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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sorry guys...couldnt update though i finished writing...thanks to rain and network problems...so here is the next part...hope u guys like it

CHAPTER 11

Abeer laid down on the bed thinking of the challenge he had accepted. Not the first time someone challenhed him but it bothered him. He couldnt be overconfident here. Something told him the task at hand was not going to be accomplished with his charm, popularity or witty one liners. No. But he wanted to win. Not just to show her but to prove to himself that he didnt need her to manage his son. He could be as good a single parent as she was. He had to be. Again something ...probably his instincts...told him that it wouldnt be that easy. She was different...responsible and authoritative always...he wasnt. He was a good so to his mom but not a responsible one...he had been a loving husband to Meher but when responsibility had come in he had failed. What if it happened again?? He was a doting father but could he be a responsible one. That too to an 8 year old son whose existence he had no idea till a month back. He brushed aside the thought. He told himself.." you are Abeer Malhotra...born to win...she is messing with your head...dont fall for it".Then he barely knew when he had drifted off to sleep.

The next he knew was a prick of heat at his fingertip. His bed had caught fire???? Alerted by the though he got up screaming. But there were no flames around. Just his wife standing in front of him in a red suit and wet hair.She had just showered.. He saw a cup of steaming tea on the bedstand. And a bit of the tea dripping off his finger. She had dipped his hand in the hot tea to wake him up!!!!
This was so not done. Not even his mom had woken him up like this.
That too this early.

He asked" Are yaar...why are waking me up at midnight?? Ab subah subah hi harassment shuru karogi kya"

Meher replied "Well dear husband...most people call this morning...its 7 am u idiot...dont u remember your challenge?? Lets get started".

He looked at her as she pulled him off the bed.

Ab: "What do you want me to do?? Make breakfast?? This is Malhotra Mansion. There are servants around to make breakfast for Ishu."

Meh: "Not breakfast...I dont wanna kill my son by giving him what you make...I want you to wake him up"

Ab:" This early?"

Meh: "Its a weekday...he has school...now go wake him up while I get ready"

Abeer looked at her and moved closer. She stepped away. He laughed and left the room.

15 minutes had passed when Meher was ready. Ishu and Abeer were not yet to be seen. Where on earth were they???Maybe Abeer was having difficulty waking up Ishu. She went into Ishu's room to know what was happening.
The scene half shocked her and half made her laugh.

ABEER MALHOTRA WAS SLEEPING SOUNDLY CUDDLING HIS SON!!!

Great. This was so like him. He couldnt handle anything. She started waking them up.Ishaan woke up first and was surprised to see his papa sleeping with him. She sent him off to brush and woke Abeer.

Meh:" Wake up..you were supposed to wake up ur son...not sleep with him...and you knowcwhat he ias awake and getting ready...unlike you...so you failed ur first test."

Abeer got up angrily.

Ab: "Haan toh...I just lost this...lots more to go...waise bhi Ishu doesnt need me to wake him up."

an alarm would do"

With that he left.When he came down to breakfast again there was another test for him to fail. Meher told him to convince Ishu to have puha for breakfast and he bribed Ishu to have chocolate shake without his mom's knowledge only to be caught by Detective Meher. Test 2 fail.

The evening she gave him another test. Ishaan had some test the next day and he was supposed to telll him not to play video games fofor the day. That went well. Once he told Ishaan that if he scored well for the test he would get him a new video game his son was immersed in studies. Even without the bribe the kid was studying well. He was like his mom...the topper kid. Meher seemed satisfied.

That night she asked him to help Ishu with his homework.

Ab:" Sorry Meher...Anything for Ishu except this...All through school I never did even my own homework...and you are asking me to help him...sorry yaar...no...i dont want my kid to give gis teacher a hear attack"

Meh: " You are right...anyway fail again"

With that she left to help Ishu herself.

