MehBeer OS-Knight With Shining Guitar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Very well written 👏

Thank you!

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sj_qh_kabhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

This was amazinggg.. loved reading this..
their moments were so intense..
I so wish something like this happens in the show..
superb..:)

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smanchik

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

It was amazing!!! This is the 4th time I am reading your works!!

Yaar Ari ek baat bata itne saare tension atmosphere mein tujhe storeroom mein romance likna aise sujha, agar mein hoti na, pureh ki pureh james bond/ mission impossible likh dalti!😆😆😆!! I would have made this gruesome action flick😆😆!! sach mein man you are awesome!👏👏👏!!Mein tumhari fan hogayi hoon😆😆!!! If you have any fan list or something add my name into it😉

love,

Sri🤗❤️

Edited by smanchik - 10 years ago

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TeekhiMishti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: war_is_peace
shinning guitar?!!!!!! 🤣 🤣

UNRES

waise poore OS mein guitar kahi shine nahi kar raha tha 😭 tuune mujhe dhoka diya 😭 😭 guitar wala toh shine kar raha tha na 😉 learn to read between the titles 🤣

acha ab sunn OS mein jaise dono drum mein baithe thhe aisa hua toh tere mooh mein fruit n nuts ☺️ meri fruit and nut cancel karwa di nalayak cv's ne 😡

OS toh bada mast tha...yeh meher ko naa abeer pe crush hai...kahan abeer usse bachaane aaya aur madam ko toh sirf uska face dekhne se fursat nahi thi 🤣 usse bas abeer ka concerned look dikh raha tha 😆 itna hot + cute face hoga kisiko bhi uske aage kuch nahi dikhega 🤣

nissar mast banda hai tera...tuune usko bola police lekar aane ko n police ko abeer meher mile hote toh? in that position? soch soch 🤣 toh meher drum ka dhakkan band karke wapis chip jati 🤣

waise ab nissar ko thoda slow pata chala...par i suggest tu iska part two likh...jismein nissar locks mehbeer in the store room.. (raat ko meher ki maa ko ajeeb se noises aayenge room mein se😆) better yet gharwalo sabko vacation par bhej denge for somedays 🤣 mehbeer can come out for food and go back into drum and stay there as long as they want 🤣
par tu unko chuha hai samajhaa ke sula dena ok? 🤣

loved the OS...aur chahiye mujhe...jaldi likh...bohot saara likh 🤗 🥳 haan machine laga rakhi haina meine 🤣

ps - night with shinning drum 🤣gandi baat 🤣

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TeekhiMishti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

i just realised i didnt do replies for this. will do now 🤣

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TeekhiMishti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Shipper
HAYEEE IT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL
LOVED IT YAAR 😳

thanks alot. glad you liked it :)

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TeekhiMishti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: _Tanaz_
It's really nice.
loved it. Keep writing

thank you so much. will try my best 😆

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TeekhiMishti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: --fero--
Yeh os padke mera mera pet bhar gaya 🤣
I am not hungry now 😎
So I am skipping today's dinner 🤓
Because of your delicious os 🤔

itna bada compliment 🤣 mai to dab gayi iske weight ke neeche 🤣 thank you so much fero ma 🤣

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TeekhiMishti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: neetha
Wooww Ari..so dreamy this was! I soo wish aisa kabhi Ho show main..m sure we ll hav to wait fr the serial end. *lol*

Best part is ur title lol shining guitar *rofl*

i know thats the sad part. all the fun stuff is shown at the end. even then it isnt done justice to 😭

thank you so much for reading and liking though 😆