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Ron

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Hey vinnie

chapter 3 was good.. sugni chose the colors we loved blue and orange .. 😆😉 it was good and yeah .. His being the gaurd brought back all people it was good

some where she teachs him to breath again and to live again !!! I liked that you brought in bhushan as his bro... and rathu, champta and tinkla ..as her workers

it was nice ... !!!

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Ron

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Posted: 12 years ago

#222

vinnie

chapter 4 was Nice...

it will take him time but Im sure he will go and cut his hairs 😆

any ways .. it was nice of her to acompany him and be a nice friend who try to help ..

Adi in his dream hmm what did vikram do to adi (In psh- sugni fall down and he felt he was wrong what happened here .. Hmm HOPE i find out soon)

Oh vikram tell us your problem

good progress !!!

Thanks

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Ron

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Posted: 12 years ago

#223

Awesome vinnie

I liked chapters 5+6 jwala to come in and sugni to attack him was nice .. and then vikram to feel he is falling in love but he is not sure what feelings he has .. he offers help .. awesome it was nice very well written part !!! 👏

slowly the love starts .. I hope and believe that vikram will save her from this because he is not a simple midle class man .. so.. let''s see what he does in upcoming chapters !!

hats off well done

I liked it !

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Vinnie79

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Posted: 12 years ago

#224

Ron I must say I am impressed... 6 chapters in one go!!! and Thank you for giving this story a read. I am happy you are enjoying this story... I love reading your thoughts so please continue to leave them. I hope you like what this Vickram and Sugni are up to... Enjoy the story !!!😊😊😊😊

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Ron

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Posted: 12 years ago

#225

vinnie

I finished reading chapter 7

it was nice.. the way vikram handle the police was a smart move so hats of to u for thinking such a brave way out of the problem .. Oh I knew why the police came when I finished reading chapter 6

vikram is slowly falling in love and trying to control it

can He.. Lets see how longer😆😉

vikram to open his reality slowly its goood em sure sugni wont leave him to deal with it alone

he thinks she will leave him or ask him to

but em sure she wont

any ways chapters 1-7 were good

ill read next tomorrow 😃

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Ron

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Vinnie79
Ron I must say I am impressed... 6 chapters in one go!!! and Thank you for giving this story a read. I am happy you are enjoying this story... I love reading your thoughts so please continue to leave them. I hope you like what this Vickram and Sugni are up to... Enjoy the story !!!😊😊😊😊

not 6

7 completed 😃😛😉 and I enjoyed it so far

well ill read next tomorrow but so far i liked the story 👏

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Ron

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Posted: 12 years ago

#227

Vinnie

chapter 8 was nice.. you showed his inner feelings very nicely and I liked this sugni who is supportive and he too supports her.. both are made for each other Oh I c Now reva is back.. What happened .. I wonder ... I guess ill find out in next chapters well written i liked it

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Ron

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Posted: 12 years ago

#228

Vinnie

I finished reading chapter 9-it was very nice .. I guess he needed to be home to get their love.. I liked it suman to b a good wife and bhushan to be caring for the businesss (In psh he did nothing Im glad here he did)

vikram went home .. got so much love and his mom assured him that he should move on and all should forgive them self was nice I liked it

I guess that's will open his heart to sugni (he already loves her) but now he will be able to accept it and may b move on n share this with her

Lets see what is his story in next chapter Maybe😆

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Ron

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Posted: 12 years ago

#229

aeesome awesome .. chp 10 was great

I knew I knew why she was mad at him... I could see it .. she was missing him and he did not call her.. she got angry 2 days without calling her.. she could not work because of that waiting 4 him call.. Vikram wanted 2 call but could Not..

I wonder what will she say

She is in love

will she accept it

Hmm.. I guess next chapter will tell that

any ways hats off .. nice work 👏

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Ron

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Posted: 12 years ago

#230

Oh vinnie I loved chapter 11

she agreed to him and accepted her love finely that's nice very well and beautifully written .. wow this romance b/w those 2 is growing with the chapters I liked it vikram to be shaved and more - wear the orrange kurta awesome I could see champa's face to know this truth .. Oh how did it happen hahaha any ways well written Loved it 👏

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