Mehbeer SS : fight for love , chapter 3 ,page 6, 23 August - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
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@ namra pakka m😆
Jus give little time , I am sharpening my brain 🤓😆 and deafinetly I will give, adjust with chotusa update ,may after tomorrow , I lol give badawala, now don't comment , u have post limit na , why wasting , just hit like button 😳 bye baby
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome job Madhu. Keep writing!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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heheh...yeh kya.. Mehbeer ki love story too easy tho woh bhaag gaye..🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello peeps , I am so sorry for very late update, actually I lost track of the story , so bear with this chapter . And this for Naina , fero and one girl who asked many times , and gave up finally , sorry buddy , she is NAMRA .


One more req 😛, I casted our scars story author Grleen in this story🤣 Pls dnt tell her 😆She will not come to know unless any of u inform her , so pls do this small favour.😆



A heaving Abeer heard retreating foot steps of someone behind a bush , he hurried to bush and looked around , he saw tiny foot prints of an animal, he looked around to trace animals foot print , he couldn't track , he only saw foot prints of some one, suspicious Abeer followed foot prints. Foot prints ended once he stepped into building . He looked around ,its back side of the hotel . He didn't know which way to take .

He glanced around to locate Meher , she was sobbing searching around .

" Baby " Abeer called her placing his hand on her shoulder. She jerked her shoulder and glared at him.


Abeer was taken back by mehers reaction, he knew how dangerous Meher can be , when she is angry .

" It's not fair, but what did I do ?? Who asked you to come and kiss me leaving your happy sing !! " Abeer accused .

With a murderous look Meher answered Abeer " I kissed you ?? It's you who said me I am irresistibly kissable "

" who asked you to come and hug me , I mean how can I stop , when you are so near to me " Abeer said in a low tone .

" listen Abeer , I didn't accuse you for his missing , it's just I am angry bcz , you were happy hearing his missing news " Meher said sniffing her nose.

" Meher ..., listen nothing like ..."

Meher raised her hand signalling him to stop

" I don't want to hear you until I find him, now just shut up "

Abeer zipped his mouth and muttered curses about his loss of self control.

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" GUR" Shyam called mehers cousin , Gurleen was busy watching her favorite Show 'CID ' , totally indulged and was waiting for mystery to unfold , she was actually busy in polishing her brain to write her new Suspense story.

" Gur " ! This time Shyam yelled at innocent Gurleen , who was already scared of just then witnessed murder in CID , she jerked in horror, dried her wet lips and blinked her widened eyes , she then adjusted her spects which slipped to tip of her nose , then realizing its her angry bird Shyam , she threw a glare at him.

" what's your problem " she questioned placing notepad a side .

" do something Gur , I need Meher at any cost , Devki is coming " he roared .

Gur who has no idea , who was already planning to take a revenge on Shyam thoughtfully scratched her chin.

" Uncle , why don't you complaint to CID ?? " said Gur with a evil smirk.

Shyams eyes popped out of sockets hearing her , he gave a ghostly laugh , patted her shoulder and left her alone again to watch her favourite show CID . Gur shook her head in annoyance , and took her notepad to pen tips which would help her to plot another muster story.

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" Arey Bahai ! How did you get this ?? " one among the cooking staff in resort questioned Tillu .

Poor Happy Singh was struggling for release , but Tillu carried him through out his way to kitchen , holding his delicate ears brutally , like some carry bag.

" Arey found it in garden , it was playing , very intelligently I hunted it " Tillu said patting himself.

" It looks so healthy , i will prepare masala for curry " Cook said salivating at happy Singh.

" let me feed its last meal " Tillu said offering a carrot to happy Singh dying in his iron grip .

Once masala was made , Tillu took knife to slaught happy Singh , he placed knife on happy Singh neck and was ready to slay it .

A solid kick on his back , made him land in masala , happy Singh who got freedom finally hid I a corner out of fear .

