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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -.serendipity.-

Res :D

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Ari this totally what I would expect from you 🤣 glad we met the expectations 🤣 i was itching to write something really actually sadistic after 😉

But at least someone wrote something on the kidnapping track. Agar yeh show mein hota then it would have been my favourite track 😆 I wanted to do this and wanted this to happen since the moment kidnapping was mentioned. but cv's have to turn every thing into comedy 🤬

Meher ko aise dekh ke Abeer se raha nahi gaya and had to put himself in that situation :(
Aur Meher bhi kam nahi. She let herself get burned for him

This was just fantastic Ari and Hiya! This forum needs more sadism according to Ari so here we are 🤣 YES YES YES .! Hail sadism 🤣🤣🤣


Hope we get some more collabs from you guys in the future 😳 Keep writing :D thank you kiri for being our first bakri. You are our favorite 🤗

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Posted: 10 years ago
#12


you had me literally 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Seriously really nice... I like what they did in the track because I don't know if there was any other way for them to get out of it unscathed--- but I wouldn't have minded a bit more focus on the emotional angst.
But seriously love this part:

"Why didn't you leave when you could?" he asked trying to mask his pain but his eyes gave him away.

"The same reason you came for me."


👏

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: war_is_peace




kaunsi brand ke hain malika? 🤣


ek hi pheka 🤣 ek se apna kya hoga? we need 2 pairs 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: malikakas

Seriously really nice... *takes a bow with hiya * thank you 😆 I like what they did in the track because I don't know if there was any other way for them to get out of it unscathed--- but I wouldn't have minded a bit more focus on the emotional angst. exactly my point. I liked the way they did it. it was funny, sweet, cute and it was smart bringing in pinkys wife to put a definitive full stop to the track. But still the sadist in me expected much more. More of abeer going bonkers for her. More of her being mad worried for him. it could have been such a major track and they ended it in half an episode -_-

But seriously love this part:

"Why didn't you leave when you could?" he asked trying to mask his pain but his eyes gave him away.

"The same reason you came for me."


👏

thank you again 😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: -.serendipity.-

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Ari this totally what I would expect from you 🤣 next time expect double 🤣 from her i mean 🤣 pls bug her...PM her ..scrap her 🤣

But at least someone wrote something on the kidnapping track. Agar yeh show mein hota then it would have been my favourite track 😆 ours too 😆

Meher ko aise dekh ke Abeer se raha nahi gaya and had to put himself in that situation :(
Aur Meher bhi kam nahi. She let herself get burned for him

This was just fantastic Ari and Hiya! This forum needs more sadism according to Ari so here we are 🤣 thank u 🤣 jab jab abeer maar khaayega i promise humse hi khaayega 🤣


Hope we get some more collabs from you guys in the future 😳 Keep writing :D nahi ari bohot nakhre karti hai 🤣

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: malikakas

Seriously really nice... I like what they did in the track because I don't know if there was any other way for them to get out of it unscathed--- but I wouldn't have minded a bit more focus on the emotional angst.

But seriously love this part:

"Why didn't you leave when you could?" he asked trying to mask his pain but his eyes gave him away.

"The same reason you came for me."


👏


ditto as ari's reply
i m too lazy u shud know 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow! Now this is the kidnapping track I expected to see!
LOVED every sentence of it! And Ari you know I like to see painful sadistic OS 😆 so this was a treat!
Wonderful writing!
Plus my favorite line was when Meher called him baby
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
I've been giggling all the while, when I was reading this, dunno weather
it was the intention of this OS or not 😆

This is crazy and a bit filmy. I, for one, am happy about this being filmy; I thoroughly enjoyed this...

Hiya and Ari.. I guess you guys have to write more together :)

Thanks for the PM. Much love <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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You made me smile even more, if this OS already didn't do enough..🤣

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