The next day when Abeer woke up Meher had left. She had sime urgent meeting and he was supposed to drop off Ishu. When theybreached the school Ishaan told him his school was closing for summer after the day's test. He asked Abeer to sign some notice given by his teacher. Abeer was getting late for his recording. It was some marklist. He yold himself waise bhi yeh topper hoga and signed it.Then with a bye to Ishu he was off.

That afternoon Meher came into his office. She looked at him enquiringly.

Ab: "Kya hua??? Kya chahiye??"

Meh:"Abeer did you sign any paper for Ishu today morning??"

Ab:"Haan...some marklist"

Meh:"His teacher wants to meet you...what did u do??"

Ab:"She must be a fan and might wanna get a autograph"

Meh:"From her tone she isnt amused"

They left together for the school and met the teacher.

Tr:"Mr. Malhotra did u sign this paper??"

Ab:"yep"

Tr:"Did u even read it before signing??"

Ab:"Yes...its a marklist na?"

Tr:"Yes...but its not Ishaan's...I mixed up the papers accidently and gave Ishaan someone else's papers...most of tge kids whose papers got mixed up brought back the paper unsigned.. .only 3 were signed...Ishaan's was amongst those...but what is weird is that the paper Ishaan got was of a kid with very poor marks and u signed it...didnt u ask Ishaan how his marks are so low...he is a topper and those grades were very poor...I was thinking how careless you are...Its my mistake that the papers were mixed up...but u didnt even check what you were signing on..thats not good for a child of Ishaan's age"

Meh:"Sorry Maam...it wont happen again"

At the last part Abeer saw her glaring at him. As they came out Meher tild Ishaan to wait in the car.

Ab:"Woh Meher..."

Meh:"No Abeer...you are so careless...you can be a loving father but not a respobsible one...you can never manage your son without me...you cant take care of anyone "

Ab:" I know"

That took her by surprise. She looked at him. He was teary eyed. She couldnt help feel sorry.

Meh.:"Anyways chalo...Ishu is waiting...and I am around for these things...we have a meeting u remember??"

They drove to the hotel. They were supposed to meet some people regarding his show. They left Ishaan in the playing area.After an hour the meeting got over and they went to get Ishaan. He was sutting there all by himaelf and was crying.

Meher went to him and he hugged her. As Abeer moved closer Ishaan stepped back.

"STAY AWAY" he shouted at a shocked Abeer.

Meh:"Kya hua Ishu...dont talk to papa like that"

Ish;"I hate him mom...and you lied for him"

Meh:"What??"

Ish:"I know everything...you guys got seperated beacause he fought with you and didnt want you to live with him...and he didnt want that because he didnt want me...he ran away because he didnt like kids...and now he took me back coz he loves you still...he will send me away soon...he wants only you"

Meher and Abeer looked at each other shocked. Abeer looked shattered.

Meh:"Who told you this??"

Ish:"Akshat uncle...he lives here...he was angry with papa...i told him to be your friend ahain and be papa's friend too.and he tild me papa was bad...i argued and then he told me this"

Meher felt an urge of anger. No way Akshat was getting away with this. But first she had to convince Ishaan.

Abeer came forward.

Ab:"Meher I will handle this..."

Meh:"No Abeer ..I dont want you to be hurt more"

He smiled at her. True. It was irony. But then everything related to love was.

Ab:"No its between us...he deserves to know""

She nodded. He went up to Ishaan and sat by him.

Ab:" Ishu...Akshat was right...I left your mom coz I didnt want kids...but i never meant to leave you...You remember the daybwhen your teacher asked you to be the class monitor and you told me you said no because you were scared?? You said you feared that you wouldnt be able to handle the responsibilty...u wanted to be free...and you were scared that you would do something wrong and be punished ...the same happened to me 8 years back. I feared resposibilties and when ur mom talked about kids I got scared and I ran away...but then I realized my mistake and came back...i was ready to take up responsibities...like you went to the teacher the next day and took up the responsibility I came back...but your mom was gone. And then she didnt come back to me. Till I met her 3months back I had no idea about your existence. I am sorry and hope you forgive me . I love as much as I loved your mom...more than my life"

Meher was in tears. She didnt know how but she felt herself hold Abeer's hands...supporting and consoling him.
Ishaan got up and hugged his papa.