" That's my babies pet , how dare you ?? " Abeer gripped Tillus shirt ,

" I got it garden , so I was .. " Tunnu stuttered , trying to free himself

" oh ,is it ?? I got you in kitchen , shall I show you ?? What I am capable of " Abeer took knife lying on floor .

Cook who just went to to store room returned with spices required for curry , jumping in happiness .

" Tunnu, lucky we are few spices are still left , I can't wait to cook it , where is masala " Cook said entering room and was shocked to see his masala on floor.

" What happened ?? , now how will I cook it , I can't wait more to have it " he said in disappointment .

Meher who was standing behind Abeer stepped in and raged to cook in anger , she caught his left hand little finger and mercilessly twisted it

" you can't wait to eat my happy Singh !?? , how dare you, I will show you what to do with rest masala , she applied masala to cooks hand and threatened him , saying she will fry his hand in boiling oil.

Abeer was scared of this Meher only , he left Tillu and took situation into his hands calming her .

Once everything was settees , they left to their room taking happy Singh with them. Poor happy Singh who was scared to death, was still shivering not was not leaving Meher , which was testing Abeer .

Testing his last ounce of patience , Meher tied her anklets to happy sigh which makes sound , to keep a track. of its moves. Abeer used cotton balls to block his audibility to get rid of noise Happy's wander was creating.


" Abeer !! " Meher called him, he didn't respond .

" Abeer ..." She called him again

Abeer didn't respond and was staring through window into garden. Reminiscing how irritating Rabbit if mehers made him search entire garden almost 1 hour .

Meher thought Abeer was not responding , bcz he was angry on her , she strode to him ,leaned forward and hugged him from back .

Abeer leaned back closing his eyes , " what happened baby?? " he questioned

" are you still angry on me ?? " she questioned .

Abeer clasped her wrist , pulled her front making her land in his lap .

He then removes cotton balls and threw them away. Meher looked at him narrowing her eyes.

" so you were not angry ?? " Meher shot

Abeer looked confused and then smiled . " why will I be angry baby " Abeer questioned back and pecked her lips .

Meher wrapped her arms around his neck " woh bcz of happy Singh ?? " she queried hesitantly .

Abeer gave a drained look and asked her to leave the topic . To energize him back , Meher kissed him on his lips . After sharing a passionate kiss both stayed together in each other arms for some time . Later they went out to Rome locking happy Singh in room.



End of update

I will not ask how it is !! 😆 I know it was utter crapy, bear with this chapter alone . Drop ur precious comments and hit like button. Bye take care .





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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
Gurleen-CID perfect match 🤣


Once again brilliant update

I am falling for this story


Awesome

First of all abeer is pissed of with happy Singh upar se meher added anklets 🤣


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -.serendipity.-

Awesome job Madhu. Keep writing!


Thank you kiret 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: malikakas

heheh...yeh kya.. Mehbeer ki love story too easy tho woh bhaag gaye..🤣


Hahaha, yeah they are crazy 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: --fero--

Gurleen-CID perfect match 🤣


Once again brilliant update

I am falling for this story


Awesome

First of all abeer is pissed of with happy Singh upar se meher added anklets 🤣



Correct match na , Gurleen for role 🤣
Bechara Abeer ,Kya Kya Sehna pasega 😆

Thank u so much for lovely comment 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
awesome updt didu
loved it so much
beautifully written
loved gurleen entry
eageerly waitting to read more
plz do continue soon
nd thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
I can't believe you actually told everyone to keep their mouths shut. How long did you think that was going to work? 🤣🤣
And out of all the scenes you had to give me one with Shyam? Aur woh bhi angry bird wala? 🤣🤣

Aur CID ka itna bada fan bana jo mein shayad asal zindagi mein bhi na ho. 🤣

Honestly aaj teri toh khair nahi. 🤣🤣

(But on a serious note, keep it up! :D)

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