Ohhh my goshh.
Kriti. Sweetheart. This was BEAUTIFUL.
You know why you're my favorite writer? Because you write with sincerity.
I get this sense of genuineness when I read your works. Like there's no calculation, desire to be approved by others, anything. Unconventional or not, you just write without any apprehensions and then make us all lucky enough to read your words. 😳
And this OS was 100% Kriti. 👏
For starters, this OS was so real. You gave a sense of human dimension to a fictional Meher. It was the first time, in all my time of reading fanfiction, that I felt like the character I was reading about could be someone who could actually exist. I don't know if that makes sense but you took classic cliche nerdy girl and turned her into a whole person for us. There's this courageous lack of superficiality in the way you write and treat your characters, and as a writer & reader myself, I truly crave for and respect that. You make me want to write again girl!
There was this heartbreaking undercurrent of emotion present throughout but you brought it through with just the right humor, nostalgia, genuine perplexity, and frustration. Like a well-crafted emotional roller-coaster.
But what I loved the most about this OS was the fact that you wrote it with an unapologetic melancholic tone. She was depressed and you didn't try to mask that emotion, you let Meher's wounds bleed for what they are. I agree with everyone else, I think this is your best and also your boldest work yet. Because it takes guts to do something like that. 👏
Your quirk & wit is enviable. Your finesse & polished writing is to die for.
I don't know what else to say, because once again, I loved every little bit of this OS and I can't bring myself just to quote just a single little part. But a quick favorite off the top of my head would be the pro-con bit. 😆 Dal Makhni. 🤣 You made me laugh my way through her turmoil, in a good way.
But it makes me wonder what (if anything) prompted you to write this, have you made a few charts yourself? 😆
Now please do us all a favor and keep writing. 🤗
Edited by ..Shweta.. - 10 years ago
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