"I love you too papa...as much as i love mumma...dont leave me ever again..."

That was a happy reunion. Watching the duo Meher realized one thing...she was wrong...Abeer might never be the father she wanted him to be...he was a better one. He loved Ishaan. And that insyant she felt her frozen heart melt completely once again. Now she had no grudges towards him. She might fall for him again now that there was nothing to blame on him.

Meher Malhotra...beware...you are gonna fall for him anytime ...she told herself.

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Guys this one is a bit clumsy...but do read the next...it will be totally Mehbeer.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
Nice update. ..
Abeers tests were nice...
siddhi.d123 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
Hey amazing update so Meher is going to fall for abeer again !waiting to see their romance 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice Update. Waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing Update Dear🤗
ABEER MALHOTRA WAS SLEEPING SOUNDLY CUDDLING HIS SON!!!So Cute
Detective Meher... 😉This is most Awesome thing👏
Meher asked Abeer to Help Ishaan with His Homework🤣🤣 I think she losted🤣

And love d part Abeer Realised He can't manage his Son Without Meher👍🏼


Akshat is back with Revenge drama So unlike him👍🏼
Well Abeer's Honest Confession to Ishaan was sooo real.Beautifully written.
U made me cry.😭
Meher Consoling Abeer[:p]
Happy ReUnion

And Finally Meher's Realisation Of Abeer being better Father to Ishaan & she might fall for him Again...👏
overall wonderful update.
Loved it❤️
Awww next update will full of Mehbeer
Then I m waiting Yaar😉
Plz Update Soon
MehbeerMyWorld thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
Wow brillian SS
Whole chapters are Beautifully written
Waiting for next Chapter
chemgirl thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
Thank u people...will be updating soon...two parts coming...the mehbeer part got too long...so i will be doing it as two parts...the second will have more mehbeer
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: .shivi396

Amazing Update Dear🤗
ABEER MALHOTRA WAS SLEEPING SOUNDLY CUDDLING HIS SON!!!So Cute
Detective Meher... 😉This is most Awesome thing👏
Meher asked Abeer to Help Ishaan with His Homework🤣🤣 I think she losted🤣

And love d part Abeer Realised He can't manage his Son Without Meher👍🏼


Akshat is back with Revenge drama So unlike him👍🏼
Well Abeer's Honest Confession to Ishaan was sooo real.Beautifully written.
U made me cry.😭
Meher Consoling Abeer[:p]
Happy ReUnion

And Finally Meher's Realisation Of Abeer being better Father to Ishaan & she might fall for him Again...👏
overall wonderful update.
Loved it❤️
Awww next update will full of Mehbeer
Then I m waiting Yaar😉
Plz Update Soon

hi shivi...thought you left the forum...thanks for commenting...
chemgirl thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi guys...this part got too long...so i have divided it in two...first this short portion...its basicaly just two conversations...but i didnt feel like deleting these...so i am posting it now...next part i will update earlier than usual

CHAPTER 12

Meher's heart swelled with pride as she looked at the father-son duo hugging each other. Abeer had realized his mistakes and apologized to Ishu setting aside his ego and arrogance and Ishu had given him a chance to explain and had reunited with him. She wiped away the tears flooding her eyes.

Meh:"Ishu, forgot Mumma?? You love him more than me??"

She made a sad face. Ishaan went upto her and hugged her.

Ish:"No mumma...I love u as much as I love Papa"

Meher smiled and kissed him on the forehead.

Ish:"One minute...in return of forgiving you I want something...lets make a deal"

Ab:"Meher he really is your son...he loves deals...Dad will be happy that his grandson is already making deals"

Meh:"No Abeer...he is your son...he doesnt waste a single opportunity"

They both broke out laughing and hugged Ishaan. They looked like a very happy family. No one would say that a few days ago these same parents hadnt wanted to see each other's traits in their son.

