needed help ..they'll be there to protect each other ..for them each other's life is more important and precious then their own ...
...what an emotional episode was 6 jan 2012 😭all i will say Phulwa's love for Abhay melted him down , made him restless and burnded his mind with questions and even created a fear in his heart that made him silently pray let the enemy be enemy otherwise he will grow weak ..for the first time he feared he might grow weak in emotions if this contiuned meaning he might he fall in love with her ...Phulwa what can i say about her such true love ..how much she loves Abhay .. the time when her own life was in danger ..the time when any person will shout the first thing please save me ..please help me save me ..the time when she should be worrying about her own life ..she showed concern for Abhay don't risk your life for me ..more than her own life her concern was her beloved should be saved ...which shocked Abhay and made him question to himself why did she stop me ? we were supposed to enemies then why? in her unconcious self when she should be restless with her own pain she was restless thinking about Abhay constantly taking his name stopping him not to risk his life like his life is more precious to her than her own pain evoked the emotions in him and he first tried to go away but couldn't .then hesitantly put his hand into her hand , held her hand like an assuring her yes i m there ..yes i am fine now you can relax ... she calmed down .even in her unconciuos self she felt yes he is fine now i can be at peace 😭omg..what true love😭
coming to Abhay maybe saying he is in love will to be too early or saying he realised anything because realisng is like accepting things whic he is not doing yet but yes he is feeling ...he has strongly felt Phuwa's love for him that made him restless , confused , shocked , burneded with questions, past memories , made him teary eyed ..his own goodness made him restless ..her death he never wanted ..in the time when her life was in danger she was asking him to save his life how could he not help her ..it is said when a good person commits something wrong he can never be at peace ..this is what happened to Abhay .he is not thakur whose soul is dead after committing dozens of sins .thakur cannot feel other' s pain but yes Abhay can ... revenge can make a person blind and do such things but he can never run away from the guilt that will somehow over burnden him...blinded in revenge he gave her pain but how can he at peace..tears are dwelling in his eyes and he is shocked why?this why answer he will get when he will come to know the that Phulwa wasn't bad ..she wasn't wrong he was wrong in misjudging her ... he knows she loved him but what he did in revenge ..he feels gulity he did wrong but unaware of the fact why he feels like that ...he is feels happy seeing her happy , he feels her concern and love for him but treis to escpae from it .. he feels her pain but unaware of the fact why ? hopefully he get the answers to his questions soon but i really liked the way he didn't go away in the end like in previous instances but gave in ..held her hand 😍how could he leave when he was hearing the concern for him coming out of her mouth ..he couldn't move , his feet couldn't move though he tried but like he froze there turned around , sat down, first drew his hand away then finally held her hand like saying to her... assuring her ...i am here ...i am fine to lessen her pain and she calmed down ..touching 😭giving another sign he'll be always there to lessen her pain .😍.and only he can lessen her pain no one else can the way she clamed down when he held her hand
i really liked the 6 jan episode ..i liked the way Abhay started to feel Phulwa's pain even without fully aware of her story ..he still consider her his enemy but yet could feel her pain another sign he is a good person but blinded in revenge for the sake of his family ..now i can understand his murdered soul dialogue quite well ..he is aware of the fact what he did was wrong , he fell down in anger and revenge but how long he can run away from the goodness inside him ...it will keep him showing concern for another good person ..good souls always attract each other 😍and one thing i will say Abhay jee you accept it or not you have too grown a lot weak in your hatred for Phulwa though you are not accepting it 😆
Edited by sidra08 - 13 years ago

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