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suma madhuri

@madhufx9...

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Darling dikhadiya thumahaari chudailgiri 😆

Loved it , Tanya baby , aww u have exams !! I heard it many times , but u lol find time and post ur stuff , u can't resist writing I know .

Love u for this Tanya , jus loved it .

Very beautifully written .

Keep writing on mehbeer Tanu

P.s. It's becoming hard to call u Tanu 🤣

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Nandini

@cupcaked

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: --fero--
Awesome

Superb

Keep writing more
I would love to read

Thanks Fero. 😃

I will. Glad you like my works.

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Nandini

@cupcaked

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: naina927
Tani from where did u get this idea... Huh..?? 😉
Ek dum filmy...!!! Meher getting anonymous calls... It always remind me of the movie date and the calls srk made to juhi. Lovely movie, it was...!!!
So they tricked meher...!!!! Meher thinks she is abeer's weakness are wants to be hide strength. Whereas abeer is her weakness...
She went only to save abeer and got trapped.
Yeeyyy... Entry of the hero... He saved his meher...!!!
They confessed...!!! ❤️ it.

Filmy is my middle name, Naina. 😆

Thank you so so much.

Glad you like the OS. 😃

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Nandini

@cupcaked

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Ravinanaik
nice os!!

Thanks a lot. 😃

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Nandini

@cupcaked

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: --Ari--
Role reversal. with meher trying to save abeer and getting caught in the process 🤣 hilarious yet such a intense idea 😆 Thanks for that. I actually don't know where that idea came from but before I knew it I had wrote it.

This for some reason reminded me of the scene from twilight one where bella is caught by a similar trick 😆 🤣 Really? You noticed that? What can I say? Twilight was something I got this idea from, kind of. But the difference is that Bella came there for her Mom, Meher came there for Abeer. 😳

I swear i dunno when these idjits will realise how crazy they are about each other. they keep risking their lives for each other yet they dont accept their love. God knows. We don't. 😆

Abeer running to save meher. thank you for that scene. It had the perfect amount of intensity that i felt was lacking from the actual kidnapping climax. Yeah, me too. It felt as if something was amiss. And true, it lacked a lot of intensity I hoped for in that scene.

And that ending was oh so perfect ❤️ Maybe even if not their confession i wanted some sort of intensity after that kidnapping track. You did it really well. Simple words yet they hold your interest and attention . great job 👏 I am glad you liked it. Thank you so so much.

Replied. 😃

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Nandini

@cupcaked

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: -.serendipity.-
Loved the ending! Keep writing :D

I am honeslty not good at endings. 😆

Thanks a lot.

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Nandini

@cupcaked

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: madhufx9...
Darling dikhadiya thumahaari chudailgiri 😆
Loved it , Tanya baby , aww u have exams !! I heard it many times , but u lol find time and post ur stuff , u can't resist writing I know .

Love u for this Tanya , jus loved it .

Very beautifully written .
Keep writing on mehbeer Tanu

P.s. It's becoming hard to call u Tanu 🤣

Yeah, exams r like.. they come and go.

I still am active on IF because, well, I love you. 😆

Thanks Madhu! It means a lot!

Hard to call me Tanu? Then try Tani.

By the way, what's the reason for the difficulty?