Ab:"What do you want?"

Ish:"I wanna go for that one week camp you guys refused to let me go for...plz"

Meher and Abeer smiled. They were gonna allow him anyway.

Ab:"ok"

Ishaan jumped with joy and hugged his parents.

Ab:"Ghar chale??"

Meh:"You both leave...I have got to meet some more clients"

Abeer looked at her. Their eyes met and she knew he had understood whom she was going to meet.

Meh:" I have some unfinished business to look into "

Ab:"Get over with it fast...we will be waiting at home...Ishaan learnt to play a new song and he wants you to hear it"

When Abeer and Ishaan had left Meher walked into the hotel again. She went up to the receptionist.

"Can I know which room Mr. Akshat Rawal is in??"she asked.

Once the reveptionist told her the room number she went straight to the room and knocked the door. She wanted to get over with this.Both answer his questions and ask hers.Akshat opened the door. She expected him to act rude or tell her to leave. But he opened the door with a huge smile. Then he welcomed her in as if she was still his best friend...or fiancee. She was angry with him for manipulating Ishaan. But she couldnt blame him fully for it. He was the man who had been there for her when her love had abandoned her and their kid. He had cared for Ishaan and her. And in return she had left him at the mandap and eloped with her ex. It was natural fof him to be angry. She wanted to talk to him. She went in with him. He was packing his clothes.

Meh:"Are you not angry with me?"

Ak:"No...of course not...I know u didnt marry him willingly...he played some sort of a game with you and as always you prefered to handle it by yourself...so I am not angry with you...i am angry only with him"

Meher looked at him. He really knew her well.

Meh:"Why did you move out then??"

Ak:"Because I couldnt see you as his wife...and then he would be gloating his victory...plus your mom...Inseriouslybdoubt if she is your mom...all she cares about is her dear daamaad Abeer"

Meh:"You are leaving?"

Ak:"Yes...my new project...I have to go to Hong Kong...dont worry...you and Ishaan can join me once you get divorced...and we will get married there itself...try to get all this over soon..."

Meher cut him in between.Had he gone crazy??

Meh:"What?? Who said anything about a divorce??"

Ak:"Your divorce Meher...I knew you cant handle this yourself...I was thinking what to do when I saw Ishaan here...and then I got the idea...I told him that Abeer..."

Meh:"What?? You said all that on purpose??? I thought you vented out your frustration on Ishu"

Ak:"Of course not...I said those things to make him hate hid dear dad...see Abeer wanted Ishaan...you feared that Ishaan wil choose him over you...now that wont happen...Ishaan hates him...now you can get a divorce from him easily"

Meher looked at him shocked. This was the guy who was in her eye the ideal father. Great.

Meh:"Akshat I DONT MEAN TO DIVORCE MY HUSBAND...this is not temporary...I am not playing any game...I am his wife...this time forever"

Akshat looked dumbfounded.

Ak:"And what about us?"

Meh:" Its over...I wanted to give you back the ring...here"

She took out the ring from her purse and put it into his palm. Akshat pulled her close and squeezed her shoulder.

Ak:"No you cant do this...I know you love him...but you will marry me...I am a better person...you are practical...come on.."

Meh:"I am sorry...I am glad i didnt marry you...else I would have messed up your life forever...I would never love you"

Akshat pushed her away. He was furious.

Ak:"You are the most selfish woman I ever met. You used me. When you needed help I was there for you. You said you will try to move on. You took advantage of my love and now when that creep is back you left me.Your are a wretched woman. A characterless one"

Meh:"STOP IT..."

She sat on the bed and broke down crying.

