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ronshaan thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: JulieD

Thank you Ronit. But are you saying that u don't like husbands washing dishes? hmmm?

when did i say that ????
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Must have misinterpreted. Sorry😳🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey julie
please continue the story
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Julie
Better Wrap up your story if u are not able to write the rest of it
actually we forget what the story was but this way one chapter comes after one month that too after i complain better to end it nicely because we already have unfinished stories here so hope u do complete your story soon !
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter Twelve

Vikram looked at his watch for the umpteenth time that afternoon before continuing his pacing in the driveway.
"Oh ho Vikram, you are making me dizzy. Would you just call Sugni?!!"
"No bhaiya, she will accuse me of di.." Vikram started to say when his mobile rang, "excuse me . Yes Sugni? "

"Thakur malack! Laxmi mami! she is about to have the baby. We need to take her to the hospital. Can you take us there? Please?"

"Yes of course. Just get her in the jeep and meet me here then we will go to the hospital ok?"

"Yes malack I will."

"Sugni?"

"Yes?"

"Please drive carefully," Vikram told her and closed his mobile.

"Vikram, is everything ok? Who needs to go to the hospital?" Bhushan asked him.

"It's Sugni's aunt, she is in labor."



A short while later, Sugni pulled up in the jeep.

"Where is Laxmi?" Bhushan asked, since Sugni appeared to be alone.

"Maybe lying down?" Vikram suggested going over to help.

Sugni hopped out from the jeep. She was red in the face and completely out of breath. "I got here as soon as I could. Catch!" she told him and threw
the keys to him.

He caught the keys and asked, "Where's Laxmi?"

Sugni looked inside the jeep and then back to Vikram, her expression panicked. "Haye sita maiya - "

"You forgot to bring her?"

Sugni nodded, "I was in such a hurry to get here..."

"It's okay Sugni. Everything will be fine. You sit in the jeep and call her to let her know that we are on our way to get her." Vikram went to the
driver's seat, "Bhaiya please call the hospital and let them know to expect us."

No sooner had they reached the hospital than Laxmi cried out. "The baby's coming!" Thankfully, the doctors were expecting them so Vikram just filled out the necessary forms while they wheeled Laxmi into the delivery room.

"It's a boy," the doctor told them some time after.

"Really?" Sugni was so excited and happy.

The doctor nodded and told them they could have a quick visit with Laxmi and the baby before they leave.

Laxmi was sitting up on the bed. "Thank you so much thakur malack."

"There is no need to say thanks. Congratulations on a healthy baby boy," he told Laxmi.

"Want to hold him Sugni?" Laxmi asked and Sugni went to take the baby.

She carried him over to Vikram who was immediately mesmerized with the bundle in Sugni's arms. "He is so beautiful and tiny," he said, his
eyes filled with wonder as he reached out to touch the baby's hands.

After a few minutes, they gave the baby back to Laxmi and left.


Vikram looked at Sugni who was gazing at the passing scenery. "Everything alright Sugni?"

"What? O yes it is. I was just thinking about how precious life is," she told him.

"I don't think we ever realise how much except for situations like this, when we are witness to a new life or-" Vikram blinked and his voice thickened as pain exploded deep inside him"-we see one taken away."

Sugni looked at him and knew he must have meant Reva, his fiance who had died, "It..uh..it must have been hard for you when Reva died?" she
said softly.

Vikram nodded. He pushed the difficult memories away. "Losing someone close to you is hard on everyone,"he said. But he didn't want to talk
about that, he thought. He became silent for so long after that, Sugni felt depressed. She wished he would talk about Reva with her.

The medical emergency today had shown her yet another side of him. He would, she decided, someday make some woman a very good marriage
partner. The only problem was, she didn't want to think of him married to anyone else but her. Since the evening he had kissed her, her senses
were topsy-turvy everytime she was near him. She sighed. It wasn't supposed to be like this. They had signed on for a marriage of convenience and nothing else. Sugni drew a deep breath and with much effort, she forced her daydreams aside and concentrated on the reality of the situation, which was that he didn't love her.
Thank fully they pulled into the driveway then.

MT was waiting for them patiently with Suman and Shalini. When Sugni saw MT, she huffed under her breath, she just could not deal with MT
right now but she still followed Vikram to the haveli to meet MT.

She told them about Laxmi and the baby. Shalini made Sugni promise to take her to see the baby and then she started on Suman about
getting grandchildren. Sugni had fun with Shalini teasing both her and Suman about babies.




Sugni and Vikram went to the house for dinner on Shalini's insistence. Everyone was being served dinner when the telephone rang.
Ramu kaka came to Vikram and said, "Sorry to disturb you thakur malack but there is a Ms. Sonia on the phone to you."

