Mehbeer TS: Him And Her-Part 3-Page 4 - Page 4

Originally posted by: asmaanixx

Mujhe rulane mein tujhe maza aata hai kya? Ab dekh mein tera kya haal karti apni update mein 🤣🤣 rulaya matlab it was a job well done 🤣 so yes i am happy 🤣

And that's how you know you're a good writer! These little things are done subconsciously but people who have the talent to write. Just continue writing and you'll keep getting better and better. 👏 thank you so much :) Yes practice definitely makes perfect. but inspiration also plays a major role. You need a couple that inspires you to go out of the box. ❤️

And that's great! As a writer you should experiment with different genres and writing styles to improve your art. I should do the same but I keep falling back to my style since it's what I'm more comfortable with. For the next piece I should do some experimenting. 😳 Of course! Unhe do universe bhi alag ni kar sakti. 😉 Definitely. but i get the comfort part. As in for me sadism comes so easily, to write pain and make people cry, wahi its such a huge chore to write comedy. But i am trying. you should too. if not anything you learn what you can definitely not do 🤣 i learnt alot that way 🤣

Nice job! :D

Originally posted by: asmaanixx

It was absolutely beautiful Ari! 🤗

Very, very well done. The emotions and inner turmoil and the way their hearts and souls reconciled with each other was really well written. Thank you so much. this re-assures me. Its better to end stuff at a certain point than to drag.

The only thing that has gotten me confused is this part: He didn't want her to remember her, but his eyes kept searching for her.

Is it simply supposed to be,"He didn't want to remember her, but his eyes kept searching for her." ?

thank you for pointing this out. i hadnt proof read. skipped my eye while editing. 😆

Other than that, I had no problems with this update. If this is going to be your last, then are you planning on writing something else? sure. cant sit idle na 😆 check my time travel one out 🤣🤣

Originally posted by: chair1992

Loved it

Originally posted by: madhufx9...

Heights of sadism , just read first part

U penned it very well buddy , every line portrayed their emotions so well

End part Dikhadiya ha chudailgiri😡 okay I am running for next part😆

Originally posted by: neetha

Omg Ari how did u manage to wrote an is wit no dialogues yaar...i love the lines on bold..every line has so much of depth n so much of love n longing...i loved it... it was very very easy actually 🤣 writing dialogues is tougher...cause you have to maintain the characterisation...and the style with which they talk in the show...plus abeer ke one liners are damn difficult to match 😆 thank you so much :) i enjoyed writing the bold parts the most. 😳

Start a new ff of this sort..wic would go fr 30 chapters. :P no dialogues but beautiful bold words of love..agony...reminiscents n relationship :) now thats one interesting idea. since you all have liked this so much i might as well give it a try some time later.

Originally posted by: madhufx9...

😲😒😒

Sadism ka peaks 😒😵 *takes a bow* shukriya shukria 🤣

This is not chudailgiri 😭 I do little chudailgiri unlike u hahaha thank you very much 🤣

Mere Abeer ka kya Haal kardiya tune 😡 i love making the hero suffer 😳

Phil bi an maane badtameez dil , I loved it , perfectly written😆 haha i am glad aapka badtameez dil nahi mana 🤣

Going to see another part of ur sadisim 🤣

Originally posted by: madhufx9...

This is perfect , very beautiful Ari

And I loved those last lines wonderful girl

Keep writing more .

Thanks for writing this master piece buddy.

Muaahhh