"I am really selfish...I used you...I promised to marry you and then I left you...but its a good thing I left you then
..I knew I would never love you but i felt we would build a relationship based on respect and care...but I have realized that these are enough in friendship...but marriage requires love...or atleast and effort to love...that effort I would never have made. When Abeer left me broken you came into my life...you helped me...cared for me and my son...and I cared for you in return...you were part of my family but you could never get a place in my heart because my heart belonged to Abeer...I was too broken to see that you were fqlking in love with me...and by the time I learned about it you were alteady deeply in love...I felt it was better for my family,my son and you if I agreed to marry you...my love was gone and the least i could do in return of all your favours was to give you your love though I coukd never love you in return...but i could never go ahead in our relationship because I could never think of myself as your fiancee...then I decided to show Abeer that I moved on...so I went back into his life...I wanted ti show him that he wasnt a part ig my life anymore not realizing that for 8 years my life had still revolved around him...and to such an extent that merely to get rid of him I agreed to become your wife...I am sorry Akshat...I really am...and now I wont hurt you anymore...just stay away for sometime.."

She left the room crying. A huge burden was off her chest as she drove home to her family.

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Two weeks had passed by since her meeting with Akshat. Meher was in a really strange situation. She was falling for her handsome husband...again.The difference was this time he wasnt interested or atleast pretended not to be. She was confused tgese days. She wanted him. But it had always been Abeer who was more expressive about his love for her. She was scared and tried to stayvawayvfrom him. But the married thing wasnt helping. Every morning she woke up with his warm breath on her face. As a resukt she barely slept. Then she would see him sleeping only to wonder at his cuteness. Then again at office. And then being in the same room with him. She was going mad.

That day she was free.Ishaan was leaving for the camp next morning. She had to pack his clothes. Other than that she was free. Groove was topping tge charts thanks to her strategy. Abeer's show was still at top but now new shows were holding good too. That night Sattu sir was throwing a party . So she had a day off but Abeer had to leave for his recording.she came down for breakfast. Ishu had gone with his papa to the studio. As she came down Madhvi was coming from the kitchen. She went to her.Madhvi proposed that they could have breakfast together in the lawn. It was just them. Meher happily agreed.They went together and sat down on the chairs in that part of the lawn they both had loved sitting in 8 years back. Once they had breakfadt Madhvi asked her to walj with her for a bit in the lawn. She wanted to show her something and Meher complied.

Madhvi took her to one part of the lawn and showed her something. A guava tree. One she had planted 8 years ago. They had planted it together. Now there stood a tree bearing fruits.

Meh:"Wow...Ma its grown...I wish I could watch it grow"

Ma:"I wish we could waych him grow together"

Meher turned to see her MIL. She held hef hand in hers.

Meh:"Ma...are you angry with me for keeping Ishaan away?"

Ma:"At first yes...but then as a mother I understood your fear...so no...but i am sad I missed out oh his childhood"

Meh:"I love you ma...you are so much more a mother than saas"

Ma:"Thats because you never thought of me as your saas...so today as your Ma i wanna talk about something important"

Meh:"Go on ma"

Ma:"Neither your mom nor I am convinced by the reason you guys gave for your marriage...butbtgen we accepted what we were told as you are grown up enough to decide for yourselves...but I can see some awkwardmess between you guys...why??? You said you were together for Ishu...but you are married...if you just wanted Ishu you shoukd have remained divorced...but now as a married couple you are responsible towards each other too...as husband and wife...you should work on our marriage...not avoid each other"

Meh:"Ma...we need time"

Ma;"Of course...but you have to start...and avoiding each other wont help...dont take so much time that you wont have time left...donwhat yoy have to...talk...pour out your hearts to each other"

Meher realized what to do. Smiling at ma and thanking her she went in. No kore waiting she decided. Tonight she would talk to him. No ego. No attitude. Tonight would be a new beginning. Meher and Abeer would be Mehbeer again she thought looking atbthe bracelet on her wrist.
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Hope you guys like it


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Posted: 9 years ago
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WoW!!!
tonight would be Mehbeer again,,,, Awesome update...
Waiting for the next chap to see some heart to heart convo between Mehbeer...
Keep it Up!!

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