MehBeer OS-Knight With Shining Guitar

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TeekhiMishti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Uniquely...me
The title caught my attention and it ended all in a drum...😆
It's really an awesome OS...well written...
do write more...

i thought jumping out of the building or hanging out of a window would've been too cliche 🤣🤣

thank you for liking it. glad you enjoyed. 😆 and i try to write as much as my schedule allows 🤣

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TeekhiMishti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: florine_20
wow nice one

thank you :)

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TeekhiMishti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: .SSS.
Very well written 👏

Thank you!

thank you so much. glad you liked it. 😆

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TeekhiMishti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: cutie15
This was amazinggg.. loved reading this..
their moments were so intense..
I so wish something like this happens in the show..
superb..:)

EXACTLY my point.! i mean i dont want them to confess or solve all their issues right now and here. but turning every moment into a comedy circus gets too much at times. a little intensity isnt too much to ask for. Am so glad someone re-iterates my sentiments. thank you for reading and liking :)

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TeekhiMishti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: xxSomeonesLuvxx
Flawless.
I love it. xx

thank you :)

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TeekhiMishti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: smanchik
It was amazing!!! This is the 4th time I am reading your works!!
Yaar Ari ek baat bata itne saare tension atmosphere mein tujhe storeroom mein romance likna aise sujha, agar mein hoti na, pureh ki pureh james bond/ mission impossible likh dalti!😆😆😆!! I would have made this gruesome action flick😆😆!! sach mein man you are awesome!👏👏👏!!Mein tumhari fan hogayi hoon😆😆!!! If you have any fan list or something add my name into it😉
love,
Sri🤗❤️

sriii yaar your comments make me happy that i write 😆 thank you much 🤗 fan list nahi hai...but friend list hai and you are a part of that ❤️ 😳

and as far as romance in this condition goes..yaar mission impossible to common hai...romance in drum is hatke 🤣 i like to be different 🤣