MehBeer Collab OS: Lost And Conquered - Page 4

Originally posted by: xxSomeonesLuvxx

Wonderful OS.

Loved it to the core. :)

Originally posted by: -Ishana-

Wow! Now this is the kidnapping track I expected to see! same here. i wanted to hit someone with something seeing how they made a joke of the intensity that could have been 😭 i mean koi track to baksh do. not everything needs to be a comedy circus.
LOVED every sentence of it! And Ari you know I like to see painful sadistic OS 😆 so this was a treat!
Wonderful writing! Thank you. thank you. and thank you. And sadism is my bread and butter for writing 🤣🤣 glad you liked it :)
Plus my favorite line was when Meher called him baby that is my most fav part as well ❤️ she always gets so irked when he calls her that. for her to address him as baby hugging him must've been a huge emotional blow. i loved imagining that 🥺

Originally posted by: .SSS.

I've been giggling all the while, when I was reading this, dunno weather
it was the intention of this OS or not 😆 hawww how heartless. bichara abeer pit raha meher jal gayi and tum has rahi ho 🤣

This is crazy and a bit filmy. I, for one, am happy about this being filmy; I thoroughly enjoyed this... thoda drama toh banta hai boss 😉

Hiya and Ari.. I guess you guys have to write more together :) only if hiyu stops trying to kill me with editing requests 🤣

Thanks for the PM. Much love <3 thank you :-*

Originally posted by: ..Steph..

AWW MY CRAZY DUO Collaborated :D
EEEH <3

Originally posted by: -Shiiya-

this was such a brilliant take on the kidnapping track, I was expecting something like this to happen in the show. me too! par saare wishes pe selfie phir gaya 😭

very well written.. Absolutely loved it! thank u soo much 🤗

Originally posted by: -Ishana-

Wow! Now this is the kidnapping track I expected to see! yayy 😆
LOVED every sentence of it! And Ari you know I like to see painful sadistic OS 😆 so this was a treat!
Wonderful writing! ishana mujhe thank u kaun bolega? 🤔 🤣 mai intro deti hu rukk...Hi i am Hiya 🤣
Plus my favorite line was when Meher called him baby my fav too

Originally posted by: cutie15

That was a superb effort..!
It was so so intense the way it should have been..
I totally loved it..:) awesome job..
Do write more like these..;)

Originally posted by: naina927

Thank you girls for writing this...!!!! You both made my day...!!!!

I wonder what do I look like with tears on my eyes and a smile on my face...!!! Such moments are very precious and rare, you know... Awww thank you so much naina its one of the best feelings or compliments any author/writer can have when someone loves something you wrote so much and it touches them. it really really means alot :-*

First ever is in the forum on the kidnapping track...!!!! And it was bang on...!!! its sadism after all 🤣

Meher and abeer - how much they deny it but they are eachother's biggest strength and weakness at the same time. They can even die for each other in order to keep the other one alive and safe..!!! Soulmates...!!!

Now that's true love...!!! The one that's eternal...!!! someone please go and tell those idiots this thing 🤣