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I guess you guys liked my last TS and so, I am back with another OS. My exams are starting so this will be my last OS here for almost a month. I just came here and I have to go back. If lucky, I'll drop by sometime between.

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"Meher Purohit.. Baby aapka jo hero hai na, woh humare kabze mei hai. Bada herogiri dikhata hua aaya tha, ab phass gya yahi. Baat krni hai usse?" Abeer! No! This can't be happening! Who is this guy? Why has he taken my Abeer into custody? What is happening?

"Meher." I hear Abeer's broken voice. The guy is not lying, he really has Abeer. This guy must be the sycho caller! I've been getting calls for almost a month telling me how much he loves me, how much he wishes for me. I didn't tell Abeer because I knew, if I did, he'd overreact and that's not something I wished for right then. Right now, even. I just didn't want Abeer hurt. And look what I did?

"Meher." He says again. Do I reply? If I do, I know I will cry. And it will weaken Abeer if I cry. Married or not, in love or not, I know I am still Abeer's only weakness. And I don't want to be. I want to be his power. His strength.


"Toh Meher ji, ya toh aap apne aap ko humare hawalve kr do nahi toh aapka hero aaj bachega nahi."

"Dekhiye, aap apna address bhejiye. Mei waha jald se jald pahaunchne ki koshish karungi. Par agar Abeer ko ek kharoch bhi aayi, toh mei aap sab ko chodungi nahi."

"Toh hum kaunsa chahte hai aap chod de humein?" I hear a guy say from behind. Cheapster! Bloody cheapster!

"Jaldi aaiyega Meher ji. Aapka intezaar rahega humko."

"Abeer ko kuch nahi hona chahiye." I don't care of myself anymore. I don't care if I am not married to Abeer anymore. I don't care that me going there would be danger for the both of us, as opposed to only him. I don't give a damn to all these! All I care about is Abeer. And that nothing can happen to Abeer! Nothing!




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"I am here." I reach the venue that guy asked me to come to. This place seems shady. I don't know whether I should be here or not. No! I had to be here! I have to be where my Abeer is!

"Meher ji." It's dark, so I can't see anything but a small ray of light coming from a small window nearby. I don't know if it's a power cut or naturally they don't have a light. I hear footsteps approaching me. I am scared for a second.

"Where is Abeer?" I ask into the dark.

"We don't know." What? I hear a few laughs.

"But.. You said you have him."

"Of course we said that, Meher ji." He chuckles, "Oye! Zara light on kariyo!" And in the next moment there were 4 tube lights lighted. I could see the surroundings and my eyes rested on the T.V. nearby. I saw the video of our dance in college. The one we performed in which in the starting Abeer said 'Meher' really quietly and in a broken tone.

Wait.

"You tricked me!" I shout at him.

"Of course I did. I had sent my men to your house a few days back. We don't have your Abeer, Ms. Purohit. But, because of my plan, we have you. All for us." Abeer!!





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"Meher!" I run into the house looking for Meher. I've looked everywhere but I can't find her. Where is she? Where the hell is she?

"Arre Abeer." Maa says. I look at her and she's pain stricken too, "Meher mili?"

"Nahi, Mummy ji." I am scared now. Where could she be gone? She's not at office. She's not at the mall. She's not picking up her phone. She's not even at home! What do I do now? Where do I find her?

"Abeer.." Maa hesitates to say something. Has she been hiding something for me?

"What is wrong, Maa? Tell me." I say.

"I don't know it's them but, I am scared, that she has been kidnapped." Kidnapped! No! No!

"No, Maa!"

"I don't want to believe in it too, Abeer. But from days a anonymous caller has been calling her telling her that he loves her and she should dump you and come to him. She made me promise to her that I would not say a word about this to you. But now I am scared.. Are they the ones who-?"

"Do you have an address?"

"No." Oh damnit! I dial Meher's number again and again. I hear a shrill sound in her room. Oh! She left her phone there! Maybe I can track the number of the caller to know where she is! I run into her room and almost break the door entering into it. I look around for her phone and see it there on her dressing table. I look at it and there's a message.


*makan no 4 sector 14 mei aa jaiye. humei aapka intezaar rahega. aapka abeer sirf tab tak zinda hai jab tak aap yaha mere paas hai. koi hoshiyaari dikhayi toh dekh lijiyega aapke Abeer kya haal karunga.*


Abeer ka? But I am here! Oh he didn't!

"Maa! I got the address! Mei jaa rha hu! He tricked Meher into coming to him! I am going to save my life Maa! I promise to you, she'll be back safe. I am coming okay?"

"Be safe, Abeer."

"Haa." I grab my car keys and go down the stairs because really, I have no time to waste waiting for a elevator. I get into my car and drive to sector 14.



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"Leave me alone! Abeerr!" I shout and scream but no one's coming. On my way here, I saw no houses full of people. They were all isolated and in the middle of them all was this house. This mad house!

"Abeer nahi aane waala Meher ji. Uske sapne dekhna chod do."

"He'll come." He'll come. All of a sudden I hear the door break open. For a moment my eyes take a little time to adjust to the light coming from outside. But when they do, relief floods through me. Abeer's here!

"You were looking for me. I am here." He's here! He's here! "Meher." He rushes to my side and kneels down. I am about to touch his face when one of the men kick him right into the stomach and he writhes in pain.

"Not so fast, kid! She's ours now!"

"She's not yours! She's my wife you f**king jerk!" Men by men charge on him and he fights them off. The guy, the sycho, reaches out for him. He's double Abeer's size.

"Nooo!" I shout as he hits Abeer hard on his face. "Abeeerrr!"

"Bada halka nikla tera Abeer toh." The sycho reaches for my face and he's about to touch me when something hits his head hard and he falls to the ground. Abeer!

"Are you okay? Did they hurt you? Are you okay Meher?" He frees me from the ties on the chair. I can't say anything. I hug him as tightly as I can and he hugs me back.

"I love you. I really, really, love you Abeer."

"I love you too Meher." He kisses my hair and we hug each other for what seemed like an eternity. I am not scared of anything anymore. I am not scared of what will happen now. I don't mind at all.




All I know is that Abeer loves me. And I love him back.



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Cheers
Tani




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Share what you think of it and how could I have made it better. Suggestions for next works also are appreciated. ;)
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Originally posted by: MySarun

Nice OS dear
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wonderful os
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Originally posted by: jeharshu

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Awesome


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Keep writing more
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Tani from where did u get this idea... Huh..?? 😉
Ek dum filmy...!!! Meher getting anonymous calls... It always remind me of the movie date and the calls srk made to juhi. Lovely movie, it was...!!!
So they tricked meher...!!!! Meher thinks she is abeer's weakness are wants to be hide strength. Whereas abeer is her weakness...
She went only to save abeer and got trapped.
Yeeyyy... Entry of the hero... He saved his meher...!!!
They confessed...!!! ❤️ it.

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Role reversal. with meher trying to save abeer and getting caught in the process 🤣 hilarious yet such a intense idea 😆

This for some reason reminded me of the scene from twilight one where bella is caught by a similar trick 😆 🤣

I swear i dunno when these idjits will realise how crazy they are about each other. they keep risking their lives for each other yet they dont accept their love.

Abeer running to save meher. thank you for that scene. It had the perfect amount of intensity that i felt was lacking from the actual kidnapping climax.

And that ending was oh so perfect ❤️ Maybe even if not their confession i wanted some sort of intensity after that kidnapping track. You did it really well. Simple words yet they hold your interest and attention . great job 👏
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Loved the ending! Keep writing :D

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