FF LEARNING TO BREATH..updated pg 25

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Vinnie

chapter 12 was good... I liked the joke of THAKUR VIKRAM SINGH name .. hahaha when we sow a thakur we also felt thakur has to be like that -Thinking of thakur Loha singh from agle janam- he was Just like that... even jwala was that kind a man ... many thakurs were like that.. we could see them at sugni's sardakaii all same types but vikram .. he was different from all. I loved the humor I loved the romance and then ... the truth come out... reva to be his ex wife.. who he divorced 1 yr b4 and Adi to be killed by him 😳🤢 Let's see what chapter 13 has stored for me 😉😛 Nice progress I liked it !

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Posted: 12 years ago

#232

Vinnie

Chapter 13 had full on drama I loved it really it was good and very nice story I felt so Much anger to aditiya who cheated his uncle but sorry I can't forgive such crime even for once he did not think about his uncle all he cared was himself - his pain and reva's act - did he say to her NO you are my uncle's wife No he did not It was an accident .. vikram is not the killer of aditiya and im happy that sugni supported and accepted that bitter past !! hats off I liked the progress !! Poor vikram to face such a black past 🤢

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Ron

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Posted: 12 years ago

#233

Awesome again I finished reading chapter 14 and it was great, well the best treatment some times is to forgive - I remember the idea from Karina's Movie =Jub we met- when she asked shaheed kapoor to burn the picture of his ex lover who cheated on him.. I guess that's helped him that time..

well bygones are bygones we cant hold out anger all life we should forgive... Yes it hurts but the man is no more so .. forgive and forget its the best medican In life

any ways

sugni to find who vikram was - nice way of openening his truth to her I Liked it !!! 👏 signi self respact good here 2 she can't take money for free good going nice story well progressed

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Okaaay .. chapter 15 was Nice.. Ahm Ahm sugni in vikram's room .. her face should be seen when he asked her to sleep with him 😆😉 it has to be like the butten scene face 😃 any ways .. the new baby came in suman and bhushan's life.. that's good / sugni to be loved and accepted in his family.. Hmm what else she could ask for 😆😉 / Vikram to remember his lost babies poor him . Hope he marries sugni and she fulfill this his dream and makes him a father *(I dont think in this your story They will have any kids...😳) any ways ,.. I loved the progress .. the romance and every thing👏

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Ron

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Posted: 12 years ago

#235

Vinnie Chapter 16 was awesome

the way out of the issue was great and it did work but I dont know why em sure like the movies he might come back.. villains dont sit back and accept they lost do they😆 any ways if he wont come its great if he comes .. IT WILL BE HIS LOST the dinner / the carnival and eventually the dance all were awesome I liked it Jwala type people they know to use poor people = he never knew any rich would rescue sugni and help her .. that left him shocked and surprised.. but yes there are people out there Like him... get the money and say No .. I .. I did not get any

Nice progress !!!

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Ron

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Posted: 12 years ago

#236

wow vinnie very romantic chapter 17 I just loved it .. 😉 any ways I knew it .. Jwala Wont sit back and let her win.. didnt I write b4... I knew it... He is the villain so he will try 2 win and wont stay silent .. poor sugni

any ways I liked all the chapter.. I wonder what if we got full romantic episode in phir subah hogi - it would have been no 1 show on tv 😆😃 any ways well written !!! I loooved it

let's see what is stored in next chapter

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Ron

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Posted: 12 years ago

#237

Originally posted by: komal07
OMG Just finished all 11 chapters at once
Vinnie suspense writer se romantic writer ban gyi tum to?😳 Bacho ki jaan lo gi kya🤣
You know whenever they had kiss it reminded me serial wala TVS. He tried to kiss her 4 times but never succeeded last scene mein poor guy was about to kiss and THE END🤣
Tumhara TVS to maze mein hai😆 sugni ke sath sath main bhi laal tomato ho gyi hun abhi😆
But seriously you're such an amazing writer. Great going🤗

hahahahaha komal

so true 👏😃 you made me laugh 2

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Ron

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Posted: 12 years ago

#238

Hey vinnie

I read half chapter 18 and it started Nice.. Let's see what vikram does .. I will complete reading it on my ipod and share my views soon

Ill leave the last pages to sunday :)

Take care

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Ron

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Posted: 12 years ago

#239

I finished reading chapter 18 in the way home and it was fantastic i liked the progress .. poor sugni but em sure vikram will find the way out and it can be saved , !!
Nice progress