"Sonia? What a surprise! It's been ages since I last spoke to her. Please excuse me everyone," Vikram told them all and went to take the call in the other room.

When Vikram returned to the table several minutes later with a huge smile on his face, Sugni wondered just who was Sonia.


MT looked at Sugni's face and smirked behind her teacup. That should remind Sugni of her place, she thought to herself.

As soon as dinner was over, Sugni made the excuse of a headache and bid her goodbyes. Vikram, who was busy with yet another phonecall on his mobile this time, didn't even notice when she left. She lay in bed for hours thinking about Sonia and the smile on his face.


Several evenings later, she and Vikram were having dinner when his phone rang. Sugni tried hard not to roll her eyes when he excused
himself to take the call. Ever since the night Sonia had called, Vikram was receiving numerous calls on his mobile. And it was always at dinner
time. This was annoying her to no end especially when she realised that they were all female callers, Sonia, Ria, Trisha, Priya...
Just who the heck were these women and why were they calling her husband, she wanted to demand from Vikram. She was sure it was
probably the mysterious Sonia again but Vikram came and touched her shoulder just then and said, "Sugni? We have to go to the hospital now."

"Hospital? Why?"

"It's your mother. She is sick.."

Edited by JulieD - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow intresting Chapter... what was it vickram was worried about... Ohh Sugni feeling jalouse of the phone calls and what is up with that? I smell MT behind that...what is she trying to do ???
The Baby... that was nice Sugni forgetting her aunt lol...again you maintained the chemstry these two had with the key catching part ...beautiful.
Gulabiya back in the hospital again???
Keep it up Julie ...you are doing a wonderful job... next chapter soon please!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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julie this was good chapter
funny part - sugni came but forgot laxmi :)
sugni jealous ... hmm claiming he is her husband and she wants to know who are those ladies
good progress
hope to have the next chapter b4 november
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter Thirteen



Vikram was breaking all the speed limits to get Sugni to the hospital. As they stopped at a red light, he reached over and squeezed her
hand. "Sugni, don't worry, everything will be ok."

Sugni just nodded and continued praying to Sita maiya. Vikram had noticed that just like their "wedding night", whenever Sugni was in any
tension, she would squeeze some pebbles she always had tied to her dupatta and pray to Sita maiya. As soon as the jeep came to a stop in the hospital parking lot, Sugni hopped out the jeep and went running inside.

When Vikram reached, he saw her with Nagania. "Is there any news yet?" he asked.

"No thakur malack, since they took her inside the ER, no one came out since," Nagania replied.

"Mami, how did this happen?" Sugni questioned her.

"Sugni beta...your mother had gone to peform rai..whe"

"Rai?" Sugni practically screamed at her aunt. "Ma is sick! How could you allow her to go to do rai?"

Vikram rushed to Sugni and pulled her away from Nagania, "Sugni? Sugni please calm down. We are in the hospital. Let me speak to her ok?"

"No malack! I will speak to her. How could they make my mother dance? What happened to all that money from the sardakai? Huh?"

"Sugni please calm down. I will speak to her. You go and sit down on that chair now," Vikram directed Sugni to a seat and went to speak to Nagania.

"Malack, please it's not like that..." Nagania began to explain.

"Tell me then, what it was like because i would love to know how you people will allow a sick woman to go and dance," Vikram was also mighty
pissed off.

"Malack, when Hukum and Kataru came home, they were excited about the baby. They began making plans for the baby's sardakai and how much money they could make. It wasn't until after all their plans, they realised the baby was a boy. They were angry and disappointed. Jiji was making plans for the baby's naming ceremony and they got interested in that. But when Jiji refused to give them money for liquour, they stole all the money in the night and ran off with it. They spent it all and came back with nothing! The baby needed things and we needed groceries so Jiji decided to go for Rai..."

"Why didn't you come to me if you needed money?" he demanded.

"I wanted to come believe me malack I was going to come to Sugni but Jiji stopped me and she forbid us from asking for any thing ...and then she collapsed in pain while doing rai..."

Just then the doctor came out and Vikram went with Sugni to his office. "Well doctor, do you have a diagnosis?"

"I do. Gulabiya has Bursitis," the doctor diagnosed.

"Bursitis?"

"Yes. Gulabiya is a dancer right? The dancing aggravated her shoulder joint. The pain she felt originated there, then spread out into her chest and down her arm, mimicking heart pains or angina. We didn't pinpoint the source because up until now there's been no swelling or inflammation in the joint. We've injected steroid medication and local anesthetic into the joint and packed her shoulder in ice."

"Will she be ok?"

"Yes she will. You can take her home in a while."

"Thank you so much doctor."


Vikram, Sugni and Nagania went in to see Gulabiya. "Ma, how are you feeling?"

"Better Sugni."

"Ma why didn't you tell me you needed money?"

"Sugni! I can't take money from you."

"Ma! What is the point of all this if I can't help you? You are forbidden from dancing!"

"Gulabiyaji if I may make a suggestion that will solve everyone's problems?" Vikram intervened.

"Yes malack."

"I will hire your brothers to work for me in the furniture store and pay them. That way you will not need to dance."

"Work malack? They will never do that," Gulabiya laughed.

"Once I have your permission, trust me Gulabiyaji they will work for me," he stated.

Gulabiya looked at his determined face for a minute and then agreed. It would be nice if her brothers could earn for themselves. After all she
would not be around forever to support them.
A short while later, Vikram took Gulabiya home and then he and Sugni made their way home.

"Malack you may not know this but my uncles are so lazy that they will never agree to work. Malack..I was thinking that since everything seems
to be okay on your end, maybe I should go back home and ..and I could do the rai so that ma..."

Vikram pulled the jeep to an abrupt stop in the middle of the road. "You will do what? Rai? Huh? You want to dance in front of these lecherous
men and have them ogle you? Is that what you are saying Sugni?" Vikram felt the anger rise out of his stomach. She just had to be crazy!

"Malack I was just thinking about ma and.."

"And nothing Sugni! Didn't you hear what I told your mother in the hospital? Your uncles will work. Do not doubt that they won't do it.
Stop treating them like china dolls. They are grown men with families having kids so they need to provide for their families ok. You will not sell your body to feed grown up men!! If I ever hear those words come out of your mouth again then I will wring your neck!"

"Are..are you threatening me?"

"Yes! And Sugni bear in mind that I never make a threat that I can't follow through on ."

"You are being ridiculous malack!"

"And you are not a bedni!" he retorted as he started the jeep.

"Malack you do remember that all of this will end soon right? We are just pretending here. I am just pretending to be your wife."

"Well you are not doing a great job!" he told her and pulled into the driveway.



Before she could reply, he hopped out the jeep and marched into the guest house. She decided to take a few minutes to get some air.
Since she had heard that her mother was sick again, she had been operating on steam. She was so scared that something would happen to her but thank god the doctor finally diagnosed her condition. She promised herself that no matter what the consequences, her mother would not dance ever again. Recalling her and Vikram's argument, she knew he had a point. Her uncles needed to work and if he could make them do it then great. She decided to go and apologise to him. She realised that she had never seen him so angry before. He must really despise rai and ..and bednis, she finished the depressing thought. It was then that she noticed the strange car parked in the driveway. Thinking that MT must have a visitor she made her way to the guesthouse.



As she stepped into the living room, she felt the blood rush into her head as jealousy and anger overtook her whole mind.
Seated on the sofa, was Vikram with a lady caressing his shoulder! The woman had long black hair and her nails were polished a deep red colour.
"..when I heard the news, I just had to come here to find out for myself. I simply could not believe that you had gotten married!" she purred, "Vikram darling, how could you? When you know that I have been waiting for so long to marry you? Anyways, now that I have confirmed it with you, I just can't decide what I should do!"

" Why don't I help you make up your mind then?" Sugni stepped into the living room. "If I find you within 10 yards of Vikram again, I will scratch your eyes out! And I never make a threat that I cannot follow through on!"

Vikram raised his eyebrows at the last statement. Both he and the lady stood up. "Well well Vikram, it seems that you have your hands full here with this one. I will leave you alone with your jailkeeper bride!" the lady said and walked out.

As the door slammed on the lady's exit, Sugni just wanted the earth to open up and swallow her. Oh Sita maiya!What did she just do? What did she just say?


"Sugni? Wha..." Vikram started to say but Sugni cut him off.

"What malack? There is no way that a wife would walk past a scene like that in her home and do nothing! " she replied defensively.

"Really? I could have sworn that you were..hmmm...dare I say jealous?" he teased her.

"What! jealous? You are joking right? I was pretending to be your wife! Ju..just pretending!" she stammered and ran to her room to hide her embarassment.

Vikram looked at her closed door and smiled, "Oh Sugni..Sugni Sugni. You are jealous!" Why that thought pleased him, he did not want to think about but he was actually very happy to get rid of Sangeeta. She had been hounding him down for years and he was actually thinking of a polite but effective way to get rid off her but Sugni did it instead!

Edited by JulieD - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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WOW Julie you did it again!...
Wonderful chapter...wow these two had sparks flying between them altight. I can feel the chemestry between them...
I am looking forward to seeing vickrm making those lazy bones work ...
Highlight : vickram mad at Sugni, jealouse Sugni and teasing vickram...i loved it all...Leep it up and new chapter soon plzz
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Posted: 11 years ago
Good good good
very good chapter
finally this useless katari n hukum will work
vikram got angry on the rai
n
sugni jealous
all in one chapter
good progress
keep it up

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